VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Escort [Final v1.01 SE] [DrFronkonstinMD]

I really like the game. Not only is the model very nice-looking, she's also very unique, and the facial expressions are various in a cool way. A lot of work is obviously put into this, which I really like. The story is still at a very early stage, is seems very simple for now, which can be a very good thing if done right.

PROS
+Writing
+Posing / facial expressions
+Renders

CONS
-Animation is rudimentary
-Too short! More of this please
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Filler text ->> I'm asked to write more than two hundred characters. There.

Good game, short and sweet. shows a lot of potential for a larger one, but even if content is not expanded on much more still quite a good little game.

Art is of good quality, and girl is hot.

Writing is fine, story may be too simple or unrealistic for some but it serves it's role.

Did not run into any crashes or bugs

Only downside is that it is too short.


TLDR: I r8 8/8 m8, cant w8 for next upd8

Reviewing v. 0.7 :
Story is way too short but it's fun and I kinda love everything about it.
renders are in a great great quality, Jen's model is very very beautiful, I'd like to see her in other games too.
it has potential to be one of the greatest titles if developer continue doing this good work, it could take a little bit more to reach the sex part, they could do like more intimate/dirty talking, playing, showering or maybe ordering food they wanted to go out for to be delivered and expand the story.

It's OK - I know its a short story...but way too short.
Great premise - accidental arrival of sister at hotel room as an escort, but such a wasted opportunity.
Escalates far too quickly - would have been great to see some more foreplay. Perhaps showering together, mutual masturbation, then further escalation. Instead we kind of go from "ewww its my sister" to some average dialogue, to fucking.

What can I say, its more of demo then anything else but has very huge potential. Whole first chapter will need to be redon in long run. Instead of starting right of hotel we first should get know protagonist and main characters.. Again it has huge potential to become great love story.. My only wish would be making protagonist bit more "Cooler" even if he is virgin.

Those who like Incest love story gonna love this game.

Short and sweet, but I can see the potential.

The character model looks nice and the dialogue also flows well.

No sexual content but as mentioned previously, it is just a demo to set the story intro, looking forward to the future updates.

Loved the go home ending too!

Keep up the good work!!

This game has huge potential, the main girl (only girl) looks amazing, she's a very unique model I have yet to see in any other game. The dialogue is fantastic with no grammatical errors that I could see and while the story isn't hugely unique (for those that know hentai), the story is interesting enough to keep you captivated. I have very high hopes for this game and the dev. For those not looking at the tags, there is no sexual content as of yet though, so if you don't want to try a new game just to scout it out for future interest, wait awhile.