VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The Escort [Final v1.01 SE] [DrFronkonstinMD]

Honestly surprised by this game, as i didn't expect anything really extraordinary from such a short game, especially when using Daz3D models.

Basically, it's a short, well-made showcase demo to represent the quality and design skills of its author. A very wise decision, as many jump ahead and try to make a large-scale game without testing the waters first.

Visuals are great, definitely above average. While the models might have a little bit of an exaggerated design, eh, it's good-looking and definitely fits well with the rather short, quick and done storyline.

Writing wise, i gotta say i'm impressed as well. Both characters are pretty damn natural and well-written in terms of dialogue and although many might critique the build-up as way too fast (which is fair, as it is really fast), meh, it's a necessary decision to fit the story into a short showcase demo and i'm personally a fan of it. No overdrawn, lengthy dialogues with people constantly dodging and going the long way around to get their point across. And also, a healthy dose of humor.

Sex stuff is pretty good too, and well animated. Might be worth adding more interactability and poses to them, so we can get more juicy stuff out of it.

Gameplay wise, nothing really to judge honestly. There is a few branching points, with only one being really plump in content. So consider it a kinetic novel.

Overall, a pretty promising premise, and definitely worth keeping an eye out for it's creator for future projects.

It's a well-made, fun and short incest kinetic novel with a couple of branches. I'm only taking off a point in the rating because the build-up to the sex is a bit lacking. I feel it could have been a lot hotter with some more teasing, flirting, foreplay.

Not the longest game, but really good models, excellent scenes, and really sweet and engaging story.

There could be a greater veriaty in the 4 paths cuz there is no big diffrence between three of them. Only a scene or 2 different. But the other factors make up for that shortcomming

Nice little game, very short, simple premise and story but well writen and effective. Not my personal kink but the whole situation must be very hot for someone with that kink, the LI is extremely attractive and the renders are good. All around a nice first game for a dev that shows a lot of promise for a future bigger and more ambitious project, keep up the good work !

Short and sweet, the renders are nicely done and the sister is very attractive. The dialogue is quite good for the most part, maybe a bit too heavy-handed from the sister but of course you can't really build it slowly since it's supposed to be a short-story and wants to get to the point quickly.

Some really nice and creative angles which is refreshing to see despite only using cowgirl and missionary sex positions. The PoV experience worked really well. Another great thing to see is that the sister has many different facial expressions which is always nice and makes her feel more alive. Although I think the faces she makes during orgasms were a bit too exaggerated for my taste. Delicate and subtle usually adds more depth and realism than exaggerated "ahegao" type expressions.

Really my only other "complaints" are her boobs, they are a bit too big for my taste. Makes her look like a cartoon bimbo, just not my preference.
And also in a few frames the iris part of her eyes were a bit too close together which made her look slightly cross-eyed. But that was only 1 or 2 frames, no biggie.

A short game that achieves what it set out to do.

The premise is a little silly but it'll do. When it comes to dialogue, well it's the conversation between a virgin and a more experienced sister. It's a pretty heavy kissless virgin trope that's not gonna entice everyone, yet it's a little sweet with how they go about it.

As for sex, it's absolutely decent although I found it to be a little clunky and the sister is thicc so you gotta be into that type of thing.

All in all, a decent game but if you're not into playing a kissless virgin, you're not gonna enjoy it.

Short but sweet, it is what it says on the box - quick kinetic novel with incest theme.

Sex was pretty hot, dev managed to pull off POV with some good angles, plenty or renders, and some hand-picked assets(like the insertion frames changing/morphing dick model).
Hope dev will do some more stuff in the future.

A short and nice incest game. I like the main girl's model. The writing is good. Overall a very enjoyable experience.

My only nitpick is the lack of visible cum shots. The titfuck finish is perfect so I have no idea why the dev left out the other cum shot. I wanna see the cream pie.

The vast majority of games on this site waste hours upon hours failing to do what this game does in twenty minutes. Snappy dialogue, a (semi) realistically proportioned woman, a dash of humor and fantastic sex animations. Whomever didn't give this five stars should be ashamed of themselves.

Short visual novel with just a couple of choices. Excellent for what it trying to be. Cute story, sexy girl, and great music choices. Well worth your time. Hoping this developer does a lot more in the future. Loved it.

This is a very short AVN, but not a rushed one. [It reminded me of a Harper & Max video with a rather similar plotline.] The characters chemistry is established well, and it overall feels quite believable. I loved the sister's looks, even though I usually don't find huge tits very attractive.

Well-written VN that avoided the scope creep trap and gives us a complete, coherent story with a decent amount of branching relative to the size of the project. There's none of the extremes of either hours of tortured self-flagellation before doing what it was clear from the outset they were going to do or creepy, boundary-ignoring behavior by one character before ultimately wearing down the other character's resistance. Circumstances forced the characters to admit a mutual attraction and they chose to act on it as competent, consenting adults.

The VN has a great grafic! Sadly it´s only a short story.
You could continue to use the story. I would also like to see more of the mother.
In my personal opinion, the breasts are too big, but you can argue about taste, as you know.
I look forward to the next release.

The thing that really impresses me about this one is the art style. Often times you see the same old styles and overutilized assets from a dozen previous games, just rearranged, but this one is different. The story is a variation on a theme, but the author does a good job, and overall this is a pretty good effort on the part of the developer.

This is for Finalv1.0 ...renders are great. The sisters model is 10/10. Story wise its short as shit as it was intended but packed with the info you need to know why this happened so fast. Learned the virgin tag is used for MCs because I wanted to see how the dev pulled that one off with an escort but he's a dr and not god. all in all fun little 10 minute game

It was a very fun short game and i loved it. We need more like this one, so many games tend to build tons of nonsense and eventually the dev ends leaving the game undone and lots of characters without content. With a game like this we have a good fun and fap and its all good. Pretty good renders, a beautiful girl and a hot porn story, Well done dev, you really understand what f95 is about!

Short VN, but the developer is extremely promising. Highly recommended short novel, if you're into character models with voluptuous proportions. While short, the story was wholesome, but is centered towards certain fetishes like for example, incest.

Overall, a 5/5 from me, because while it was short, it provided everything it needed to and stayed to its promises in the tags. Looking forward to the new work of this developer.

Great game, short, but I love the small branching stories to go down, all worth exploring and you actually end up caring for this duo. She's a freak in the best way and actually loves her brother as a brother and more.

I really like the game. Not only is the model very nice-looking, she's also very unique, and the facial expressions are various in a cool way. A lot of work is obviously put into this, which I really like. The story is still at a very early stage, is seems very simple for now, which can be a very good thing if done right.

PROS
+Writing
+Posing / facial expressions
+Renders

CONS
-Animation is rudimentary
-Too short! More of this please
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