The Family Manor [Development]

[Evil Productions]

So I'm giving a different art program a try and redrew the Mary Image from earlier and want to know. Which looks better?

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I know I need to make the top hair in option two a bit smaller cause it looks like she has a massive head. Any other issues you see that I don't let me know.

 

[kev88]

So I'm giving a different art program a try and redrew the Mary Image from earlier and want to know. Which looks better?

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I know I need to make the top hair in option two a bit smaller cause it looks like she has a massive head. Any other issues you see that I don't let me know.

I find option 2 better

 

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So I'm giving a different art program a try and redrew the Mary Image from earlier and want to know. Which looks better?

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I know I need to make the top hair in option two a bit smaller cause it looks like she has a massive head. Any other issues you see that I don't let me know.

Option 2 mate.

 

[Evil Productions]

Doing some coloring now, still a lot to do but I have to leave the computer for a bit
Eyes are up to be changed again so ignore them for now
But here is a little tease

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[_OBLIVION_]

Doing some coloring now, still a lot to do but I have to leave the computer for a bit
Eyes are up to be changed again so ignore them for now
But here is a little tease

Spoiler: Tease

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Don't forget to give her big areolas.

 

[Evil Productions]

Don't forget to give her big areolas.

Will do. And even though I am making the nude version it won't be shown off. Can't reveal every part of a character quite yet

 

[Evil Productions]

Gotta say, writing for the general events is gonna be helpful for when it's the character's turn. Getting a feel for how the characters will talk and act for the Neutral, Trust, and Corrupt path and even more so when talking to each other will make future writing for them go a lot easier.

 

[kev88]

Gotta say, writing for the general events is gonna be helpful for when it's the character's turn. Getting a feel for how the characters will talk and act for the Neutral, Trust, and Corrupt path and even more so when talking to each other will make future writing for them go a lot easier.

And where are you roughly in the writing of the story?

 

[Evil Productions]

And where are you roughly in the writing of the story?

If I was to give a rough % I would say about 16% this week I'm gonna try to get the general events dialog finished.

Just have 2 1/2 holiday events, group events and endings to write for with the general events.

Luckily the writing for the character specific events will go quicker seeing how I'm writing for at most 1-3 characters. The rough writing % will change soon

 

[kev88]

If I was to give a rough % I would say about 16% this week I'm gonna try to get the general events dialog finished.

Just have 2 1/2 holiday events, group events and endings to write for with the general events.

Luckily the writing for the character specific events will go quicker seeing how I'm writing for at most 1-3 characters. The rough writing % will change soon

Okay, and do you already have an idea of the number of events per character there will be?

 

[Evil Productions]

Okay, and do you already have an idea of the number of events per character there will be?

During normal gameplay each character will have 20 events, not including special events. And as for scenes that is a lot harder to say for now. Cause while writing high chance I might change one or add extra parts too it.

I am also thinking of adding secret scenes that the merchant will sell you when you meet the requirements

 

[kev88]

During normal gameplay each character will have 20 events, not including special events. And as for scenes that is a lot harder to say for now. Cause while writing high chance I might change one or add extra parts too it.

I am also thinking of adding secret scenes that the merchant will sell you when you meet the requirements

Okay, so the animals will also have 20 scenes? And will the secret scenes be for Mary and the others?

 

[Evil Productions]

Okay, so the animals will also have 20 scenes? And will the secret scenes be for Mary and the others?

Animals events wont be 20, but the scene count for all events will most likely be past 20.
The secret scenes I will aim for everyone to have at least 2, but I can't make a promise on that. What I can say is the secret scenes are scenes that the MC could not have been around for, wasn't aware of, or lastly couldn't fit in with the current timeline of the game.

Some examples:
Janice with her father
Janice and Velvet's time while being trained for the police
Mary walking in on the affair
Abigail getting punished by her mother

Just to name a few

 

[kev88]

Animals events wont be 20, but the scene count for all events will most likely be past 20.
The secret scenes I will aim for everyone to have at least 2, but I can't make a promise on that. What I can say is the secret scenes are scenes that the MC could not have been around for, wasn't aware of, or lastly couldn't fit in with the current timeline of the game.

Some examples:
Janice with her father
Janice and Velvet's time while being trained for the police
Mary walking in on the affair
Abigail getting punished by her mother

Just to name a few

So he could have them with Mary too?

 

[Evil Productions]

So he could have them with Mary too?

No, in a sense it the scenes are like memories of incidents that already happened without the MC

 

[kev88]

No, in a sense it the scenes are like memories of incidents that already happened without the MC

So it would be scenes with Mary and the other women without Joseph, is that right?

 

[Evil Productions]

So it would be scenes with Mary and the other women without Joseph, is that right?

Yeah

 

[kev88]

Yeah

And who would these scenes with be other male characters?

 

[Evil Productions]

And who would these scenes with be other male characters?

Men, women, animal whatever i feel like the scene should call for.

 

[kev88]

Men, women, animal whatever i feel like the scene should call for.

So we could have new male characters?