VN - Ren'Py - The Fiery Scion [Update 22c] [Vander]

English: 6
User Interface: 8
User Experience: 4
Art: 6
Dialogue: 4
Story: 7
Opinion: 3
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Avg: 5.43/10

Before I start my playthrough, all I remember about this story is my comments getting attacked in the forums. This story puts the ugliest MC in an isolated bubble, being the only man with a working penis in a 40 mile radius. His ego inflates immediately, and acts like a spoiled child when told no or asked to marry a princess he's already attracted to. He was rescued as a child, you'd think he'd be humbled and patient, but no. As soon as he's told, and I'm not making this up, that he can't cum inside all the maids because a waning lord's home can't afford to hire new help due to mass maternity leave, he actively whines about it. And not only does no one say anything to him, they backpeddle and coddle him. This is absurd, and screams incel. This weird "I'm an alpha male, but only by default, now give me chicken tendies" type person and I just do not like any of the dialogue. At least anything pertaining to sex or intimacy. In an AVN... That's unfotunate. It has this feeling of screaming "I have to be dominant at all times and if I'm not you're undermining my masculinity and I'm going to cry about it." I really could go on for a long time about the inferiority complex the MC has, but I do have to point out good things too. Like the world building. I think the world and lore is written very well. It does have an air of believability about it. I honestly think that if the MC was written better, and the English was written by someone that speaks English, this would be one of my favorites on this site.

On to the plot establishment. MC was locked in a tower to control his powers for 13 years. He, being an orphan, wants to start a family with his fiance and daughter. (But also has a serious impregnation fetish that actually negatively impacts the dialogue and story)There was a curse that made it so men are scarce and and it will be easy for him to have any woman he wants. Even though his face looks like overcooked bacon dragged across sandpaper. Bro says he's 25 but doesn't look a day younger than 60. Yikes. And his character flaws manifest immediately. In the intro, he asks about Karla, the fiance, and Athagan says "Once we get back, we'll contact her." And MC, in his usual fashion, says "NO LETS DO IT NOW." And, get used to this as well, Athagan rolls over and gives him what he wants. So much of the intro is just MC getting reward after reward for just existing, and it goes on forever. Everyone tells MC his brick wall of a face is attractive, it's a little laughable. It gets to the point I want to believe MC is having a fever dream the whole game about a better life outside of the tower. But let's be real, having a joke ending like that is wishful thinking. I'm not exactly sure about what the size of each update is, but the early game cements my distaste of MC's personality when he learns about the orphanage's money trouble. His face contorts in pure rage as something that isn't to his liking happens. He storms off to yell at daddy dearest. When he gets there, Athagan asks if his issue is urgent, MC admits it's not but he'll throw a fit if he's not heard immediately. I want to say, the idealism isn't lost on me, but the way MC handles everything is in poor taste and he always comes across as a man-baby. And the problem is solved by coincidence so it feels a little cheap.

The next bit of story is a little boring, MC forming his party. Avila's shopping spree, meeting Kes, Erika, and Monica is a lot of idle pleasantries. While I hope it's just to rush it out of the way for better story later, as per usual, it all just falls into MC's lap so easily. Hell, even a god intervenes to give MC a party member. That is instantly in love with him, mind you. I shouldn't have to tell anyone how tired of "instantly in love with MC" I am. I will say, the only almost funny part in the story is in the tavern when MC scares everyone with fire. Then the first of many bath scenes... Liliana reprimands her daughter for being self conscious and not show her body? It becomes an active argument, it's ridiculous. I understand the situation, there aren't many men so have lots of sex. But actively punishing someone for being reserved is stupid. Leading up to "awarding" Avila to MC because he exists? Never mind the fact this EXACT SITUATION happens again with the princess later only for MC to throw a hissy fit. Anyway, this section leads up to the party's first mission. They perfectly know where the bad guy is and catch him trying to assault another slave to add to MC's numbers after they beat the guy in three hits. Could have been interesting, could have been a tough battle, could have not also had them rewarded with the stuff the bad guy was gonna steal. But no. As per usual, MC can't work for anything. And then rewarded with more sex. I don't understand the MC either, he hates when women are sexually forward but that's all Karla is, and anyone but him making a sexual comment turns him off, but somehow he also loves it when they do? There's no consistency and it's frankly annoying. Do you see how I mean the MC is written poorly?

Eventually, you move onto Karla showing up. You get a semi-emotional reunion with Karla and Maria, I'll give it that. But Karla is the horny brain insert, never mind almost every other character doing it as well. Anyway, this point in the story is boring "Everything we said we were gonna do, we're doing now. So walk set piece to set piece, establishing what? That Karla is here? That was already said. All this leads to the second mission and the queen's visit. Second mission? MC knocked out and problem solved with him blacked out. And he brought a slave to get pandered with sex. Because god forbid there's more than 10 minutes without nudity. Then Aoife, the poorly named servant, threatens her best friend with actual death because she said "Stop hamming it up" as they had sex in front of everyone. It's honestly ridiculous. And even this far into the game it still zooms into MC's dick, I just don't get it. And Monica's entire "arc" is MC is the only decent man for miles and MC thinks she's hot. Cool. Leading to the queen scene... "I don't like being told what to do" and "JUST BECAUSE I WANT TO HAVE SEX AND ALWAYS WANT TO HAVE SEX DOESN'T MEAN I'LL HAVE SEX AT THE DROP OF A HAT." He's a spoiled brat with the face of 60 year old, give me a break. He has certain responsibilities now being the son of a lord, and its absolutely stupid after him talking about the declining birthrates not two nights prior. Marry the damn princess you stupid man-child. Men would be a commodity so fuck his temper tantrum. Both of them. As he yells at Sarah too just out of association. And the brain dead take that "She was mind controlled and his reaction was justified" is just that. Brain dead.

Its also around that point the English completely falls apart. The early bits of the story, I almost thought that there wasn't English issues. But my god, it becomes almost taxing to read. And eventually a woman tells MC no, something he said he'd never disrespect, and does the typical rapey "Oh.. A challenge." Just absolute slop. And its from here on out I just mentally check out. Nothing feels important, repeating information over an over everyone's naked most of the time, and anything serious is overshadowed by MC's horny brain or just plain putting it off until they can actually come up with details. And through the games MC, a person in power, shows favoritism to contestants. He literally does everything you shouldn't. And they watch the fights... But only see Cinthia at the end? That's not how tournaments work. Then another mission and MC is naked the whole fucking time. My god. I can't take it, there is no logical reason for them to have gotten naked, had sex, or stayed naked. Is it supposed to be funny? Because the one joke of this VN already happened, it fell flat. Virus outbreak, more nudity, MC uses his position to coerce Estrid just like he said he wouldn't. I'm not surprised or interested at this point, so all I'm gonna do is summarize and be done with this for my own sanity.

The English struggles. I think it sort of gets better closer to end of content, but I was honestly checked out and just noticed less. The UI is almost great. Names desperately need a black outline. The entire world and all the clothes are light brown. And the name of MC and all either no name characters are light beige and you can't see who's talking half the time. Otherwise, thank you for making a custom UI. The UX is fine, standard renpy bunch of non choices though. The art is fine, not the best honey select and looking at MC's neanderthal face is a lot to take in. The dialogue is almost great. WHEN IT'S NOT ABOUT SEX. But there's a lot of that in this. Listening to MC ogle the women and the skin crawling sex talk is not fun. The story is good, I like it, I wish the story took more precedence in this. But I think I made it clear why I don't like this. sue me.

This is one of my favorite VN's thus far. Good story and great visuals. If you're a lover of escaping into a fantasy world. Give this one a shot. While you're at it do yourself a favor and check out:

Homelander
Serenity
Last Human

Thanks for sharing your vision and world with us.

i love it. its a wonderful story. renders are quite good and you can dive into story like a good movie . characters are good. You definitly should try it. I cant describe it because of my English. But trust me and give it a try.

It's a good harem power fantasy story. The characters are likable and most have personality/some depth and with adventuring there is something to mix it up and see. Overall I enjoy the read.

The models are not good however. It seems like 3 or 4 fem chars were handmade and the rest just random rolled in char creation. That would be fine for minor roles and maybe random concubines but even a princess and some party members are like that.
E.g. Monica (girl left in banner) somehow looks as plain as 1996 Tomb Raider, just with rounder boobs.

Renders are passable. The lighting is often either very dark or high contrast. It's very hard to do right though and the brain fills in sufficiently

Updated Review for 15d

I had a hard time getting into this when I first played it, but mentioned I'd maybe give it another go down the line. I have now pushed about an hour past where I first left off, and unfortunately I still feel largely the same. This game is not for me.

The Fiery Scion is maybe one of the most textbook power fantasy AVNs I have played on the site, almost sickeningly so honestly. Fresh out of a 13 year isolation where we trained our inherent mage powers, we emerge into a world where every single thing is handed to you on a silver platter.

Our teacher was a legendary hero, now lord of a small town. Naturally this means he conveniently has pretty much every resource we might need. Immediately he offers us an entire wing of his castle for us to live and build a harem in, and then later even offers us both his daughter in marriage and to formally adopt us so we can become the towns new ruler. Men are also a rarity in this world, which means every single woman immediately wants to fuck us and bare our children. Now keep in mind our master also got his dick cut off by a demon, so this extends to his many female servants as well.

It's a rare thing for male MCs to look decent, but man the protagonist in this one is actually so butt-ugly that it's making it even harder to take this game seriously. The game states our character is 25, but in a large amount of renders he has the face of 40 year old background thug #3. Combined with the fact that he just has no real charm to back it up, it feels comical more than anything to me. I don't find him a very interesting character to play as.

The games renders are very average, which means I'd be looking at the writing a lot more to make up for that. Unfortunately it does not carry enough for me. There is clearly some thought being put into the world and characters, but a lot of the dialogue felt weak. I'm not sure how much of it is due to translation, but often times I found the dialogue awkward, weirdly crude, or even juvenile at points. The few moments of action were over as quick as they started, and to be frank just aren't that impressive as action scenes. The rest of what I played was sitting in town as the MC gets handed more and more things while all the women fawn over him.

I just don't find this very compelling at the end of the day. I suppose it does its job of being a power fantasy, but I find every aspect of it so painfully average that I've now dropped the game for good.

This is the D&D Campaign I wanted to live since puberty. The story, characters, and world building have all been top notch. There are games with far better renders but few have such a compelling story to keep your interest. The writing is quite well done, though a native proofreader wouldn't be amiss as there are a couple typos and places where the sentence structure is out of order, but nowhere did I struggle to understand what was going on.

Probably the best fantasy romp I've played here, and I think it's unlikely I'll find one I enjoy more. This sets a high bar.

This one is another potential gem.

It may not be everyone's cup of tea, mostly due to the renders/graphics, but it's still very good all in all.

This one, has a lot of sexy time, and despite that, it remains nice. It's not repetitive like other creampie simulator.

The story, while pretty simply so far, still keeps one's attention to it. Despite being fantasy, in the context, it remains fairly believable as well.

One could complain the MC is a bit too nice to the girls, it is somehow done well, and it does not feel like he's simping or being a beta either.

The only problem I have, is the amount of large breasts and butts, which is not my thing, but the girl's personalities are pretty good, so it compensates somehow.

There's a little over 5hours of content give or take as of V5b, which is a fair amount. A lot of sex scenes, quite a lot of girls as well.

There's potentially even more content, but I turned off the lesbian only scenes since it's not my thing.

A father figure that has a good, respectful relationship with the MC AND doesn't get killed off during the intro? Nice, love it!

Ok, mostly i love the diverse cast and thoughtful worldbuiling. The girls are hot and have personality. The world is interesting and feels internally consistent - i know almost nobody cares about this very much but i love they have actual battle tactics, strengths&weaknesses, the magic system, camping, setting up night watches - all the little details that often get glossed over are here. MC ist the leader but NOT all powerful etc. Even the "men are quite rare"-curse is well explained and fit into the world building, in many instances going beyond the usual reason 'cause we want more chicks throw themselves at the MC' (tho that also happens^^)

The MC is no egoistic manchild that gets off mistreating everyone, but ALSO not a weak, powerless and conflicted guy like some that take it to the other extreme. Powerfull, but not on a power trip. Lots of backbone. Horny, but also a good & respectful man and father.

Graphics are decent to good, not great, but the world and characters feel unique which is more important to me. Sex scenes are mostly warmup to vaginal sex, so the variety lies in the context, dialogue and involved LIs - but that also makes sense since pregnancy is a very strong goal in that world.

So a definite recommendation, looking forward to the next release.

Really good premise. Doesn't look the best and there are quite a few typos but the story and the characters are fairly good. Also the mc isn't a weak pushover. He's actually a variable masculine man which is quite refreshing in these games

Quite a good game, plenty of content and an interesting story.

There were a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing bad.
The only thing I didnt really like was not choosing which women you want (or not want in this case), if that was possible I would have given it 5 stars.

This VN starts out quite well for the first hour or so, with good world building, storytelling and decent enough sex scenes. Unfortunately, it slowly an inexorably goes downhill from there. The dev builds a world where women greatly outnumber men and end up basically throwing themselves at the MC, and the MC only very rarely refuses a woman, whom he makes either an additional wife , concubine or slave, depending on the circumstance. You end up needing a scorecard to tell who is who and lose any connection you might feel to any of the characters.

And some of the wardrobes of some of the characters are just plain bizarre. This is set in a medieval Europe type of setting, but in this world, slaves wear modern french maid outfits, even when traveling for days on dirt roads driving horse drawn carts.

Males in this world seem to have superhuman sexual endurance, able to ejaculate 5-10 times in a single day, every day.

When I finished the novel I was very disappointed What started out to be an interesting and very promising story became a simple endless loop of meet women, bed woman, add woman to household.

4-5 stars for the beginning, 1 star for the how it ends up, final rating of 3.

[Rev @ The Fiery Scion Update 4a]

Mmmm. yep, that'll do.

Art's nice. Some minor weirdness with fabrics and flat backgrounds but if yer starin at drapes in a porn game yer doin it wrong.

Writing is enjoyable. Scenario and narrative aren't the most novel, but handled well. Characterization is endearing. I will come back and find a way to nuke this rating to zero stars if Lord Dad is killed prematurely or poorly; he's one of my favorite characters. The one major gripe I have is that I don't care to see blood and gore in my porn game (particularly against women) and the couple instances of nuking the bandits from afar without even hailing them doesn't quite seem in-character.

Porn was very nice. Hope for more girl/girl and group sessions, but otherwise I very much enjoyed the proceedings. Reader beware: I have an impregnation fetish and so does about half the cast, so if that's not your bag you may not get the enjoyment I did.

Gameplay wasn't relevant: it's a VN and my usual gripes about those was washed away with the enjoyment on hand.

TLDR: Fuck yes.

Really enjoyable. If you're into breeding as a fetish this seems like it'll be full of it. Renders are workable and the writing is coherent and has very minimal mistakes, it furthers the story rather than pulling the reader out.

I love the concept and pretty much everything about it. If just the translation would be a bit better it would get 5 stars from me. The english is still good enough to not throw you out of the reading flow, but it is definitely noticable that there is room for improvements in terms of proofreading cause there are a bunch of typos and errors that happen when you write quickly and dont check what you wrote. I love that this game has a focus on family building and that you can actually see some cute children which is a very rare thing on this site.

If the theme and the tags look good to you give it a try.

First, the things I don't like.

- Subjectively, I don't like two of the kinks that have a strong presence. First, the girls have very hairy pussies. Like, whole ass forests down there. Second, pregnancy/breeding. I won't hold it against the game since everyone has different tastes, but for me both are turn offs.

- The writing, while decent in concept, is paced oddly with sometimes too much focus on the mundane, as well as being filled with spelling and grammatical errors.

- The renders range from bad to okay. The shadows often have jagged edges which is especially noticeable when they are on a characters face. In general the world looks a bit grainy and dark.

- The MC is a bit too nice and vanilla, I think; he goes out of his way to ask multiple times for consent from each girl. It's a porn game. Consent is implied, lol. It's fine if you don't want rape in your game, but I think this veers too far the other way.

Now, things I did like!

+ I really appreciate that the game has NSFW content outside of just the sex scenes. A lot of conversations and world building is done with women who are just casually nude, or close to it, which makes getting through blocks of dialogue much more... Engaging, let's say. It's something I wish more games would do.

+ MC has a personality. As I noted above, I think he's a bit too much of a pussy, but I'll take a hundred of this guy over just another lifeless insert you can find in any other game.

+ World building is well done. You aren't hit of the head with a massive block of text explaining everything in detail, rather, it is provided over time with a lot of showing rather than telling. Likewise, the setting itself is fairly interesting, and I like that it's based on D&D.

+ Having a large harem is great. The more the merrier, as far as I'm concerned. Wives, maids, slaves, fuck buddies, queens (hopefully... she has the best character model in the whole game), it's all great.

Overall, I absolutely think the positives outweigh the negatives. Yes, you can find better looking games. Yes, you can find better written games. But I think this game has an X factor that's hard to put in words; maybe call it passion, because I think it's obvious that this is a labor of love.

Fantasy, Harem, Pregnancy these things caught my interest.
The beautiful visuals, the hairy pussys (which are far too rare in games) in the previews got my attention.
But what made me fall in love with this game is its heart and humor. The game is filled with heartwarming, touching, and funny scenes that make you feel relaxed and at home playing the game.
The sex scenes, and the promise of the pregnancies to come resulting from them are very hot, but they are not the main draw of this game. Important and great yes, but if you're only going to skip all the talking and not pay attention to the characters or story, you're not going to have a good time. The story and the characters telling it, are the core attraction.

The general story and world ideas aren't unique, and will be familar to many. The approach however is fresh and stands on its own. This story and world are its own. The story, as of Update 1b is really just begining, the seeds well planted for what is to come. Aspects are familiar, sure, but there's a great feeling of freedom and openess, and you can't help but wonder where the story is going to go from here, how it and the characters will develop.

The heart and humor are ever present, even in not apparent. They ground all the scenes and the characters. They given them depth. The love and care between the various characters both explicitly and passivly, really remind you that these people are people, and what it is you as the main character are fighting for and to protect.

The only two small negatives I could mention are there are some language issues, due to the author writing in a language not their own, these can be a little jarring to start and get less common as the game goes on, but more they get lost behind rest of the game. You don't really pay them much attention because you're busy with what's actually happening. Nothing is lost or the lesser for these issues. The jokes and humor shine as brightly as they ever would

And the current, as of Update 1b, lack of player choice. I wouldn't go so far as to call this a Kinetic Novel, there are choices at times though they are very few. This should, I hope, change in coming updates. As it stands, player input is required enough to not make one feel removed from the story and only an observer.

A neutral issue for me, is there's no audio at all in the game. No music, no sound effects.

I'll start by saying that there's potential here, potential that I think the developer can realize given enough time, but for now it's decidedly your average F95 game.

The renders are your average fare, though some characters look straight out of the Uncanny Valley (the captain of the guard comes to mind as an example.)

The writing is... impatient, I would say. The pacing is fast, we're getting introduced to all these characters and concepts and worldbuilding and it never really slows down. It's missing some downtime, so more relationship building and calmer storytelling. Another thing needed is a proofreader, urgently.

I quite like the premise, not to say similar things haven't been done before but there are definitely fresh ideas here too. We'll just have to see where it goes. Same with the characters, really.

In short, I'm going to keep an eye on this game because it's definitely interesting, but for now 3 stars seems like a fair assessment of its quality.

I like it

The story is good and feels unique, how it's implemented feels like the VN is it's own universe in the making, the characters all have different personalities which is something I constantly look for, I can see this being a favorite of a lot of people, favourite character so far is kes, I want to know more about her and build a impactful relationship with her, though Monica is pretty cool to so idk.... Threesome?

Something I can see needs work is dialogue, during sex scenes and normal day to day events it feels very much the same far to often and could be branched out.

No Ntr

Sharing- So the sharing is between the Li only, no other man will touch your women, I know people may not like lesbian content so that's something that should be mentioned, I like lesbian content so I'm different and enjoy it, it's not made to cuck you, its well, from what I've played it's basically 'keep it in the family' type of deal (not incest) though I will recommend the Dev make it optional to appeal to a larger audience but I'm not gonna go on about it more.

Anyway, good luck Dev, hope to see more soon and hope you find success

The MC is a bit too nice for my taste in fantasy setting. Hopefully, he does have a bad side in the future. Still, I'm a sucker for DnD setting so i do wish this game to be a success. The writing is ok but if this is not your niche, you will be bored out of your mind.