[Rev @ v0.2.14]
So much potential, please keep it up!
Art's nice. Want my boob expansion mechanics.
Writing's very good. I had a bit of a stumble because I'm personally not a fan of the setting being TOO near contemporary reality, but that's mitigated by a) not beating me over the head with it, b) actually meaning something to the plot and c) not being preachy about the politics. Characterization is weak at the moment but that's arguably correct for a sandbox and for early versions especially. I did note some inconsistencies with behavior options; you can go commando right off the bat but have to work yourself up to going braless; you shy away from consentual sex with an NPC the PC finds attractive but can be put in a situation where you give your virginity to a rando in a pub in full public view.
The porn I got was good. I see rape tagged and definitely do not care for such, but I never had to deal with it so I'm not bitching about it here. That implies it's avoidable with careful play and I hope that continues to be the case.
TLDR: I like this on a porn and technical level and wish ya godspeed~
So much potential, please keep it up!
Art's nice. Want my boob expansion mechanics.
Writing's very good. I had a bit of a stumble because I'm personally not a fan of the setting being TOO near contemporary reality, but that's mitigated by a) not beating me over the head with it, b) actually meaning something to the plot and c) not being preachy about the politics. Characterization is weak at the moment but that's arguably correct for a sandbox and for early versions especially. I did note some inconsistencies with behavior options; you can go commando right off the bat but have to work yourself up to going braless; you shy away from consentual sex with an NPC the PC finds attractive but can be put in a situation where you give your virginity to a rando in a pub in full public view.
The porn I got was good. I see rape tagged and definitely do not care for such, but I never had to deal with it so I'm not bitching about it here. That implies it's avoidable with careful play and I hope that continues to be the case.
TLDR: I like this on a porn and technical level and wish ya godspeed~