VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Girls of Bluerock Bay [v0.1b] [MrPotatoes]

v0.1
The art is truly fantastic. I am a big fan of it.

The game itself has barely anything to do.
It is a first release of an early demo.

Story... can't tell you, not in the game yet.
Gameplay... can't tell you, not in the game yet.

I really dislike the way this game handles [futa/trans] content.
> Hi, remember me? I am your childhood friend and first love
> Remember how we gave each other our virginities last year?
> So... over the summer I went ahead and magically transformed from female to [futa/trans].
> Anon you wouldn't dump your childhood friend over her growing a cock, would you?

You can choose to avoid the sex scenes with [futa/trans] content.
But to do that requires you to proactively break up with your childhood-friend-first-love
The game is emotionally blackmailing you into not breaking up.

Excellent artwork and a so far interesting intro, I also like the fact that the MC isn't some tiny generic white dude with clear issues.

Honestly loved the start and premise, and can't wait to see what you have in store later on for us.

This looks promising, the art and charcter designs are pretty awesome though I believe the MC's main sprite needs some adjusting.

I hope the author follows the format where there will some girls who are willing to start off as sex friends (Micaela fits the bill and there is history with Ingrid already) before things get serious to allow for some exploration while the routes for other girls who are more reserved (Amber and Andrea fit the bill) take the slow burn approach until you have to make a decision to fully dive in. Two halves a common route with some action and a dedicated route when you decide on the girl you want.

Version: 0.1

Pros

• The art is some of the best I have ever seen in a H Game.
• It features a pretty diverse set of characters to date

Cons

• This first version is so incredibly short that its probably not worth downloading, better to just wait for more updates to release.

Pretty much no content currently, not worth the time to download and start to just see "to be continued" after 2 seconds of choices.

Also, immediate weird futa bulge fetish thing straight in your face a few seconds in without user requesting anything like it.

Pros:
Good art, since it's MrPotatoParty

Cons:
The writing is decidely okay at best. The whole game feels like a very thinly veiled vehicle for the art.
Not a lot of content in V0.1
Not a ton of characterization


All in all, something to keep an eye on since the problems are all very fixable with the right staff, and the art alone is almost enough to carry the game

This ticks a shit ton of boxes for me! Super sexy over-exaggerated female bodies but not so much it's comical. Slutty chicks and possible futa, yes please. A protagonist with a huge dick is always a plus. Keep it coming please.

TL/DR: Next level art, school setting, and great looking MC lead the charge with this prologue. It is hard to say how the game will develop over time, but it has a lot of elements which are novel in the porn game industry so it has quite a lot of potential to carve out a nice niche.

Pros:
~Large Attractive Protagonist. Huge pro... like 95% of VN with male mc feature some reedy nerdy manlet. This MC is refreshingly attractive and it leads to some really hot scene content.
~MC is large- but also seems like a good dude and isn't just some fucking simpleton meathead.
~Scene content and art in general is next level.
~Comic book approach to the art with panels gives the VN its own style and appeal.
~Features a good variety of different tropes and body types in LI
~Prose was well written. Characters are well differentiated.

Speculative cons:
~Writer will need to be careful to provide narrative tensions and plot devices that provide challenge to the MC. His size and attractiveness gives him a huge leg up on the average weedy loser in a porn VN. As such, the challenges the protagonist faces will need to be different.
~Planned tags will effect if I like this a lot or not. If it ends up being like STS except with a buff dude it'll be great. Other angles could totally ruin it.

Cons:
~Very, very simple narrative at this point. Have to see where that goes over time.
~Description of the scene content was rather short. Could use a little more text / art. Scene started and ended rather expeditiously.

A game from Mrpotatoparty ? What a pleasant surprise !
For the time being :
- Story is simple and rather efficient to this point.
- Female characters are hot and sexy (as expected from this artist).
-MC is an alpha stud (as expected again from this artist).
-Porn scene (for the few there is) seems to be pretty hot.

What could be improved :
-Add colour to character's name for more eye/reading comfort.
- More interactions between characters could be good, like more detailed reactions and more of them during conversations. (I'm being picky here but still).
- Animations could be good during sex scenes as well. But proper ones !! (being picky as well)

Anyway, 5/5. Very eager to see what's next !!!