VN - Ren'Py - The Good Instructor Frenzy [v2.00] [LovelyBone Productions]

Just played through it, some lovely ladies, nice scenes. Wanna see the whole story with Emily and Camilla. At the end at this time the is a little uneven and some things make no sence at all. At the end it feels like "Cassie" wrote the rest of the game, if you know what i mean. Its a little bit like they are out of ideas already. And by the way who made the face of Valerie, she is very ugly. Hope you guys get back on track.

what's up with missing tags? current and future?

cons
1. why does feel like no choices matter. For example, the lesbian scene didn't want to watch and leave but later on, the girl talks to Mc like we still saw it and enjoyed it.

2. forced Li, choices don't matter much
3. is MC stupid or something? see that his friend John and the director are behind girls' modeling.

4. some girls modeling nude are clearly prostitutes or okay with open relationships/ cheating on boyfriends and Mc is just fine with with sleeping around with them. Must like get his dick wet.

few other cons but the most important ones are
forced choices/ choices are misleading,
forced Li/ girls
missing tags
some content always be locked behind a paywall (I understand if releasing content at a much later date but locked until pay isn't a good choice if want people to support you)

pros
renders are decent/ story


so looking for a game to pass your time that is okay not good or bad then play it

As of v. 1.80:

Overall, pretty good from an animations/renders point of view.

Animations/Images - 5/5

Girls look great, animations are fluid and fun to watch. No complaints here.

Story/Dialogue - 2/5

Probably my least favorite here. Dialogue could use some proofreading, and the story is sadly not engaging and difficult to follow, and jumps around quite a bit. Salvageable with some effort.

Gameplay/UI -5/5

While the story isn't great, the dev did give the girls unique personalities, which is a shortcoming in a lot of games and VNs. Kudos to the dev putting in effort here.

All-in-all, the game is worth playing for the animations, and the story is legible, just not great. Not sure if the dev is able and/or willing to go back and polish it, but it would be beneficial if they did. Still, definitely worth playing.

Final score - 4/5

Radical Dreamer

EDIT: Fixed version number.

Over 6Gb for only average images.
No animations?
Colors are just a bit washed out, maybe
The girls are ok but not great looking.
Another worthless MC
Silly storyline that is just bad.
Broken/poor English.

Go to the bar w a friend, meet a girl, 2 hours later she is paying your 1-2 hundred dollar bar tab and wanting to have sex with you and have you stay the night... etc.....

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This has been out for awhile now and the dev is making enough money to hire an editor/proofreader to help. That would be a great start. Since the graphics aren't that great/special they should be lower resolution to save file size--OR---whatever it is that is causing the huge file. Archive.rpa is the big one...

the VN started out great and all even the story was was not half bad and the renders were half decent but that abruptly ended like half through the story the dev decided to put half the story behind a paywall that was the big turn off for me and many others by the looks of it . i get they are trying to make money and all that but their are other ways of going about doing especially the main story if you were to do it for a side story or extras sure but not the main story line and the lewd scenes at that . so with that said if your okay with getting to see only half the story then play it but if not i say skip this or add it to your ignore list this is were it belongs .

I actually have really enjoyed this VN. It is a bit more kinetic, but you do have choices that do make pretty big differences as I have tried different paths with different results with the LIs. So there is choice that matters.

The graphics are solid and the animations continue to get better as the game progresses. The LIs each have personality as does the MC, although his is a bit aloof sometimes.

Overall I have enjoyed the game and it has plenty of things to do.

Started out good with a great potential to be a fun game to play, but i am just not a fan of kinetic stories and since you dont have any kind of options as to who you want to fuck or have a relationship with its just a 100% kinetic story but for some reason there is no tag for it, there might be one or two options to turn down having sex with someone but everything else is just forced.

Take LIs like the cam girl i wouldent want to touch her with a 10ft pole and yet MC is to affride not to go on a live show and play with her....shes even affride that she will get sick if she french kiss MC i mean fuck off why on earth would MC ever even consider being with her for fake sex on a live stream, theres is just absolutly no point to it, he dosent even know her and its not to get with Emily since he already know she has 0 intrest in MC since shes a lesbian and she wants cam girl for her self, so i ask again why......this is really the most stupid part of the hole story.

Same with Emily, when she ask "i know you also want this, right?" if you click "not really" scene goes on just as if you clicked yes, its nothing but fake choices, Emily is a lesbian that dosent want a relationship with him what so ever, she just wants to fuck and yet you cant turn her down and tell her to fuck off instend....really poor writting and lack of choices.

It almost goes without saying but ofc the LIs all trow them selfs at MC, you dont really need to build any romance or anything with most, if any at all.

So if your not into kinetic and LIs forced on you, then this game will not be something you will like.

Lis look good and they have diffrent builds so there is a bit for everyone.

Animations are pretty decent, not great but something you can enjoy.

Music is a nice slow background thing, not mood setting for scenes but still nice and better then silent.

The problem for me is the kinetic feeling, i just hate kinetic games and what makes this even worse is all the fake choices that has 0 meaning, it even has a pointless relationship hearth system, no clue why its there when alot of the relationships are force on you before even gaining any points.

I only give this 1 stars even though it has a nice number of LIs and good looks/builds, and decent animations, but the childish MC thourght process and the number of LIs forced on you and the lack or romance/relationship build-up and by LIs jumping on MC even lesbians, fake choices, game just makes to little sense. and the weird paywall with sex scenes going to black screens is just pointless and it wont help anyone wanting to become a suppoter, so its just stupid and it simply just ruins the game experince overall.

review on 1.00:

The Good:
Nice setup and possiblity of turning into a good game. Not the very best, but still it could be enjoyable .... it COULD BE ...... (but it isn't at all)

The Bad:
ALL really important scenes are behind a paywall. If you play the game like this (and that's what i rate), it's a pure blueball-simulator.

Barely every important scene which would make this game enjoyable, ends with a black screen "this content for patreon only".
If you like your blue balls, then go on - else i would really suggest to ignore this one from now on.

Played this for sometime by holding control and reading a few dialogues.
Forced sex all over the place. Dont understand the need for points and choices. Plus with some girls there is a choice but very few.

Game starts of with a sex scene with an ugly girl. That too a student. The MC, who is the teacher doesnt even think twice before going for it. Great job as a teacher.
Then you move into a flat and lot of horny girls are staying there. Again no choice, game just forces them on you.
Then if this was not enough, your step-sis comes to live with you and surprise surprise, she wants your D.
This game has a bi-polar disorder. Its trying to be a mix of a KN or a VN, but ends up being neither and its just bad. Not recommended if you want to have control over what you want to see.

Ok, I played this for a couple hours, got to the point where you unlock the gallery.

I feel like every moment is very hit and miss, but it's got the the promise of a decently fun game.

Highly recommend finding someone willing to restructure your sentences though, because it often feels like it's very very translated. I also recommend re-doing a lot of the faces that you see in the first hour or so of the game, because god some of them are GHASTLY!

Wish you well, and I hope that that you finish this game, because again, it's decently promising.

Graphics is nice with pretty looking girls with realistic skin rendering. The story is also fine. Has great potential to be in line with other popular games. One thing it lacks is the branching of the story like specific girl or harem path

I'm going to start off with the paywalls are amazingly annoying and the reason this game has such low scores. It feels like the best way to ensure a project gets a lot of bad PR.

With that being said:

The girls are attractive. No crazy faces here.

The English… is not native. It doesn't sound natural.

The MC is a college professor, but seems as dumb as a rock sometimes.

Half-sister or step-sister. Pick one. They mean two different things in English.

When MC had sex with Pam… one shot? If they really had that much tension for that long, I promise it would be more than one round. Could have montaged it happening all night.

When Yui cut her hair… I get that she no longer looks like the normally used model, but she looks like I should be calling her “Sally Joe”. Why would anyone wear braces for “cosmetic purposes”? They wouldn’t.

How can they eat an entire table of food in a few minutes? Talk about suspension of disbelief.

I had hopes for this early on, but the further in the dev cycle it goes, the worse off it is.

I'm going to start off with 3 stars. Frankly because the models are in my opinion far above average and therefore make up for (some) of the writing.

The Good of this game is that all of the girls are pleasing to look at, and are rendered very well. They range in face types, hair types and color, and body shapes. This is good.

The Bad parts however, could prove to be the Achille's heel of this game. The writing. It is juvenile. The game took literally no time to introduce the characters properly, and set up their motivations. Quite literally every girl he comes across has his dick in her mouth or in her hands almost before we know her name. He meets his neighbor for literally 5 seconds before she goes into her house and she has a whole shower monologue about how hes not her type but shes totally gonna let him fuck her. And the MC is no better. He spent 0 minutes thinking about HIS WORK, and all his time fantasyzing about every girl he has met so far.

cringier writing is hard to find.

The visuals are good and the story is interesting enough for a porn game, and the 2 stars are for these aspects.
For the bad part, this game is filled with unavoidable sex. The player dont have a say on whats is happening. I dont know why it has some kind of point system if MC will end up going to dates, giving massages and having sex with the girls no matter what we choose and no matter how hard we try to refuse someone. I tried to pick all the "choices" that seemed to be the wrong ones, and MC still had some kind of sex.
And we also have here that kind of "choice" that only makes you click to see the mandatory dialogue....For me this game its quite kinect novel-ish for my taste and unavoidable sex is a deal breaker.

Rating for version 0.20
Pretty girls, good renders and quite interesting story but the choices have little impact on the action, especially you cannot choose sex partners. Moreover, some events are very unrealistic (like getting a blowjob in the college library from your student whom you just met).

After giving this game a try I quickly got UOP vibes, except our main character is the teacher and not a college student but I'll jump right in.


Story:

We start with the main character looking for a new place to live as he's going to be starting a teaching job the very next day. Normally, most folks take care of that piece of business ahead of time and not last minute but moving on. His "Friend" calls him and invites him out for drinks, then expresses how the MC can't stay him and how useless he is all while calling over a couple of random girls. He then proves that he's even more of a DICK by leaving the MC to front the whole bill after saying "Order anything you want, everything is on me". He pretty much ghosted us for some pussy, but all is not lost because not only does the kind girl named Emily pay for everything but she leads him back to the same apartment building that the MC wanted to rent out and that's how the story begins.

What I didn't like about this game so far is that nearly every girl that the MC saw he gushed over them, stared blankly, whatever you wanna call it it got stale pretty quickly. Another thing I don't like is the Leyla situation, you get a brand new job and your first thought is to get busy with a college student in a empty library? What? He could've been fired, fined and even gone to jail if Leyla was indeed underage. They wasn't being discreet at all and the MC went along with everything, if Anna saw them I'm sure anyone could have and what's worse is that it wasn't avoidable. I get this is a porn game and I don't mind a good BJ scene but there needs to be some sort of consequences. Fucking her off campus would've been more ideal, right?

Renders:

Very Good.

Characters:

Emily is cool, Julia is the fresh18 character, Elianna has the best ass in the game but I'm iffy on her. Camilla is the mystery busy body, Leyla is trouble, Elissa is a camgirl, Yui is your curvy coworker, then there's Amara and Anna who might be the second best option behind Yui. The main character in this game looks average but of course girls are falling for him, don't understand how Devs put all of there time and effort in the female models and leave the male models mediocre and then expect people to believe that he's going to woo everyone. Aside from that his eyes look a bit dark with certain angles, almost like he's demonic.

Animations:

Good.

Sound Effects:

I'm not amused by the rubber ducky sounds during the sex scenes, I don't know if it was put there as a placeholder or the Dev was trying to be humorous but it wasn't funny and it ruined the mood for me.

It seems interesting and has a lot of space for improvement. Lot of girls, the story is easy to understand, renders are decent and there is some choices that characters will remeber/appreciate and gain some hearts from them (should had an tutorial to explain about that), More character development to improve the girls and the story. To improve i will say to the dev to improve the renders because sometimes the faces are weird, the hair of emily on the bar was brown but then changed to blonde and that was weird too, would love to see more impactfull choices and that the girls wouldnt be so slutty. Overall can be a good game with more updates and at same time the dev pay attention to the feedback.

Played v.01001, nice game,

beautiful plot, many possibilities of play are open. The characters are well drawn and interesting

I hope it will be developed further in the future

I really enjoy playing with the male character and I hope there will be more humor and / or awkward situations