Her hands feel soft? She is wearing fckn gauntlets. Ai art should not be accompanied with ai writing.
Not a fan of muscle mommys but the white haired girl looks cute even tho her shoulders must be magnetic or something to hold those armor pieces in the 5th pic.
Ditch the intro and just have the MC be the Archmage's previous apprentice with the Archmage fucking off somewhere and the MC deciding to fill in. It'd fit in much better. Because if he's not going to be written like an evil bastard, then I don't see the point in making him one. This is like an "SI isekai" where you'd never know if it wasn't in the title.