VN - Ren'Py - Completed - The King of Milfs [v1.0.0.00] [VCProductions]

Gameplay: Typical visual novel, choosing between two options.

Writing: Decent, but the protagonist seems to be a complete pussy so far. Hopefully later he can take boxing lessons with a certain character, so he can stand up for himself.

Art: The best part of this game by far, these are elite models.

Audio: Cheap background music.

4 Stars in order to encourage you to keep going though a lot hast to change ... in my humble opinion.
Start with the positives. The stoty haspotential, especilly the development of the mc into his best version.
I also like the visuals and really like the models.
Now, transporting the emotions needa a bit improvement, often the faces look just blank emotionless.
Try t create a atmosphere that is so tense it feels like it could explode... if this makes any sense....

Really good start! An adult MC is always a welcome place to begin, especially one who's at least average height. Thank you for that.

Most of the women in the game are both very attractive and at the same time, at least somewhat realistic for their ages, which is also terrific. The renders are really well done, and I'm excited to see more of them and where things go from here.

The game is a little bit glitchy, and I had it crash on me a few times, but that's to be expected in a very early release. I did like the way the sections of the chapter are set up, but I'm very curious about the other planned mode that seems to be more of a free roam. rather than VN. That's always my preference if its there, so I'm hoping to see that implimented later on.

Tentative 4.
Renders are good.
Writing is very. very. simple but no ones expecting actual good writing from a porngame.
- Side comment: due to the simple writing characters seem very 2-dimensional and more like caricatures. This could easily change with more content

The ending (of the current content) should probably be rethought. There is no need for a incredibly stupid "MC gets blackmailed" bullshit that plagues so many games. Breaking and entering + assault for a guy that was in a hospital and has only the clothes to his bag ? thats just so stupid

Not fucking bad, dude. Not fucking bad at all. I am going to give you 5-Stars for this, because I can see the promise, and passion in the game you're creating and in the story you're trying to tell. The personalities that you gave each girl are so unique, and endearing, and not since Where the Heart is have I fallen in love with each girl as they're presented.
Though I did see a FEW grammatical errors throughout, and there were a few moments where the scenes would transition to other locations, or dialogs without a good segue, I am still going to applaud your writing, because you did write some really good dialog. Well done. I hope your game does well.

Extremely promising game. Great renders, interesting story, but most of all, a very unique approach to storytelling and gameplay. You can actually chose from a list which paths you will take among those that are open and this makes the story very straightforward. Really looking forward for more of this game.