VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Last King [Ch. 1 Fix] [YoungGG]

The game has potential, but only if the language is cleaned up considerably. As is, it's awkward, stilted and just plain weird. In short, it detracts enormously from the experience. - which might otherwise become quite good

This game is very unique, its a bit short but totally understandable for your first release, game had no complications and content is good, left me with desire to play more. The short variety that exists is very unique, the orc is very well designed and i loved the milf so much, we need more dirty scenes!

Translation could use some polishing, it is a bit strange, I don't know how to explain it but, you can tell the main message but can be confusing in some occasion.