VN - Ren'Py - The Last Star Walker [Ch.1] [Veluxa]

Chapter 1 Review

Nice renders and characters. Enjoyed the "breeding" scene with the princess.
Scenes felt like watching a movie. Was a bit hard to understand at times, so had to focus and go back a few times.
Looking forward to the next update.

The way the story is told is confusing, moving from one scene to another without context., But without a doubt, the worst thing about the game is the MC, no matter what you choose it doesn't change what he says or does, they are just false choices.

Almost no choices, which would be fine, if the plot wasn't overly convoluted and nonsensical. Since this is more of a story than a game, was waiting for the part where i was encouraged to care about what was going on, and it never came.

Review as of CH.1

Definitely potential here. Story seems interesting and renders are great. It was a bit confusing at times though. The part with the rat king was funny but I had absolutely no idea what those scenes were supposed to mean. Felt too nonsensical.

I don't know where you're going with the 2 ego's. It seems like one is gonna be submissive and the other dominant. If that is the case I have to say I wouldn't really like it personally and don't think it would be fun. For people that like both it's fine but for people who like one over the other they would like half and hate the other half of the content.

With Nyxi I wanted to turn the tides with her and put her in her place and was pretty disappointed. While I do appreciate it was avoidable all I could do was just end the scene. Wanna conquer that muscle bitch Axel too. I hope we're not just shoehorned into one side depending on what ego we're playing.

Overall pretty good and hot. 3/5

The Pros:

- Renders
- Characters



The Cons:

- The writing
- MC


For a good part of the release I didn't know what the hell was going on but I went along with it. We started out this beta weakling with a sci-fi setting and turned into Yu-Gi-Oh and became big Yugi but only in a medieval looking setting. The transitions were very poor and the choices didn't seem to matter. Dominant path was still filled with a beta like MC and of course sub and Trans leads to the MC sucking dick and becoming a bottom. I really wish devs would put more time and effort when writing scripts with this sort of content. They make seem as if a guy sucking a dick is as natural as walking and breathing air. There was no build up towards it or even a hint that the Mc is into this sort of stuff... just a trans and dick... and a blowjob.


Might pass on this for while. But good luck to the Dev.

As a futa and muscle girl fan i just have one thing to say about this game:Absolute Cinema
Keeep the good job man this game is amazing,The only thing is that i'am trying to understand The plot because suddenly i change from a characther in The past but apart from that The game is just very good,thanks for making this game man and i hope you keep doing this game

I'm not sure why this game is rated so high. The renderings are great but the author needs to pick a story line. Not a lot of porn to be seen. The few choices you can make appear to have zero impact on game play and the fight scene near where the current content ends was interminable. I was getting tired of clicking just to get through it. It's going to take several updates before I'll try this one again.

A nice first release that gives me a good vision of what this game could be. As a futa fan, the scene was 10/10 and I am hoping to see more futa scenes in the next updates. The renders also look great and overall this game feels like one that will become very popular on this site after a couple more updates.

My first ever review, here we gooo!

This game doesn't deserve the high ratings it's getting.. YET. The renders look good and so do the characters, but the story is all over the place. You never really know what's going on or sometimes who you are even talking to, especially in the second half of the game when you switch MC's. The Dev wants to tell to many stories if you ask me. And what's up with the excessive amount of dialogue from you're partner during sex scenes?? While some may like that, i found it rather annoying. Like damn girl i get it you're a fucking slut jeezzz.. Other things are little things like not using Renpy right. Using the mouse wheel in reverse makes the game crash if you run into a choice and if you want to go forward there are annoying slow fades in the dialogue. Overall not a bad start, sex scene's are hot, renders are nice, English is mostly good English so i say give it a try and see if it's for you!

My review is for Ch.1 version.

So far not a huge amount of content, however the content is done well imo I really love the futa on male content hope it has a lot more not many games do it well this did.

Can't wait for future updates Game developer keep doing what you're doing its great!

This is something special. There isn't a ton of content to speak on yet, but the art, design and models are all top notch stuff. Futa focus is done well and I didn't encounter any bugs. Only criticism I would have so far is the amount of content but it's chapter 1 so i'm willing to wait for more.

VERSION: 0.1
SUMMARY: Interesting, kinda, but too soon to bother with it.

PROS:

1. Nice looking models (if the few you can see are any indication)
2. Story seems intriguing, but only to make it slightly interesting, not enough content to say really.
3. Writing seems fine, structured well and reads fine.
4. Sounds are not bad either.

CONS:

1. Too short!, Almost nothing here that warrants even putting it out there, actually there is nothing, no MC, nothing, just an idea of a story.
2. Not enough content, if v0.1 is any indication, I would wait a while before even bothering with this one.