I really hate rating this so low. Creating one of these is hard, thankless work and creating one that is good is even harder. Speaking as a failed developer, I know this all too well. It is obvious the dev put a lot of effort and long hours into producing this and all I have to say about that is to stick with it and keep working and I wish you well.
This AVN has all these weird zoom in effects and the characters all standing or communicating in strange, unnatural poses. There is even one scene were one of the LIs is walking down the hall and turns back and it looks like she is possessed and can turn her head around almost 180 degrees. And what is with all of this zoom in effect and all the odd camera angles? It's so distracting.
And then there is the dialogue. It's not good. The grammar seems fine, but the sentences are simple and short and some of the breaks between conversations are just awkward.
It's actually a decent concept and hurray for just a couple LIs. One of the harem games out there has 31 LIs and counting. This seems right and the story itself, is a solid idea, it just needs to be executed better. It also has forced relationships... which while called out is a bit disappointing. There are 2 LI's you have to have a relationship with but the dev feels they are integral to the story.
I would challenge the dev to stop trying to be too artsy and stick with the basic scene setups and focus on the story and the interactions with the LIs. And for the love of the porn gods, please stop with the zooming. It's not good. It's not artistic. It's just distracting and is only effective with certain scenes and occasional uses.
UPDATE: The dev has gone back and reworked a few things and there is definite improvement. Adding another star.
This AVN has all these weird zoom in effects and the characters all standing or communicating in strange, unnatural poses. There is even one scene were one of the LIs is walking down the hall and turns back and it looks like she is possessed and can turn her head around almost 180 degrees. And what is with all of this zoom in effect and all the odd camera angles? It's so distracting.
And then there is the dialogue. It's not good. The grammar seems fine, but the sentences are simple and short and some of the breaks between conversations are just awkward.
It's actually a decent concept and hurray for just a couple LIs. One of the harem games out there has 31 LIs and counting. This seems right and the story itself, is a solid idea, it just needs to be executed better. It also has forced relationships... which while called out is a bit disappointing. There are 2 LI's you have to have a relationship with but the dev feels they are integral to the story.
I would challenge the dev to stop trying to be too artsy and stick with the basic scene setups and focus on the story and the interactions with the LIs. And for the love of the porn gods, please stop with the zooming. It's not good. It's not artistic. It's just distracting and is only effective with certain scenes and occasional uses.
UPDATE: The dev has gone back and reworked a few things and there is definite improvement. Adding another star.