VN - Ren'Py - The Lost Love [Ep. 5 U2] [SpeedPostX]

i dont have much to say but this game is very Good , i like games where you re given some control of the story like you can chose , most dont even let you do that also very nice not very complicated story would recommend if i could i would have supported the Dev so if anyone could please do "once you try the game and like it ofc"

Good Points
+ Visual quality is decent.
+ Sex scenes has animations.

Bad Points
- Jesus Christ... Amount of cockblocking, tease, and interruption scenes this game has is something... This is literally worst part of the game, any hot scene can become utter garbage just in a second and you can just become angry instead of horny, it's happening over and over again and definetaly a terrible game design.
- It has a lot of love interests, and very little content for them, and even the ones with content mostly has cockblocking content not sure we should count them as a content either...
- DEV has to made up his mind, neither story, love interests or MC has stable writing and things are all over the place.
- Most of love interests are unlikeable.

For The End
This game needs some serious fixes to become decent, otherwise it's just poor with current bad points and not worth playing.

Story 3/5
I found it pretty tuff with this one, mostly due to liking alot of the story aspects and how MC acts at some points in the story (when hes dom), like when you can trow the drugy cam-whore out on the streets i really loved that part, but then theres other times where MC acts alot more submissive its almost like he has a split personalty which im not really a fan off.

Also MC seeing people who arent there just dident make sense to me, thinking about the hole Rei scene, first MC knows she a lesbian but constantly thinks about her going on a date with him? why? then he walks into a storage area in the office and starts seeing and talking to an ugly bimbo whos not real and not only that he also starts undressing? and is about jerk him self off? in the middle of the freaking office where anyone can walk in, it truely feels like hes not in controle of him self anymore, but yet hes able to stop when cought? then shouldent he be fully aware of what he was doing and never start pulling hes dick out in the fucking storage area? i dunno very weird scene and all due to a lesbian girl he shouldent really have a chance with since shes not just a lesbian, shes also already in a relationship......

Then theres the girls and i can almost say i dident like any of them since i dont have a big tit fetish and 95% is in my eyes ugly bimbos i want nothing to do with, so when people talk about good animations i saw 0 since all i ever did was click "close route" whenever it asked, it wasent untill the very end of current version i finaly saw one i liked, did see maybe one or two ealiere but they arent LIs apprently or atleast not yet and proberly never will be since theres already to many bimbo LIs so screen time will proberly be very low for each girl without adding more.

Its also quite annoying to constantly see girls on the phone when they a nude, even if you close down their routes dev still wants to force that big tit fetish on you, showing it all the time.

Girls 2/5
Like i said before there just little to no diversity in builds, 95% bimbos which i just dont care about, its like 8 out of 9 so truely no diversity, so as it sits now if you dont have a big tit fetish its really not worth playing.

Animations 3/5
I had to put this at a 3 since theres close to nothing i care to see in the game, the little i did see looked ok but i will have to revisit this once there is some content with normal girls.

Choices 4/5
You do have the most importen choices which is who you want to be in a relationship with, but there is one bimbo that are forced on you from day 1 and one MC also sees and talks and for unknown idiotic reasons also listen to and follow the "ghost girl" orders.....

I will try this again later on but i dont expect much to improved when it comes to the girls and the diversity in builds, but ill give it a chance once theres more content, so for now i cant really give more the 3 stars since it pretty much does fail as an adult game for me personaly since all i could do was turn down girls routes.

This game is very underrated...

If anyone wants to try something like long interchanges and intriguing plots, this is the game for you!

I would advise not to rush to conclusions when you first try the game, as there are too many secrets and hidden pasts that make you interested in the plot, it is really worth playing.

The sex scenes are really hot, the longer the episodes go, the better it gets!

There isn't much animation, but the scenes are really beautiful and hot. I recommend it if you like plot intrigue besides jerking off

This is an harem-style game based on the topic of an open relationship, and it is safe to say it's one of the best. The girls and the sex scenes are as hot as they can get, there is variety to satisfy everyone (unless you're expecting m-to-m gay or futa content) and the story is interesting and well written; kudos to the proofreader, you would never know this comes from a developer whose first language is not English.

Yes, there's some cockblocking at times and even the odd renpy crash. Also, the decision to use mannequin-style chars for "irrelevant" characters makes some scenes feel weird, but IMO this is irrelevant when you can feast your eyes on such adorable women. I truly hope there's a way for the MC and Maya to get intimate.

For those who expect to be fapping within 30 secs after starting a game you should probably look elsewhere instead of lashing here trying to justify why this is worth less than 4 stars. Come on, people...

Amazing renders and the story actually makes me more invested. Love the dialogue choices as well as how funny some of the choices are with the people close to him. NTM how impressive the scenes are. Wish I could find more games like this

This game feels like it's trying to tick a bunch of boxes but not really accomplishing anything.

It honestly feels like it was written by a 15 year old girl's idea of what a boy would write. There's so much high-school level drama and bullshit, the MC is completely oblivious, and there's not a girl in this game who doesn't want to blow him for whatever reason. Yet none of them can just ask "Hey, can I suck your cock?"

Also, first sister, not black. That is a caucasian woman who spent too long in the tanning bed, or is blackfacing it up constantly. She's basically the model for Nicki from Friends In Need, just altered a bit.

The graphics are solid, not enough to blow my mind, but enough for my immersion. Probably the only good thing about this game. I often wonder why people good at rendering or composing don't try to find someone good at writing, but that's not really my perogative.

2.1/5 overall. This game frustrated the hell out of me.

I'm happy with another harem game, but if you're trying to act like it's a story-focused game with extremely rare sex scenes and animations, despite having a huge number of love interests, I'm not going to give you a high rating. Frankly, there's too many characters and not enough 'action'. To make matters worse, the dev constantly teases a sex scene and then the MC is cockblocked or it leads nowhere. It happens over and over and over to the point that when you finally reach a sex scene, you keep waiting for the other shoe to drop and have it get interrupted or cut short. This kind of stall tactic is terrible.

Also, -1 star for the fake incest. It's a lame middle road that pleases no one and is still just as likely to get you removed from patreon as real incest with a patch.

(ep 5 u1)
Alright time to give this game a review. I have played it once before, and I completed it again yesterday. It took me 3 days to complete it, with reading every bit of dialogue without skipping anything. The game has a lot of story scenes and a reasonable amount of H-scenes. The pace of world-building and character development is more than satisfactory.
Talking about characters, Ashley is my favorite LI in the game. Mikayla is the close second. If not for her selfish personality where she is so eager to exploit the MC in multiple scenes, she might have been equal to Ashley in my eyes. Even after everything she's still my second fav. 3rd one on my list is Jennifer. Both her character model and personality are top-notch. The girls, Deja and Sam are also up there. The rest including Tara, Jill, Cynthia, Lily, and Maya are also very reasonable LIs. The only character that I actively dislike is Melissa. MC doesn't have any in-game scene with Mel yet still, I hate every time she appears on screen.
About the progress of the story so far, MC has less than 5 story scene interactions with most of the LIs atm. Only one scene with Sam and Deja, 2 scenes with Jill, 3 scenes with Tara, 3 scenes with Mikayla, 3 scenes with Maya, 3 scenes with Lily, 4 scenes with Cynthia. Ashley has the most scenes with MC yet her progress is very slow for obvious reasons. Ashley's slow-burn story is one of the best parts of this game.
This is probably my fav game of all time but I have to point out some flaws that I saw. First of all, the story needs to be proofread by an editor who has a good command of the English language. Wrong words are used in many places like mourning instead of morning etc. Secondly, when the female characters call their pussy "my little girl", it makes me cringe so hard. That takes me out of the story at once. I have no other complaints.
Development cycles are short and a lot of content has been provided by the dev in a very short period since the start of the development of this game. Even in its early stages, this game is huge and the best thing about it is that dialogue isn't just filler to pad the playtime or simple ramblings of the writer. I am the guy who hates reading erotica after the seduction part is over, and I hate reading unnecessarily wordy filler dialogue even if it is in a good story. Believe me when I tell you that this might be the best incest game on this website.
5/5 stars for the story, renders, and everything else. Work on the music tho a couple of songs sound too generic.

The Lost Love [Ep. 5 U1 Hotfix], I'm conflicted on this one. The story is just all over the place, it has secrets in it that supposedly the MC knows about, but you the player do not know about. At one point the MC talks about one girl being a his bully and the next they are working together as crime fighters. I actually went back in to see if I got maybe season 2 by mistake, but nope there is just the first season. There are a ton of women and truth be told maybe too many he flirts with maybe 20 girls and instead of sex scenes they shoehorn another girl to flirt with but very little sex. You need a scorecard to keep track of all the girls and some of them look the same . The dialog is a little incorrect in places probably because the writer in non-english speaking but not too bad. I'll keep this one on my radar to see where it goess.

I don't normally write reviews but Im writing this review after seeing this game not getting the praise it deserves, I really enjoyed this game and I hope the dev finished the game. Its been a while since i played this game so I don't remember much of it but it is unique on its own and if you are into milfs this game is one of the best ones with story.

The MC is just to all over the place. he is an aloof moron one minute next he is getting a call from a woman that bullied him and they are a crime fighting duo, but she loves him but not really unless she can sleep with his FWB. MC openly hates this woman when she is first introduced and then he answers a phone call from her in the middle of the night no questions asked i don't know many people that would give that kind of concideration to someone they hate.

This isn't a harem game. its a polygamy game there is a supposed LI who has been in love with mc supposedly since they where kids but wont tell him without having a relationship with the "main LI"

Don't even get me started on the main LI she is putty in your hands one minute and the next she is being snappy and sharp. She is supposed to be some sort off cuck queen but acts more like a femdom bossing the MC around.

Random flash backs of the mc's dead gf and then she randomly pops up now and then to throw a jab about you being a pervert.

i know this is meant to be constructive criticism but it seems that if you openly voice your opinion on how things work in this game you get shouted down and told your opinion is wrong. This is supposed to be a harem game, this isnt a harem as there is relationships between the girls simple as that. The dev has picked his (or her) hill and is willing to die on it that it will not be changed and that is fine but remove the harem tag as this will only generate more reviews like this. I wouldnt have even downloaded this if i knew

A. It isn't a true harem
B. the MC character development is just bonkers, aloof pleb to cristian grey in 5 seconds and back to pleb just as quick

How many times can people say something dirty or sexual in front of the MC and he just replies ''huh'' and it just accepted that they said nothing. not to mention the amount of lying and shit in almost every single scene is too much. It seems every single character has secrets from the MC, not one person is ever honest with him and constantly lie to him about everything, god forbid people should actually explain their feelings to MC. Halfway through episode 4 ( no idea why I'm still playing ) and the MC is as clueless as a little child, for an ex solider or whatever he is, he is clueless about picking up hints about stuff going on around him, in some scenes he's this super tough dominating man, the next he can barely put an sentence together when he's talking to a woman. the story has no real consistency at all.

Yet another story where 99% of issues could be resolved if people just spoke to each other. It baffles me how this game could be sitting at 4 stars at the time of writing this. I'm only giving it 2 stars because work has clearly been put into it. The LIs are rather varied and the models are well made.

The MC is by far the biggest issue with this VN. He alternates between this super domineering man, choking his partners are calling them sluts...and a guy who stutters when talking to a woman. While I'm certainly not saying he should be behaving like that towards people he doesn't know well, he should at least be able to make it through a conversation without stumbling over his words because of a pretty woman. He's also supposed to be this super secret cold-blooded killer on a path for revenge, and yet he routinely underestimates his opponents, leading to him losing fights. He also apparently stopped training. This is a man who is obsessed with finding a woman and killing her, yet he stopped his combat training, training he would need in order to take her out. It just doesn't make any sense. He also doesn't pick up on any hints that people he cares about are having serious issues, while also NEVER pushing on topics that should be of great importance to him.

It's a story that wouldn't exist if people could be adults and communicate. If stories like that infuriate you as much as they do me, give this a hard pass.

There are good sides on this game, but also bad ones.
The good are the Love interest, which I feel diverse and intriguing. The story is, at the start, quite interesting, but I feel that it can go wrong fast so not judging it yet.

What I found most disturbing is some girl visuals: good but weird. I can't describe in what I found them disturbing.
Some girls are very beautiful, some relationships feel diverse enough.

I hope the bad sides are corrected or just temporary and wish the game's developper good luck since it can become very good.

Okay, I still remember this game from the early days. Now a lot of aspects of the game are being perfected. From the amazing renders, and exciting scenes to great writing, full of intrigues. The awkwardness from the early days is still there though, especially the MC models. But I'm kind of touched to see this game still going well.

Ill just say the the models is the only reason this game gets two stars. The character relationships are just confusing and made playing this game a bad experience. The writing is just the worst and made this game terrible right from the star. I didnt enjoy even one character is this game and I soon deleted this game. As for the female characters there were at least 3 that I thought were the same character. This game needs a lot of work. I probably wont give this one a second chance. I should give this game 1 star but I was trying to be kind.

English:..........6/10
User Interface:...4/10
User Experience:..7/10
Art:..............7/10
Dialogue:.........7/10
Story:............4/10
Opinion:..........4/10................
Avg:...........5.57/10 [2.79/5]

EDIT: A few of the visual scenes I bring up that have graphical issues have been removed and I think a few minor scenes that were weak also. But MC is still Chuckie Finster and Cringelord alpha male at the same time. The writing needed work, focus on that.

I want to say this game's DEFAULT name for MC is "Aiden Black." How much more of an edgelord could you possibly want to be? Sounds like the diary of a delusionary emo kid wanting to be a vampire. Chill out. And when this first came out, the description was not in the best English. So here's hoping they took time to fix more than just that. And after you finally get to the sister barging in the room I remember... I've played this before. Sure, they "reworked" the opening scene to tell YOU, the player, MC is ACTUALLY some secret agent super-assassin that comes out of nowhere later in the game. Legitimately the whole game is a bunch of day-to-day nothings about a guy, his girlfriend, and a couple other women. Then BAM! For no discernable reason he fighting cyberpunk enemies and killing people. When people say "they want more action" in a game like this. It does NOT mean add fighting that comes out of nowhere. It means "Get to the sex, these characters are pretty boring." Which is true. There's one decent character and maybe two decent relationships that create alright back and forths. But other than that, it feels like characters just get added to add a trope someone mentions. I also think I started a review of this, but closed a window or something and lost it, so who knows. But one thing is very true about this game, as soon as the character drama finally starts to get halfway decent, MC becomes Rambo and suddenly the whole story just feels like nothing up to that point matters in the slightest.

The story opens to MC dreaming about a woman that is barely ever mentioned again. I'm assuming she's dead, but he misses her. Then it cuts to the most half-assed intro/backstory read that SCREAMS "We redid the intro because our story takes a jarring turn to MC becoming a psycho super soldier." The he's woken up by his [INSERT RELATIONSHIP HERE], Ashley. She lieterally can't be more than his step sister considering he's white as paper and eventually someone says she's black. Even though she just looks like someone that's been tanning since the dawn of time. Anyway, she's moving in with MC for REASONS. She won't say why, but she's having trouble with her fiance, and wont go back home. Never elaborated on. Then you meet Lily and Maya. Obsessed coworker(?) and boss respectively. MC helped Lily with something in the past and she's some elite super hacker that likes to watch MC. I guess. And Maya has Androphobia for everyone except MC. Lucky him. They do BUSINESS things and are a BUSINESS. Beyond that, I don't think it's ever stated what they do, however that's from current memory, so if otherwise stated, it was for sure not part of the story for a while. Moving on, you meet Cynthia, a tenant of MC because he also owns a building. Right. You also meet Mikayla and learn about Jen, that is hastily mentioned in the intro, she's in the hospital. Then the chapter rounds out with Cynthia masturbating to MC as loudly as possible and he... Acts like a creepy preteen and sneaks in to jerk off to her? Does NO ONE see that the sudden genre change later on was not planned in the slightest? You can't start a game with this creeper MC but he's also a disciplined elite soldier. That just doesn't work.

Chapter two opens to the conclusion of that event. Turns out, she knew he was there so that somehow absolves him of being a weirdo. It doesn't. So he goes home to jerk it in the shower after having to sneak away, and Ashley watches him. THAT is what this story was originally supposed to be. More proof. There's also a point where they're talking, and suddenly the background just completely changes, so it looks like they're on a flying couch. Then they decide to sleep in the same bed because logic doesn't exist in porn games. When MC wakes up.... He buys Cynthia a sex toy? Okay. Then goes to see Jen with Mikayla. You get the backstory of MC and Jen, then meet the only person you don't name, Jill. She's in love with MC but teases him too much so they still act like bully/victim. Even though it's later retconned that they fight crime together all the time. She also likes Jen, but mostly just to get to MC. And he still acts like a gradeschooler forced to interact with his bully by his mother. It's pretty stupid, frankly. Then, after getting to Jen, they "reconcile" by him getting her naked and fingering her. Probably because people were saying something like "I hate that MC is a creeper and not a peak alpha male like I, obviously, am!" So he is a creeping peeper and sexually dominant. Two very different mentalities, but whatever. Only to find out Jen's in debt(later revealed to be because of Mikayla) and is too stubborn to ask for help. Which almost rounds her out into a semi-decent character. Leading into meeting Tara, a new tenant that I'm pretty sure is MC's biological sister I guess. She disappears for most of the rest of the game.

Chapter three is... Nothing. MC talks to most of the girls again and tells everyone he's in an open relationship with Jen. That's it. Oh and MC miraculously grows hair, he was bald the first two chapters. Anyway, Chloe is a scientist doing science stuff. Funding it with OF, and, being her Landlord, when he requests the rent.... He sexually assaults her? Not only is all of this section completely disjointed, it's completely stupid. The last thing I want to see, playing a visual novel, is a fake, forced camgirl stream. And he notices someone else was cheating so... He wants to get with her too? What is this game? He already has at least 4 women frothing at the gash for him. Chloe makes no sense. bUt sHe dOeS sCiEnCe sTuFf fOr hIm lAtEr. is what I'm sure you'll say, or they could have called it in off screen. It just feels so cheap and undeserved. Then he's 'blackmailed' into sex with a virginesque nurse due to an underground blackmailing ring? And just after the camgirl stuff and domineering Jen, he acts like a bumbling moron with Sally. Every scene feels like it was written by someone else. What a laugh. What's even funnier is MC's penis CLIPS THROUGH HER ABDOMEN during the sex, my god. Then right after this and ALMOST learning about Jen and her sister, the game suddenly shifts to super assassin turbo cop mode. You start getting a bunch of lore, backstory and all this extra shit for something that was never even hinted at. Why? Why suddenly change to this? It makes no sense.

The bumbling idiot thing makes even less sense when Chloe appear again and he suddenly has a gaze that makes her unable to breathe. Come on. Am I the only one reading this? Enter the "noir cop" story about druglords and gangs. The English starts TANKING here. And DO NOT tell me "She let her niece to had a gun?" is anywhere near proper English. And after all that fighting and stuff, you get no proper nouns, no information, no reason to care what's going on at all. With a hard cut to Maya's nightmare. And a long winded scene about how Sam and Deja also want to have sex with him. And the skeezy uncle showing up. But still no details. Then he starts calling everyone baby girl and pet names like some dumbass "Alpha dom" there is no consistency in MC. And even still, I don't think I like ANY of the million sides of MC. The only thing of note that happens through to the end is a fight with Andrea, she's crazy because drugs. Wow, fun. And by the end YOU STILL KNOW NOTHING. A year and a half, and all you know is the story suddenly changed. Rough.

The English gets pretty laughable near the end. At first it was okay, but little by little verbage, tensing, wrong words, missing words, it's not great. The UI/UX is 95% stock, do something about that. The art is okay, constant clipping, wrong backgrounds being displayed, but its DAZ. The dialogue, for the most part, is actually not terrible. As long as MC isn't talking about sex, then I want to turn the game off. The story is schizophrenic. It can't decide if it's just a horny landlord or super soldier mafia story. Pick a lane, and fast. Either way, both stories are kinda meh. Maybe it's just because the other competing storyline keeps popping up, but I got whiplash out here my guy.

So, aside from the good renders and great sex scenes, this game also has a really neat path maker that lets you choose your paths in the game. This is a pretty unique feature that I feel deserves to be mentioned right away. It also has an included walkthrough which also deserves praise. I absolutely hate games that make you fish around and guess to pick your path instead of just letting you play how you want to play. That problem doesn't exist here thankfully. Now, getting into some of the negatives here is the english. I understand the devs first language is not english and that's pretty apparent here. The broken english and poor grammar isn't so much that it ruins the game but it's definitely an obvious and can drag you out of the story if you are observant to such things. The story I personally don't feel is very strong so I don't see that as a huge problem, but for immersion it might be an issue, YMMV. I also want to mention that there's a lot of sharing here, and I don't mean with other men. Basically, there is a lot of lesbian sharing. Almost all of the characters have some type of girl-girl-MC relationship and not just for sex. I don't like to share my women, even with other women so that's not cool. You don't really get a choice about that unless you want to pass over a lot of the girls. The only choice you really get is whether or not you want them to do stuff behind your back without including you, or only when you are included. You don't have an option to say you are uncomfortable with it period, so I feel like that's a huge negative and enough for me to deduct a star. I mean it's definitely better than having to share with other dudes but I don't want to share at all but it's kinda forced. In conclusion, it's a pretty good harem game but with forced lesbian sharing and an interesting path maker and included walkthrough, so if you are tolerant of the forced lesbian sharing it's definitely a must play for the harem.

Writing an adult game is like walking a tightrope, too much text and it becomes uninteresting, too few sex scenes and it becomes unappealing... but this game somehow never misses a single step.

The writing is simply outstanding! I didn't click thru a single line because I was so interested in the characters and story line, and I can't remember the last time that happened in an AVN. It's even funny!!!

There aren't a ton of sex scenes yet, but those that are there are so well written that even something as simple as foreplay is incredibly hot. It's pretty obvious that the writer is an experienced adult (not the horny teenagers that usually writes these games) and has probably written an erotic novel or two.

I don't write many 5 star reviews but this game absolutely earns it and I can't wait for the next update. I couldn't recommend it more!