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I don't expect my rating will stay where it is, but it's still an introductory chapter, though it already has all the makings of generic isekai nonsense, at least the grammar is solid enough. For an intro, a sizeable number of lewd scenes, though that's partly due to AI generation and how barebones the writing is to get you straight to the fucking.
- AI art is at least passable here, though perhaps some work on the finishing wouldn't go awry. Mostly consistent enough.
- Straightforward options
- Writing lacks any major grammar issues
- Decent amount of lewdness
- The writing, while sufficient, is rather shallow so far.
- Tries to make a compelling lore, but the tone is all over the place. Death and intrigue is brushed off quickly and sex is expected and easy.
- Has the unfortunate taste of generic isekai harem setups, as a result.
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I don't expect my rating will stay where it is, but it's still an introductory chapter, though it already has all the makings of generic isekai nonsense, at least the grammar is solid enough. For an intro, a sizeable number of lewd scenes, though that's partly due to AI generation and how barebones the writing is to get you straight to the fucking.