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Rustlerman

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Game needs some heavy play testing. So many problems, errors, pain points. I suggest the dev play other html games to find what makes them fun.


UI buttons are hard to see and the "continue" stays on screen. I would also suggest allowing the player to use a different character face choice or even to use their own they can load from their computer.


I had 355 $ and 100 energy when entering.

Guest Room has error.
Error: child tag <</if>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
<</if>>

Garage has error.
Error: child tag <</if>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
<</if>>

Giving Richard a Tequila Sunrise puts you on an empty passage with no way back.


love with lily when giving chocolates outside is not color coded unlike others.

Buying weed a second time.
Error: se encontró la etiqueta secundaria <</mdleft>> fuera de una llamada a su macro principal <<mdleft>>
<</mdleft>>


Sexo con Andrea
Error: <<goto>>: el pasaje "Andreasex1" no existe
<< ir a "Andreasex1" >>

Mirando en la mochila
Error: no se puede encontrar una etiqueta de cierre para la macro <<mdleft>>
<<mdleft>>…

Si hablas con el barman pero ya tienes la marihuana, tiene el "vete" original.

Cuando hagas que el jugador compre cosas, no las hagas ir y venir en las páginas. Son solo páginas / clics adicionales sin ningún motivo.

los videos no tienen controles de reproducción / volumen, etc.

Sigue a Nancy
Error: <<goto>>: el pasaje "Nancycreampie" no existe
<< ir a "Nancycreampie" >>

El juego te obliga a saltar mucho, como darle un objeto a Lily sin importar dónde estés y te arroja al salón principal.

No hay estadísticas reales o información sobre dónde se encuentra, solo + s a algún número.
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Thanks for the comment, it helps me to improve.
 

max_z_smith

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could do with a back button for when the game breaks
open the html file, and delete the following (lines 165-170):

#ui-bar-history {
display: none;
}
#ui-bar-toggle {
display: none;
}

save and reload game.



Also to OP, a small request: please don't use james deen as the player avatar. He's an abuser and an (accused) rapist, even within a porn game it makes me feel icky to see his face. I get that he's by far the best known male pornstar, but literally any other avatar would be preferable (or even just the option to not have a player avatar, or to switch it).

Digging further into the game files, I noticed that a handful of large videos contribute almost all the size. Like there's 2 bukake videos that combined are 500mb (the second of which isn't even visible in game, due to a typo that just repeats the first video). A handful of other videos are all very large, high quality. I'd say either cut them down a bit in length, or at least convert them to webm, which will massively reduce filesize. https://f95zone.to/threads/converting-images-to-webp-and-videos-to-webm.55024/ for a good tool to do so.
 
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Rustlerman

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Thank you all for commenting, any constructive criticism is welcome. I also accept requests, but keep in mind that I am alone with this game. I will do my best to improve my project.
 

Anon1357

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Game follows a decent idea.
Sadly some links don't work (yet I hope).
A good idea would be to fix these bugs before adding new content.
I can see that there are scenes in the folder, but if I can't activate them it's quite annoying.
 
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anon48

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I'm going to guess that english isn't your native language, if you need someone to look over your work I'd be more than happy to volunteer.
 
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Koneko Toujou

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its not just the guest room the garage does the same thing and one other place had an error also but cant remember where it was
 

Smegmut

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Oct 30, 2020
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I'm enjoying the game so far, and I like the concept. I also like gifs, so I'm happy to find it well populated with them :).

Someone already mentioned the 'filling the bottle' glitch, and another is that when I buy sprite it doesn't show up in my inventory. I also tried giving Richard a Tequila Sunrise and it went to a blank screen (with " Double-click this passage to edit it. " up the top) and no way back. Looking forward to playing more though, nice one!
 
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MissFortune

I Was Once, Possibly, Maybe, Perhaps… A Harem King
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Sadly, I'm almost positive that's just some random amateur pic that's been doing the rounds online for years if not decades.
After a little reverse image searching, looks like the girl is . Looks like some some kind of dollar general Girls Gone Wild photoshoot was all she did. Just tits, no pussy, porn clips, or anything on video.
 

jjpizzo

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When the game is with so little development and finishing, I recommend leaving the back button as most HTML's do for the player's own security since I was forced to restart several times because of pages without access.
 

max_z_smith

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After a little reverse image searching, looks like the girl is . Looks like some some kind of dollar general Girls Gone Wild photoshoot was all she did. Just tits, no pussy, porn clips, or anything on video.
Well then, I'm impressed you got a name. Which search engine did you use?
 

MissFortune

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Well then, I'm impressed you got a name. Which search engine did you use?
Just used Google, searched through a few links until I came across a NameThatPorn-esque website that had that blog linked.
 

1Teddy1

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Is there anything else to do in this game besides being a fetch bitch who is constantly told to fetch stuff?
 
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2.50 star(s) 28 Votes