❤️ The Mother of My Best Friend and Her Irresistible Desires [Game Development Thread]

[17MOONKEYS]

17MOONKEYS A bit of feedback for the title screen

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^ The sub-title font size could be enlarged a bit, and maybe use a different font colour to make it merge better with the background graphics?

Made it bold. Thank You Man.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

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Made it bold. Thank You Man.

Don't mention it, my friend

The bolded font looks good and is much more visible/reads out better.

However, have you also considered the placement of the subtitle? This is just a very minor nitpick on my end but the text does slightly overlap with the cracks in the poolside tiles.





I mean its not a big deal, but would it help if we are able to shift the placement of the lettering a bit? Or maybe that wouldn't work because of the placement of the render itself and the BG

Anyways its a non-issue, I just get OCD a lot sometimes about a lot of things

 

[17MOONKEYS]

Don't mention it, my friend

The bolded font looks good and is much more visible/reads out better.

However, have you also considered the placement of the subtitle? This is just a very minor nitpick on my end but the text does slightly overlap with the cracks in the poolside tiles.

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I mean its not a big deal, but would it help if we are able to shift the placement of the lettering a bit? Or maybe that wouldn't work because of the placement of the render itself and the BG

Anyways its a non-issue, I just get OCD a lot sometimes about a lot of things

I think I can fix it.


How do you like it?

I just get OCD a lot sometimes about a lot of things

Me too man

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

I think I can fix it.
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How do you like it?


Me too man

Oh yes! That's perfect man, yea precisely what I was having in mind.

Everything looks good now

The title is now looking more legible and free from those prior obstructions.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

17MOONKEYS

Hey man btw, another piece of feedback here, but have u considered maybe changing the sidebar font colours to better match the background colour?



Pink is fine to keep as the BG colour of course, but maybe changing the goldish yellow to a different colour (e.g., maybe like ivory or an off-white, or midnight/navy blue/turquoise) would suit the BG colour better to make it a little more visible and better contrasting. What do you think?

 

[17MOONKEYS]

17MOONKEYS

Hey man btw, another piece of feedback here, but have u considered maybe changing the sidebar font colours to better match the background colour?

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Pink is fine to keep as the BG colour of course, but maybe changing the goldish yellow to a different colour (e.g., maybe like ivory or an off-white, or midnight/navy blue/turquoise) would suit the BG colour better to make it a little more visible and better contrasting. What do you think?

I think you are right.

 

[patrickB]

This two Moms.

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Ah, well formed super awesome bush ! That's all I need to ...

 

[17MOONKEYS]

ivory

#FFFFF0

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

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That looks great my friend! Yes, ivory (hex code: #FFFFF0) is definitely a more fitting choice for the side bar colour font/tone

Ivory on the pink background also contrasts well with each other I must say

 

[Liturgy]

I have to say, the advice on the tile cracks was surprisingly great. Also, the main menu text is much easier to read now. I did find the gold and candy combo more exciting, but I would take readable text over that any day of the week.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

I have to say, the advice on the tile cracks was surprisingly great. Also, the main menu text is much easier to read now. I did find the gold and candy combo more exciting, but I would take readable text over that any day of the week.

Indeed. I think when put in a side by side comparative (i.e., before vs after view), the difference is night and day IMHO

Before:



After:

 

[17MOONKEYS]

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