Just got done with the first release, and I must say I'm liking it a lot.
One thing that I'd always welcome is addition of proper horror genre games, cause despite the "horror" tag existing for this site, game which really focuses on this aspect is quite rare.
As long as the future updates continue with the suspense and terror aspect, I see potential for it to be great.
As for the story, I'm finding myself engaged with it; I like how the mystery is slowly getting unveiled to the MC.
With the LIs, they each seem to have distinct enough interest to kepp me engaged (currently I'm most interested in Haze, but let's see how I feel with more episodes, heh).
So all in all, good job dev on your first release.
Will keep tabs on this one to see how things develop with future episodes.