Excellent art, love the women, good writing, like the gameplay. I think my main concerns are pretty "normal" things that probably a lot of people said here; the dialogue bugs must definitely be fixed and possibly an auto-save plus rollback/ESC escape feature implemented. Otherwise in general I'd like the experience to be a bit smoother, interactable objects could have a bit of a glow or something to make them more visible (characters too), walk speed could be higher, clicking on the keys could allow fast travel, and the enforced-order to certain actions could be loosened up since at times there doesn't seem to be any logical reason of why X can only be done after doing Y. Plus, the profiles should show actual numbers; as it is the bars have no point to judge anything.
Going forward - and it depends on the philosophy of the game design, but just from my view for porn games - I don't like a too punishing approach to choices and missing out on content, especially when you often can't know what your choices will do, regarding the stat gain. So I'd personally suggest some "generic" actions for each girl that can be repeated that'll allow you to "exchange" any of the stat for the others - not unlimited perhaps but just "a bit" with more options available as you progress. So for example for the diner woman you could be allowed to go eat pancakes once a day after her pancake quest and depending on whether you are an ass about it or especially charming or whatever might do something like +1 dom -1 love or +1 love -1 lust or whatever.
Just so the player has some flexibility when later it turns out that you need different stats then what you got and you don't want to force everyone to start over again and again (not very necessary right now of course as there's not that much content).
What should I do with this?
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