I think both Jean and Laura need to be toned down
They are. Been talking about it in the discord as recently as today.
You can have the stalking without being dommed in the bedroom and you can have the sisterly affection without her getting upset because you ordered your own food.
I can also see her being a sub because of her upbringing and falling into a sub role because of her comfort zone
Myself and the writers fundamentally disagree. Becoming subservient to someone would be regressing into her training. While quirks aren't healthy coping mechanisms, they are coping mechanisms meant to get away from baggage.
Jean instead of only Big Sissing PC could Big sis whole group or transfer into mothering group with PC being Daddy of group.
You've missed the point of the character.
In the comics, because it was the 60s, Jean was designated denmother of the group of boys for the sole reason of her being a woman.
Jean's character in this game is her trying to have a semblance of actual control in her life rather than being subservient.
There are other girls this would actually make sense for.
Jean having telepathy means she should know and have experienced the emotions of others even if she never done it herself.
This is just me being a nerd, but you're thinking of empathy. If she used telepathy the most she would feel would be memories of past situations. Not the actual emotions.
Seeing each one being puritanical just seems off.
They're not being puritanical.
Laura: We're not going for the innocent angle. Having sex with someone is probably the most vulnerable you can be with another person. Laura learning to let her guard down and be vulnerable is the point of her character arc. She knows how reproduction works but why would the facility give her dating advice? They didn't teach her seduction techniques because she was 14.
Jean: She doesn't immediately see you as a relationship partner. She's a senior and you're a freshman. After spending time with you, she's a big girl and decides she's going to decide for herself. This is why she can have sex one season before the other two.
Rogue: Okay a little bit puritanical, but Rogue treasuring her first time has been a constant for her character in the comics. It's partially why she puts up with Gambit's bullshit. It's core to her personality that she is trying to figure out if she actually likes you or is just into you because you can touch her.
Oni's Rogue had her willing to put out, but his game is clearly more porn parody in tone while TNH is attempting to be a serious story.
What I would suggest is 3 different routes on start up of new game
Dude, you're asking us make the first chapter 9 times longer in development time. Not gonna happen.