Plesse tell me you have plans for a bad end route? One where she doesnt leave, convinced by the step father to stay home and give up on our silly dreams?
Carnem Luxur
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https://f95zone.to/threads/kara-v1-0-alexzeroone.82710/ it's very short but has the same vibe (if i remember correctly)
I-Love-Adventure
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Are there any scenes if she sleeps in the living room yet? I've done it a few times but nothing has happened yet.
Life As An Innocent Waitress is a little bit like this I suppose. Though most of the game takes place at a bar where the patrons grope you etc, the "Landlord" where you have a room is also your stepdad, and the other men living there are his sons. And it also lets you "clean the house" and if you can't pay your part of the rent, well.. Things happen.
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Your idea has potential, though I think you should make the escape from home have a lot more interactions and far less cash for each of the current "demands", but only so long as you aren't forced to repeat each one over and over.
You could even have two routes, one is the escape, and the other is where she gets to only attend during the week but has to return home on the weekends or something.
Anyway, it looks fine, so while some people might complain about the art being AI, I think it's fine and you'll probably improve over time too.
The caveat is that AI renders should be a lot quicker to create than something like daz, so the updates will have to be decent in content.
You could even have two routes, one is the escape, and the other is where she gets to only attend during the week but has to return home on the weekends or something.
Anyway, it looks fine, so while some people might complain about the art being AI, I think it's fine and you'll probably improve over time too.
The caveat is that AI renders should be a lot quicker to create than something like daz, so the updates will have to be decent in content.
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I do not get why the need of sandbox environment and minigame?!
Tell the story, spend more time to elaborate the characters but why should I be challenged in cooking food?!? is it really instrumental for the overall plot and user experience?! What is the value of it?!?
Why do I have a wall of choices and potential interaction if at the end they bring to nowhere?!
The story can be interesting, spend time in developing the story and design good, long and well represented sexual interaction.. all the rest if for a pre-teen audience.
Tell the story, spend more time to elaborate the characters but why should I be challenged in cooking food?!? is it really instrumental for the overall plot and user experience?! What is the value of it?!?
Why do I have a wall of choices and potential interaction if at the end they bring to nowhere?!
The story can be interesting, spend time in developing the story and design good, long and well represented sexual interaction.. all the rest if for a pre-teen audience.
For those who already tried it, is there any choices in the game or is this just another kinetic ai novel?
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It's more of a sandbox so far. You can choose not to do the stepF and stapB demands and get no money. On the other hand you can spam it and earn like 10.000 yet still have the corruption on 0. ))
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So, I like the theme, chosen art style and some of the scene premises a lot. And I hope to see more albeit with better execution.
Here are some points Madd5 should strongly consider:
- Write the dialogue yourself or strongly shorten the AI slop. If you can't bother with that, players won't bother either.
95% are drawn out thought monologues. Typical AI! It breaks immersion and annoys the reader until he starts skipping everything. No. 1 rule of visual story telling: Show, not tell.
Since this may be hard to do with generated images at least describe more of what they are doing, how they are reacting, instead of what they are thinking. The mind has to fill that gap for the scene to have impact.
- Bundle the existing scenes as scenes for stepfather.
The brother looks way too similar and too old. If 2 out of 3 starting characters look the same... that's bad.
- Make the step family feel less like super obvious Disney villains, right from the get go.
Optionally: rethink if you really need all that stats in your game. Give the player less work and more agency in choices, how fast they want to go through the game and how much time they want to spend in parts of the sandbox.
You can accomplish this by only one stat that soft caps what MC tolerates / can reject.
Some people want to complete every scene just once, some want to repeatedly get groped everytime they help with some chores. Some want to choose if MC has enough money for rent or not each week.
The minimum accepted effort on this side has always been writing that doesn't disrespect the readers intelligence and time and maybe even some not samey characters.
Best of luck with your project
Here are some points Madd5 should strongly consider:
- Write the dialogue yourself or strongly shorten the AI slop. If you can't bother with that, players won't bother either.
95% are drawn out thought monologues. Typical AI! It breaks immersion and annoys the reader until he starts skipping everything. No. 1 rule of visual story telling: Show, not tell.
Since this may be hard to do with generated images at least describe more of what they are doing, how they are reacting, instead of what they are thinking. The mind has to fill that gap for the scene to have impact.
- Bundle the existing scenes as scenes for stepfather.
The brother looks way too similar and too old. If 2 out of 3 starting characters look the same... that's bad.
- Make the step family feel less like super obvious Disney villains, right from the get go.
Optionally: rethink if you really need all that stats in your game. Give the player less work and more agency in choices, how fast they want to go through the game and how much time they want to spend in parts of the sandbox.
You can accomplish this by only one stat that soft caps what MC tolerates / can reject.
Some people want to complete every scene just once, some want to repeatedly get groped everytime they help with some chores. Some want to choose if MC has enough money for rent or not each week.
The minimum accepted effort on this side has always been writing that doesn't disrespect the readers intelligence and time and maybe even some not samey characters.
Best of luck with your project
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yeah, you KNOW the one, didnt need that visualAre father and a brother twins?!My poor eyes with THAT screenshot.
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It's these game components that make it a game rather than a visual novel. What you're looking for seems to be a video.
Calculus by hand is a good exercise for the mind. But hell, each their own
. Regarding cursive handwriting .. sad to hear
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i remember cursive was a requirement, so sad how far things have fallenCalculus by hand is a good exercise for the mind. But hell, each their own