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Alea iacta est

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It's these game components that make it a game rather than a visual novel. What you're looking for seems to be a video.
I disagree.
Everything in a game must serve a purpose. The fact that someone use a sandbox model and it is not supported by a purpose is completely useless.
What is the value of the minigame... choose the ingredients? Absolutely nothing.

Purpose + User experience + value that is the recipe for a pleasant game rather than a minestrone that is trying to do everything and nothing good.
 

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the game is interesting enough i hope for more stuff with the dad and brother, something like public use in the house, or both of them using her at the same time
 
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i remember cursive was a requirement, so sad how far things have fallen
It hasn't been afaik for like 20-25 years now, though it was way back when I was in elementary school (I think starting in 4th grade irrc), but that was over 40 years ago. My guess is after cheap/free email mostly replaced sending postcards and handwritten letters via snail mail by the mid-1990's practically no one does it the hard way anymore. As far as education requirements it's like choosing Latin as 2nd language (when not in the legal or medical fields), an obsolete dinosaur.
 
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I disagree.
Everything in a game must serve a purpose. The fact that someone use a sandbox model and it is not supported by a purpose is completely useless.
What is the value of the minigame... choose the ingredients? Absolutely nothing.

Purpose + User experience + value that is the recipe for a pleasant game rather than a minestrone that is trying to do everything and nothing good.
The minigame is designed to help you avoid harassment scenes in the kitchen.
However, this is counterproductive, as it eventually prevents you from progressing in the story due to a lack of corresponding (hidden?) rewards.

For example, I was only allowed to spend the night in bed with my stepfather after he reached into my pants in the kitchen, which is only possible after losing the minigame.
 
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Pfft who said anything about normal? Like every other paraphilia it's not supposed to be normal. And believable is debatable and subjective. I believe it because I'd totally fuck my actual sister if the chance came up. Hell my mom too, even if I can't get her pregnant no matter how much I'd creampie her. But other than that if 15% of the population wasn't secretly attracted to their relatives why would politicians feel the need to be haters and outlaw it? And that's even before doing criminal records searches and finding real incest couples that got caught after fucking anyway (sometimes with some extra luck and finding some leaked sex tapes of theirs along with it).

But as a fetish stepcrap is an insult to real incest fans as well as the incest tag (stepcest shouldn't count). It's like being into exhibitionism but with 0 risk of getting caught, like doing it 20 miles from the nearest road in the middle of the woods. Without the extra risks (like playing inbred baby roulette) there are no extra thrills, rendering the fetish mostly pointless.
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The art is good when is not AI but the grind repetitiveness kills it for me.
 

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Hi there !
Thanks for all the feedback, Apologies for missing the AI art tag, I thought AI CG was enough o_O . I absolutely adore hand-drawn art and games, and I believe everyone should pick up a pencil from every now and then. Unfortunately, when I pick up the pencil it's almost always atrocious results. I wanted art to look consistent (as best i can on my RTX 4070 ) so i did create base images on Nano Banana and then inpainted them using ComfyUI inpainting .

As for writing, I did use AI I wrote the major outline and the interactions, then using GitHub Copilot asked it to detail it and add sensory details to it. Again apologies for making you read through that slop :cry: . In my daily life I study a lot of AI research papers and Machine learning related items so I am not a very good writer . ( I am looking for people to join me on this project tho so if you're interested even without experience let me know . I cant pay you though sorry ! until we get a patreon setup etc. )

In this game I implemented corruption as a variable but havent used it yet .

To increase intamacy the fastest use kitchen scenes with almost 0 willpower and their intamacy values goes up real fast , To increase anger you can either do a negatie response on phone to them or listen to their demands and then click refuse.



Here is a comprehensive list of Events available in game and how to get them:

Anger EVENTS
1. Sleeping in Living room with dad anger >= 80 then with a probability of 60 %
2. After folding clothes event in Clean dad's room with dad anger >= 50 ( Folding clothes happen in clean dad room after 1st clean dad room with a probability of 40 % if dad lust is >=50 and other 60 % is grope event while you are cleaning under bed )

Kitchen Events
1. Go to Cook food For Both characters dad/brother and have upto 6 misses .Then at 7th miss they leave . ( At first you will resist all interaction even if you press Allow him ,this then checks your willpower vs his lust ,dominance and if he wins he gains intamacy a lot . If his intamacy value is higher than the act intimacy then you cant say no to him with text like " he has done far worst to me " .
To gain intamacy value fastest use shower or kitchen scenes on almomst 0 willpower )


Shower Events
1. For both dad and brother if either of them have lust >=30 . ( Lust increases every day you sleep so thats very easy to get )
2. If you stay silent , the act just goes up to intamacy level . E.g if your intamacy level is 15 then you stay silent and he rremoves your towel , if your intamacy level is 10 he will not try to remove your towel .
3. If you talk to him it again is a battle of his lust, dominance vs your willpower, Try to lose more often to get higher scenes or intamacy level .

Talk To brother/Father
1. Simple event just to talk to them in their room , not much to add here

Listen to their demands
1. Listen to dads demands- You need to research about cram school in your room 3 times , should have talked to him at least 2/3 times and intamacy value >=20
2. Listen to brothers demands - Research cram school 3 times at least and talk to him at least 3 times . Then with intamacy value >=15

Dad clean events
1. You need dad lust >=50 for higher chance of events happening otherwise it just goes to a quick clean.
2. 2 types of event one where you go under the bed for cleaning and other where he wants you to check his used clothes if they are good to wear or not .


For hints of events, i tried to use phone to give hints , I will add more in the future.
For the future updates I will be adding more anger events for brother,a the ftermath of the anger event in the living room since it's a big thing. I will try to make a different character for brother, but i cant promise better ART sorry :(. Apologies if people are looking forward to going outside house for next update but its gonna take a while.

Once again, thanks a lot for trying this game. This is my first game and your review means a lot ! I have read the bug reports for after the demo and please reach out on discord madd5398 if you wanna join me on this!( no payment sorry but I will teach you what i know for free )
 

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This game looks promising but it needs some visuals to follow the situation, like for example when she is cooking and she feels her father is groping her, the current scene should reflect her situation and not remain at the current scene. I'll be following up with this one to see where it goes
 

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Um sorry how do i update my own thread , I need to add the scenes available and how to get them in current version to 1st thread but i am new to F95forums :cry:
 

Mercedes

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Hi there !
Thanks for all the feedback, Apologies for missing the AI art tag, I thought AI CG was enough o_O . I absolutely adore hand-drawn art and games, and I believe everyone should pick up a pencil from every now and then. Unfortunately, when I pick up the pencil it's almost always atrocious results. I wanted art to look consistent (as best i can on my RTX 4070 ) so i did create base images on Nano Banana and then inpainted them using ComfyUI inpainting .

As for writing, I did use AI I wrote the major outline and the interactions, then using GitHub Copilot asked it to detail it and add sensory details to it. Again apologies for making you read through that slop :cry: . In my daily life I study a lot of AI research papers and Machine learning related items so I am not a very good writer . ( I am looking for people to join me on this project tho so if you're interested even without experience let me know . I cant pay you though sorry ! until we get a patreon setup etc. )

In this game I implemented corruption as a variable but havent used it yet .

To increase intamacy the fastest use kitchen scenes with almost 0 willpower and their intamacy values goes up real fast , To increase anger you can either do a negatie response on phone to them or listen to their demands and then click refuse.



Here is a comprehensive list of Events available in game and how to get them:

Anger EVENTS
1. Sleeping in Living room with dad anger >= 80 then with a probability of 60 %
2. After folding clothes event in Clean dad's room with dad anger >= 50 ( Folding clothes happen in clean dad room after 1st clean dad room with a probability of 40 % if dad lust is >=50 and other 60 % is grope event while you are cleaning under bed )

Kitchen Events
1. Go to Cook food For Both characters dad/brother and have upto 6 misses .Then at 7th miss they leave . ( At first you will resist all interaction even if you press Allow him ,this then checks your willpower vs his lust ,dominance and if he wins he gains intamacy a lot . If his intamacy value is higher than the act intimacy then you cant say no to him with text like " he has done far worst to me " .
To gain intamacy value fastest use shower or kitchen scenes on almomst 0 willpower )


Shower Events
1. For both dad and brother if either of them have lust >=30 . ( Lust increases every day you sleep so thats very easy to get )
2. If you stay silent , the act just goes up to intamacy level . E.g if your intamacy level is 15 then you stay silent and he rremoves your towel , if your intamacy level is 10 he will not try to remove your towel .
3. If you talk to him it again is a battle of his lust, dominance vs your willpower, Try to lose more often to get higher scenes or intamacy level .

Talk To brother/Father
1. Simple event just to talk to them in their room , not much to add here

Listen to their demands
1. Listen to dads demands- You need to research about cram school in your room 3 times , should have talked to him at least 2/3 times and intamacy value >=20
2. Listen to brothers demands - Research cram school 3 times at least and talk to him at least 3 times . Then with intamacy value >=15

Dad clean events
1. You need dad lust >=50 for higher chance of events happening otherwise it just goes to a quick clean.
2. 2 types of event one where you go under the bed for cleaning and other where he wants you to check his used clothes if they are good to wear or not .


For hints of events, i tried to use phone to give hints , I will add more in the future.
For the future updates I will be adding more anger events for brother,a the ftermath of the anger event in the living room since it's a big thing. I will try to make a different character for brother, but i cant promise better ART sorry :(. Apologies if people are looking forward to going outside house for next update but its gonna take a while.

Once again, thanks a lot for trying this game. This is my first game and your review means a lot ! I have read the bug reports for after the demo and please reach out on discord madd5398 if you wanna join me on this!( no payment sorry but I will teach you what i know for free )
Thanks for the detailed description.

Even though the game description states that your stepfather and stepbrother pressure you into unusual actions, which is why you want to run away, I personally think a way should be implemented to make many scenes avoidable. The groping in the kitchen or the exposure of your breasts in the bathroom could be enough of a trigger to run away, even with less money, and then have to find ways to earn more on the outside.

Simply visiting your brother every evening and collecting 500$ at this point undermines future actions that would require you to earn more money first.

Please also try to implement a consistent time system. Being able to talk once after a good night's sleep and then being too exhausted for anything else is frustrating, especially when you can do five rounds of yoga without getting tired.

Also, try to better adapt the background images to the time of day. The day-night cycle doesn't always seem to work logically.

But the most important thing to make qualitative progress here is really a revision or replacement of many images.
 
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Jeez. Poor Madd. This one gave me the world's saddest boner. My other half is crying in the bathroom even as we speak. 10/10 no notes from us.
 

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Thanks for the detailed description.

Even though the game description states that your stepfather and stepbrother pressure you into unusual actions, which is why you want to run away, I personally think a way should be implemented to make many scenes avoidable. The groping in the kitchen or the exposure of your breasts in the bathroom could be enough of a trigger to run away, even with less money, and then have to find ways to earn more on the outside.

Simply visiting your brother every evening and collecting 500$ at this point undermines future actions that would require you to earn more money first.

Please also try to implement a consistent time system. Being able to talk once after a good night's sleep and then being too exhausted for anything else is frustrating, especially when you can do five rounds of yoga without getting tired.

Also, try to better adapt the background images to the time of day. The day-night cycle doesn't always seem to work logically.

But the most important thing to make qualitative progress here is really a revision or replacement of many images.
Thanks for the feedback! Initially ,I was going for a time-based background system. When I started working on this game ,I started off at the dorm part instead of at home and the backgrounds in that have a time-based images, such as night , day , evening . You can find these in the images folder for dorm at least. It's a lot of if-else statements , But rest assured i have it in my notes ! And its a good point that we should be able to run away from home with less money then figure out a way to make it ... I will look into it for the future updates .
BTW there is a scene in listen to dads demands where you find a USB with crypto worth 2000 dollars if you missed it !

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And thanks for doing the compression ! It went to less than 10 % of original storage size !
Convert your pngs to 97% quality webps and your won't lose quality but the size will be drastically reduced.
(My compression is 80% quality)
 
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I do think the money could use some balancing, either lower the money you get or make the needed amount a bit higher... Right now it feels quite fast to get it, since you either get it by doing this stuff or not at all. Maybe add an event where either one of them may steal some money back maybe.
 
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At first glance, it looked interesting to me, but what's absolute nonsense is that the FMC is afraid of being captured and brought back as an example... she's an adult... need I say more? Corruption is all well and good, but it should definitely be up to the player whether they want to allow it or not... I hope that's the case... as a player, I personally want to have options about what happens and what doesn't... for me, it's more important that a suitable and interesting backstory and continuing story are told based on the decisions... sex scenes are secondary for me and should only happen if you want them and not be forced... I hope that since this is just a demo, a proper backstory will be added, and as I said, the developer should keep in mind that the FMC is an adult and that the stepfather and stepbrother have no power over her since they aren't even biological family... but I think with reasonable storytelling, that could work. The game could be quite interesting.
 
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