I especially like the 6 fingers on the hand. That issue has been fixed in most AI generators for a year and a half to two years now.
The stepfather and stepbrother could have been more presentable; they didn't need to be so sleazy. In this kind of situation, men, regardless of appearance, all behave the same way, and their current state is utterly repulsive.
I like how you think and would like to add chokers and leggings etc
Hell, maybe they straight up steal her clothes and force her to wear something else.Also is the corruption and lust stats completely non-functioning? Why? :/
Sleep in the Livingroom when the step-father has over 80 anger.
Hi there , thank you for trying my game !
Apologies if it didnt live up to your expectations , this is my first game so I am still coming up with how to balance things etc.
Right now the scenes threshold values are based on characters intimacy and anger ( you can check them from phone > stats ) .
I am still thinking about how to use corruption here but having just 1 common corruption value would not justify our protagonist letting others jump straight to a higher corruption scene . Well I am still working on it .
Also, anything after running away has not been tested so forgive me if that doesn't work. (in next build i will fix at least the error reported by users here .)
For scenes guide follow this post :
Once again, thank you all for trying my game. I felt so happy when I saw people post they would even support this game on Patreon etc thanks a lot for saying that ! But I have no idea how any of that works and pretty sure they would not allow something like this to be featured . I would have to create incest_patch etc which i dont want to tone down the game. But I would appreciate if there are people who want to join me on this project . If you have ideas that we could implement , if you can write scenes but dont know how to code I can teach you, if you can draw art we can collaborate ! But i cant pay you since i have low salary . If we do setup patreon in later months I will share the money from it equally if we do end up collaborating. My Discord is madd5398. I can help anyone setup the things i do but at least be good at writing scenes (I am not ) or coding or creating art .
Also i dont know why i cant reply back to conversations on f95zone ,I have more than 5 posts im pretty sure ? But i have seen your convos and thanks for the support !
Next build is still gonna focus on home events. I know it needs more polish, as others have rightfully pointed out. Hopefully next build is sometime in February.
Apologies if it didnt live up to your expectations , this is my first game so I am still coming up with how to balance things etc.
Right now the scenes threshold values are based on characters intimacy and anger ( you can check them from phone > stats ) .
I am still thinking about how to use corruption here but having just 1 common corruption value would not justify our protagonist letting others jump straight to a higher corruption scene . Well I am still working on it .
Also, anything after running away has not been tested so forgive me if that doesn't work. (in next build i will fix at least the error reported by users here .)
For scenes guide follow this post :
Hi there !
Thanks for all the feedback, Apologies for missing the AI art tag, I thought AI CG was enough
As for writing, I did use AI I wrote the major outline and the interactions, then using GitHub Copilot asked it to detail it and add sensory details to it. Again apologies for making you read through that slop
In this game I implemented corruption as a variable but havent used it yet .
To increase intamacy the fastest use kitchen scenes with almost 0 willpower and their intamacy values goes up real fast , To increase anger you can either do a negatie response on phone to them or listen to their demands and then click refuse.
Here is a comprehensive list of Events available in game and how to get them:
Anger EVENTS
1. Sleeping in Living room with dad anger >= 80 then with a probability of 60 %
2. After folding clothes event in Clean dad's room with dad anger >= 50 ( Folding clothes happen in clean dad room after 1st clean dad room with a probability of 40 % if dad lust is >=50 and other 60 % is grope event while you are cleaning under bed )
Kitchen Events
1. Go to Cook food For Both characters dad/brother and have upto 6 misses .Then at 7th miss they leave . ( At first you will resist all interaction even if you press Allow him ,this then checks your willpower vs his lust ,dominance and if he wins he gains intamacy a lot . If his intamacy value is higher than the act intimacy then you cant say no to him with text like " he has done far worst to me " .
To gain intamacy value fastest use shower or kitchen scenes on almomst 0 willpower )
Shower Events
1. For both dad and brother if either of them have lust >=30 . ( Lust increases every day you sleep so thats very easy to get )
2. If you stay silent , the act just goes up to intamacy level . E.g if your intamacy level is 15 then you stay silent and he rremoves your towel , if your intamacy level is 10 he will not try to remove your towel .
3. If you talk to him it again is a battle of his lust, dominance vs your willpower, Try to lose more often to get higher scenes or intamacy level .
Talk To brother/Father
1. Simple event just to talk to them in their room , not much to add here
Listen to their demands
1. Listen to dads demands- You need to research about cram school in your room 3 times , should have talked to him at least 2/3 times and intamacy value >=20
2. Listen to brothers demands - Research cram school 3 times at least and talk to him at least 3 times . Then with intamacy value >=15
Dad clean events
1. You need dad lust >=50 for higher chance of events happening otherwise it just goes to a quick clean.
2. 2 types of event one where you go under the bed for cleaning and other where he wants you to check his used clothes if they are good to wear or not .
For hints of events, i tried to use phone to give hints , I will add more in the future.
For the future updates I will be adding more anger events for brother,a the ftermath of the anger event in the living room since it's a big thing. I will try to make a different character for brother, but i cant promise better ART sorry
Once again, thanks a lot for trying this game. This is my first game and your review means a lot ! I have read the bug reports for after the demo and please reach out on discord madd5398 if you wanna join me on this!( no payment sorry but I will teach you what i know for free )
Once again, thank you all for trying my game. I felt so happy when I saw people post they would even support this game on Patreon etc thanks a lot for saying that ! But I have no idea how any of that works and pretty sure they would not allow something like this to be featured . I would have to create incest_patch etc which i dont want to tone down the game. But I would appreciate if there are people who want to join me on this project . If you have ideas that we could implement , if you can write scenes but dont know how to code I can teach you, if you can draw art we can collaborate ! But i cant pay you since i have low salary . If we do setup patreon in later months I will share the money from it equally if we do end up collaborating. My Discord is madd5398. I can help anyone setup the things i do but at least be good at writing scenes (I am not ) or coding or creating art .
Also i dont know why i cant reply back to conversations on f95zone ,I have more than 5 posts im pretty sure ? But i have seen your convos and thanks for the support !
Next build is still gonna focus on home events. I know it needs more polish, as others have rightfully pointed out. Hopefully next build is sometime in February.
status10
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Finally someone said it. It's gotten out of hand rly. Yesterday I found on Steam an account that was created to detect and badly review games that have the slightest usage of AI in them. Obsession combined with tons of free time does things to you I guess.
Also ppl love to create common enemies to group up and hate nowadays. Another volatile factor for this newly founded AI Inquisition I think.
then go play another game dude. stop asking for people to change their games to meet your desires.
thats his plan even animate some scenes as well if they took the time to read the intro they would know instead of spam clicking through everything lol
Regarding AI Art:
Other person: SIX FINGERS!
Me: Huh, wasn't even looking there. Something else kinda distracted me. (*Blush*)
And then there's this:
Okay, so how many fingers are you seeing now?
(Sadly, this same problem exists in the "no towel" version.)
Other person: SIX FINGERS!
Me: Huh, wasn't even looking there. Something else kinda distracted me. (*Blush*)
And then there's this:
Okay, so how many fingers are you seeing now?
(Sadly, this same problem exists in the "no towel" version.)
TanyaC
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I'm fairly down with this.
I quite enjoy things with the premise of like, using sex to manage other people's anger/get things from them. From a position of inherent submissiveness/danger. It's neat. I see that that's not entirely what this is, and idk what shape the whole... pretending to be a boy thing will go down. Presumably sex will be used to keep people from revealing your deception. Sounds good. Neat.
I do have some feedback.
First the positive. I like the sandbox shape of the game. I know some prefer visual novel style things for a more streamlined quality... but I always have found them to be rather restrictive. There's less for me to engage with, typically. The quality of such experiences has to be either really high, or they better give a lot of things to do as they go along. I want variables to build n shit.
However...
I'm not exactly a fan of AI. So I'm just always going to see that as a negative. But you're trying, and you seem earnest about it, so whatever. I won't linger on the use of AI for the images. I hope the time saved is useful to you.
I will note, the writing... Look. It's awful. AI for images... ok I guess. I can see the need. Even if you can draw up a nice bit of porn, it takes forever. For an amateur work like this that requires talent in multiple realms? That can be a big ask. If you have all those skills one might wonder why you'd even waste them on making a pornographic game, when you could shoot for mainstream success.
But with writing... AI just sucks too much. Maybe eventually it'll be good enough to be passable? Though I'll still hold the opinion that anything written by an AI isn't even worth reading. Writing is just something that is so much more of a direct representation of what you intend for a story to be. A picture might be worth a thousand words or whatever, but it's also something very mechanical in instances like this. It's trying to get across specific things, like "lady has her tits out" and it can manage it without requiring a lot of your personal intent for something. The writing is there to get across to us readers what you want the story to say, where you want it to go, and what you think about the topics. This isn't like, software documentation. If you write something in a context like this, you have to put something of yourself into it or it's just work to read through. AI doesn't have anything to put into it. At best, it has some weighted values to check off. That makes it shit. It will always be shit. The only way for an AI to be good at writing stories would be for it to walk out of an actual sci-fi story, and just be an artificial person with actual thoughts and opinions.
The writing is not interesting. There's too much of it, and none if it worth reading. It's the worst of both worlds. The quality is bad, the quantity is too much. To get into specifics, I also think it's trying to give too much detail from the PoVs of the male characters. That's not necessary, though it can work. We don't need all PoVs, you can reveal what they want and why they're doing it without getting into their heads. Not knowing allows the reader to fill in the blanks, which is often better than being exact, for a number of reasons.
Written erotica is fairly difficult to make hot. In instances like this where you're not confident, I'd lean on the premise and the visuals, without lingering on the writing too much. You can become passable with just a little bit of effort. You see something hot in this, just type out what you like about it, what would be hot to you in this, or what you think would be hot to others, if you aren't into something. Literally, you CANNOT do worse than the autogen. It's limp and cold, It has no interest in the topic and It pads the script like it's trying to meet a wordcount. If you have to rely on it, at least keep it brief. Don't make us read much of it. If all the writing will ever be to you is a mechanical description of a scene, make sure that's ALL it is. It cannot replicate good writing. Don't even try.
Honestly, editing and managing an AI's writing into something passable seems like far more work than just banging something out yourself. You'd have to put in effort to do worse.
Anyway. I feel I've lingered too much on the negative. I think you're doing a good job for your first thing. It's quite competent. And ren'py isn't the easiest thing to work with when it comes to open designs like this. You also have done a LOT for a first showing. Which is commendable. Many people show up and there's fucking... nothing really. There is DEFINITELY something here. You might be trying to do a bit too much with the whole, dual premise of stuck in an abusive household (my preferred scenario, but do your thing) and the secret crossdressing thing. But hey, I see great potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how this will develop.
Best of luck to you dev, whatever your choices on the development look like. I hope you stick with it, and don't let any criticisms or negativity get to you. Especially when THIS is their source. We like to be overly entitled here.
I quite enjoy things with the premise of like, using sex to manage other people's anger/get things from them. From a position of inherent submissiveness/danger. It's neat. I see that that's not entirely what this is, and idk what shape the whole... pretending to be a boy thing will go down. Presumably sex will be used to keep people from revealing your deception. Sounds good. Neat.
I do have some feedback.
First the positive. I like the sandbox shape of the game. I know some prefer visual novel style things for a more streamlined quality... but I always have found them to be rather restrictive. There's less for me to engage with, typically. The quality of such experiences has to be either really high, or they better give a lot of things to do as they go along. I want variables to build n shit.
However...
I'm not exactly a fan of AI. So I'm just always going to see that as a negative. But you're trying, and you seem earnest about it, so whatever. I won't linger on the use of AI for the images. I hope the time saved is useful to you.
I will note, the writing... Look. It's awful. AI for images... ok I guess. I can see the need. Even if you can draw up a nice bit of porn, it takes forever. For an amateur work like this that requires talent in multiple realms? That can be a big ask. If you have all those skills one might wonder why you'd even waste them on making a pornographic game, when you could shoot for mainstream success.
But with writing... AI just sucks too much. Maybe eventually it'll be good enough to be passable? Though I'll still hold the opinion that anything written by an AI isn't even worth reading. Writing is just something that is so much more of a direct representation of what you intend for a story to be. A picture might be worth a thousand words or whatever, but it's also something very mechanical in instances like this. It's trying to get across specific things, like "lady has her tits out" and it can manage it without requiring a lot of your personal intent for something. The writing is there to get across to us readers what you want the story to say, where you want it to go, and what you think about the topics. This isn't like, software documentation. If you write something in a context like this, you have to put something of yourself into it or it's just work to read through. AI doesn't have anything to put into it. At best, it has some weighted values to check off. That makes it shit. It will always be shit. The only way for an AI to be good at writing stories would be for it to walk out of an actual sci-fi story, and just be an artificial person with actual thoughts and opinions.
The writing is not interesting. There's too much of it, and none if it worth reading. It's the worst of both worlds. The quality is bad, the quantity is too much. To get into specifics, I also think it's trying to give too much detail from the PoVs of the male characters. That's not necessary, though it can work. We don't need all PoVs, you can reveal what they want and why they're doing it without getting into their heads. Not knowing allows the reader to fill in the blanks, which is often better than being exact, for a number of reasons.
Written erotica is fairly difficult to make hot. In instances like this where you're not confident, I'd lean on the premise and the visuals, without lingering on the writing too much. You can become passable with just a little bit of effort. You see something hot in this, just type out what you like about it, what would be hot to you in this, or what you think would be hot to others, if you aren't into something. Literally, you CANNOT do worse than the autogen. It's limp and cold, It has no interest in the topic and It pads the script like it's trying to meet a wordcount. If you have to rely on it, at least keep it brief. Don't make us read much of it. If all the writing will ever be to you is a mechanical description of a scene, make sure that's ALL it is. It cannot replicate good writing. Don't even try.
Honestly, editing and managing an AI's writing into something passable seems like far more work than just banging something out yourself. You'd have to put in effort to do worse.
Anyway. I feel I've lingered too much on the negative. I think you're doing a good job for your first thing. It's quite competent. And ren'py isn't the easiest thing to work with when it comes to open designs like this. You also have done a LOT for a first showing. Which is commendable. Many people show up and there's fucking... nothing really. There is DEFINITELY something here. You might be trying to do a bit too much with the whole, dual premise of stuck in an abusive household (my preferred scenario, but do your thing) and the secret crossdressing thing. But hey, I see great potential. I'm looking forward to seeing how this will develop.
Best of luck to you dev, whatever your choices on the development look like. I hope you stick with it, and don't let any criticisms or negativity get to you. Especially when THIS is their source. We like to be overly entitled here.
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Just a small fan art video for the game.
The stepbrother is helping her in the kitchen at least !
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Areyouken
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Interesting.
The art style definitely goes with the sordid circumstances you are portraying.
Though it is AI-generated, it is still a breath of fresh air after all those same-same-same characters we usually get to see.
I'd also echo the comments above from OrgansMissing.
Final thought:
Would you see yourself adding the "horror" tag?
The potential is there.
The art style definitely goes with the sordid circumstances you are portraying.
Though it is AI-generated, it is still a breath of fresh air after all those same-same-same characters we usually get to see.
I'd also echo the comments above from OrgansMissing.
Final thought:
Would you see yourself adding the "horror" tag?
The potential is there.