Those are some really valuable suggestions, thank you very much! Save system already has some sort of slots implementation, but there's not that much of a gameplay and choices yet, so I made it unavailable for players for now.
Others The Perfect Pair Shall Rise! [Prototype-rev-1.1] [prostochel2002]
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Secret NTR, the best kind of NTR!
It's hard to say what the game needs since it's so early, but a couple of things I'd like to see.
Consistent poses: Right now the game has an idle pose and it quickly swaps to other actions whenever the mentor does something. I think it'd be nice if he was always there, idle, and it just changed his animation and naturally returned to the initial pose instead of hiding the book, repositioning the GF, placing the mentor and then playing an animation.
The last one here even changes the POV to behind them, and all of that makes the actions less "casual" than they could be, which would be way better.
This is surely going to be added in the future but a progression system is really important. Make it so every time they do something it makes them more willing to do that and more later, so the girl is corrupted further and they get bolder. If I'm getting it right, they won't do certain things if the torch light is above a certain value, maybe as time passes and the MC gets more and more focused/oblivious to them that threshold grows? If you add more than just "move forward" and "use item" to exploration, you can have a lot of fun events with all of that.
Also, for some reason, this game uses up all of my GPU. If you could tone that down it'd be great.
I'm excited to see what you will cook next. Godspeed, Dev!
It's hard to say what the game needs since it's so early, but a couple of things I'd like to see.
Consistent poses: Right now the game has an idle pose and it quickly swaps to other actions whenever the mentor does something. I think it'd be nice if he was always there, idle, and it just changed his animation and naturally returned to the initial pose instead of hiding the book, repositioning the GF, placing the mentor and then playing an animation.
The last one here even changes the POV to behind them, and all of that makes the actions less "casual" than they could be, which would be way better.
This is surely going to be added in the future but a progression system is really important. Make it so every time they do something it makes them more willing to do that and more later, so the girl is corrupted further and they get bolder. If I'm getting it right, they won't do certain things if the torch light is above a certain value, maybe as time passes and the MC gets more and more focused/oblivious to them that threshold grows? If you add more than just "move forward" and "use item" to exploration, you can have a lot of fun events with all of that.
Also, for some reason, this game uses up all of my GPU. If you could tone that down it'd be great.
I'm excited to see what you will cook next. Godspeed, Dev!
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Promising start. I'll add my wishes and comments.
- It would be interesting to add costumes for the girl in the future.
- Will there be some characterization of loyalty to the guy in the future or only corruption?
- For my part I will say that the number of erotic situations is much more important than the quality of drawing, better 10 scenes of 10 frames than one but 100.
- Maybe you have the technical ability to limit the rendering of 60 frames, I have a counter shows from 800 to 400 overloading unnecessarily video card.
Thanks for sharing the game, hope for a big addition/update soon.
- It would be interesting to add costumes for the girl in the future.
- Will there be some characterization of loyalty to the guy in the future or only corruption?
- For my part I will say that the number of erotic situations is much more important than the quality of drawing, better 10 scenes of 10 frames than one but 100.
- Maybe you have the technical ability to limit the rendering of 60 frames, I have a counter shows from 800 to 400 overloading unnecessarily video card.
Thanks for sharing the game, hope for a big addition/update soon.
- Mar 9, 2019
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Promising prototype! Reminds me of keganilabo (which I love!). I hope the her corruption won't be too sudden. If you're planning to reveal the NTR to the mc later on, try to milk it with scenes of some subtle (or even not so subtle) clues. I also love minor details like a leftover hair on her mouth after bj. Something like that. You can also portray the mc as somewhat oblivious to these clues at first, but then gradualllly (as in pace it in a "not so fast" way). Point is "the NTR is in the (minor) details"[personal opinion/preference].
It's just my suggestions~
Nice idea to take inspiration from kegani tho~ Maybe you can make this one into a new flavor. Maybe even better. Good luck~
Also,
I noticed this issue too. I can hear my PC cooking lol. Appreciate it if you can address this~
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- Jun 13, 2018
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Not a whole lot to talk about as of yet but I like the idea.
We need more NTR games where combat isn't just there to slow you down and waste your time.
Very good concept so far. Maybe add the option to use potions during combat, that'd be great.
We need more NTR games where combat isn't just there to slow you down and waste your time.
Very good concept so far. Maybe add the option to use potions during combat, that'd be great.
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The concept is great- assuming money will be tight. You should lose everything you take as it is- so no stock up resources can be used to break the balance and introduce like an inn fee that you need to pay that gets larger- or new fees down the line that keep hitting your stock of currency. Since gold is everything- and life force(to avoid being NTR'd I guess)- ... Right now lust goes back to 0when it reaches 100 so either that's a bug due to earlyversions or you plan for extra degrees and tiers of lust. dying should be a huge penalty to lust- assuming heroine is alone while you're out etc. Lot can be done- it'll probably be a simple game but quite erotic when done.
Like the heroines look too. I'll be watching this one.
Like the heroines look too. I'll be watching this one.
Promising start. I'll add my wishes and comments.
- It would be interesting to add costumes for the girl in the future.
- Will there be some characterization of loyalty to the guy in the future or only corruption?
- For my part I will say that the number of erotic situations is much more important than the quality of drawing, better 10 scenes of 10 frames than one but 100.
- Maybe you have the technical ability to limit the rendering of 60 frames, I have a counter shows from 800 to 400 overloading unnecessarily video card.
Thanks for sharing the game, hope for a big addition/update soon.
Thank you for your feedback! Basically everything you gentlemen listed is already, in some sense, in my to do/to consider list.
Especially these things:
- Clothing options and their corruption requirements.
- Aster's bonds with Mentor and future characters (Relationship values etc.)
- Sexual preferences - H-actions' frequency and pleasure amount dealt based on these preferences. Right now you can see Aster standing still while Mentor's holding her in the very first dungeon. It won't be the case in the future, when corruption values and requirements have better implementation.
- Clueless MC and hints (displaced or removed clothes and yes, even leftover pubic hair on mouth and breasts)
- More common actions (forward, item), more battle actions to spice up the gameplay.
- NTS/Passive MC and no low Torchlight requirement for H-actions as the MC's lowliness increases
Also thank you for reporting high GPU usage! I forgot to turn on V-Sync and cap the FPS back. I'd gladly upload the fix here, but I don't want to bother staff members with such miniscule updates.
I will consider it, but I actually thought of the opposite. To play with different angles, zoom-ins, tempo and everything. MC doesn't see that anyway. It's you, the player, who sees. Why not take a better angle on that?
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Just from watching the previews and the questions you've answered, I'm already viewing this with a very positive light. Very excited to see your game evolve well into what you're shaping it up to be. Nice premise and interesting goals to be implemented. Definitely added to my Watch list.
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I just finished the game. I'm not sure if I found everything that's supposed to be in it, since the game's still barebones, but the heroine's design is decent enough, and i love silhouette/hidden scenes in NTR, so I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this.
Also, I noticed there's a voyeurism tag for the game. Is that content already included or for the future? Because so far, it seems like the MC is still oblivious of what's happening? since the harassment only starts during low torchlight moments.
Also, I noticed there's a voyeurism tag for the game. Is that content already included or for the future? Because so far, it seems like the MC is still oblivious of what's happening? since the harassment only starts during low torchlight moments.
Also, would be nice to hear you expand more on this part if you don't mind, haha.
Excellent proof of concept, I'm loving what's here so far! Definitely a pretty clear inspiration from Kegani Laboratory, and the "NTR in the shadows" thing reminds me of Spider and Butterfly, and that is most certainly not a bad thing. Keep up the good work!
As far as recommendations go, giving Aster alternate blushing/aroused and/or disheveled idle poses would be awesome. Maybe have an option where the torches go out slower below 25/30 so we get so see more if we want to? I imagine the mentor is going to get bolder later on, but I'll still mention I'd like to see the mentor eventually making moves earlier at higher lust(?) values.
Great stuff so far, I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one!
As far as recommendations go, giving Aster alternate blushing/aroused and/or disheveled idle poses would be awesome. Maybe have an option where the torches go out slower below 25/30 so we get so see more if we want to? I imagine the mentor is going to get bolder later on, but I'll still mention I'd like to see the mentor eventually making moves earlier at higher lust(?) values.
Great stuff so far, I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one!
Does prototype mean this is more just to make sure the programming works? That there isn't much to play yet?
I like what I'm seeing here, it looks very much like Trap of Breath Concealed Magic.
I like what I'm seeing here, it looks very much like Trap of Breath Concealed Magic.
In future updates, I want to make it so that the player makes decisions on trying to find everything out and struggle with it (to get to Pure Love) or give in and love it (NTR -> NTS), or continue to play as clueless MC (hidden NTR). Ideally, everything through gameplay and not just with dialogue options. So once you step on the path of NTR -> NTS, cheating is no longer hidden and there is no Torchlight requirements or something like that. But this will need to be balanced out, since Mentor is planned to be a very powerful unit, which, in this case, always be distracted by Aster. So we'll see. I also thought about adding some common tropes like an option to ask Aster to work part-time, where she gets gradually "corrupted" or straight up asking her to exhibit herself (with "escalations") to get a discount at shop, when on low money. Of course I'm not making any promises yet, but I see no obstacles other than dying of starvation, really.
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I suppose it has to do with immersion, with having a better idea of what the MC is seeing. Adding some sort of consistency to that makes the actions more erotic, otherwise, you might as well ditch the low light turning their models into silhouettes because that's pretty much the same thing. It makes seeing what's going on harder, but much more fun.
Are you planning on adding multiple routes to the game? I like when the secret NTR remains secret and I hate Netorase but you seem to be considering that down the line.
Edit: nvm you answered it. Thanks for the quick responses.
I love the idea, but I would prefer the game to be more of a slow burn NTR rather than a harassment NTR...
Like, she is super in love with us, but as we fail to defeat monsters and her mentor who is a dick interfere to save us from these monsters, she would gain more admiration for him... So the gameplay loop would be us trying to beat the monsters to keep her love on us rather just keep the light lit...
And I would love to see her clothes change because we ask or because she gets corrupted...
If the game has a Stress system, where we the hero gain debuffs when we are stressed, and sex would be a way to keep stress low, she could be persuaded to use skimpy outfits to please us the hero and give the player a reason to why she dress like a slut xD maybe the clothes could have a bonus to reduce stress, but the more sex we have in the dungeon the less stress theses same clothes have that week? And the more she dress slut, the more her mentor wants to bang her xD
Edit: Maybe the mentor has some clothes preferences for her, so we have to discover what she would have to wear to keep his interest low...
Like, she is super in love with us, but as we fail to defeat monsters and her mentor who is a dick interfere to save us from these monsters, she would gain more admiration for him... So the gameplay loop would be us trying to beat the monsters to keep her love on us rather just keep the light lit...
And I would love to see her clothes change because we ask or because she gets corrupted...
If the game has a Stress system, where we the hero gain debuffs when we are stressed, and sex would be a way to keep stress low, she could be persuaded to use skimpy outfits to please us the hero and give the player a reason to why she dress like a slut xD maybe the clothes could have a bonus to reduce stress, but the more sex we have in the dungeon the less stress theses same clothes have that week? And the more she dress slut, the more her mentor wants to bang her xD
Edit: Maybe the mentor has some clothes preferences for her, so we have to discover what she would have to wear to keep his interest low...
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Honestly, I've been looking forwards to a game like this, I've never been a fan of NTR unless it's hidden for some reason so this ticks all my boxes.
As for suggestions, items for the player to buy so we can see what's going on but the MC cannot, I imagine dungeons will get longer and more things will be going on behind your back during them anyway, perma items like that can be goals for the player to save up for as well other then armor and stuff.
Other then that, add a guard ability or even meditation for people who want to drag a fight out... for wholesome reasons of course.
As for suggestions, items for the player to buy so we can see what's going on but the MC cannot, I imagine dungeons will get longer and more things will be going on behind your back during them anyway, perma items like that can be goals for the player to save up for as well other then armor and stuff.
Other then that, add a guard ability or even meditation for people who want to drag a fight out... for wholesome reasons of course.
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Is this game safe? I'm playing it but my PC doesn't stop to make sounds as if i'm playing something that requires a lot of memory or something...
Edit: I closed the game and my PC stopped making sounds... I am really confused
Edit: I closed the game and my PC stopped making sounds... I am really confused
My bad. GPU overhead got already reported here. I fixed this issue in the newest version. It's available on itch and boosty for free, if you don't mind downloading from there.
It's alright man, I was just getting really worried because I thought I had a virus or something. I really liked the game, these kind of "mistery NTR" it's pretty hot and the girl looks hot too. I wish you good luck with your projects