Still following this game, loving the art.. but its in a.. weird place so far. Like..
The point of view sort've switches. One moment we're the MC, doing things, seeing things, being teased with some description where we (the player) get 'something's wrong' (that somehow the MC is oblivious too.. NRE can be like that though damn, this MC just got hit with the stupid-stick something fierce). But then suddenly we change to third person narration of ".. and the MC doesn't realize that she is like.. Totally cheating on him, wink wink".
The pace feels kinda rushed. Not like 'just getting to the action', that's fine and hot. But like
Its.. jarring. Has the MC been cursed already and we find out later? Is that why he's acting so freaking weird?
And the pacing.. all those images... it feels like you're supposed to be interacting with a bunch of stuff, but really you're just supposed to go to like.. 3 locations where stuff happens. All the rest is just click-for-nothing.
please drop the ai text, maybe use it for a rough structure on how you wanna approach a scene/plot, but for gods sake rewrite it in a way that doesn't meander so horrifically and sounds so pretentious and dramatic.
(if you're not using ai for the text.. well the sentiment stands, there's a lot of dramatic lines but very little substance, please shorten that up or at least have the dialogue actually progress the conversation rather than being a collection of grand statements stacked together)
Thanks! Don't let the haters get ya down! The AI images look great, the NTR/cuck premise is hot, you're building a cool thing! Feminization not my bag but thanks for including more ideas in your game for people with other interests
I prefer to play games on Android, any guidance on how I can do that? I'm usually skeptical of downloading things so I liked visiting this one on browser... not sure how to now that it's gone from web version and out of date
I prefer to play games on Android, any guidance on how I can do that? I'm usually skeptical of downloading things so I liked visiting this one on browser... not sure how to now that it's gone from web version and out of date