HTML The Right Swipe - Release 1 [Chapter 1-3]

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"The Right Swipe" text adventure is now out. Chapter 1-3.

It's about a you, the player, making the wrong swipe on tinder while looking at an familiar face.

Genre: milf, date, life, tits, loser, incest, mom, aunt, spying, handjob, secretary.
Future genre: teen, bj, cousin.

The story is rewritten to allow a bigger sexual buildup.

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I release this as twine (sugarcube 2) for now.

Thanks for playing.
 
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I played it though. Simple but very nice, and gave me a stiffy. What more could I ask from a bit of Twine?

Only one typo I noticed:
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I see you mentioned "attribute checks" but i didn't notice any difference in the story with a couple of different character point customizations. The story was almost entirely linear - And the game genre tags.... Is there supposed to be more than just a date with the MILF?
 
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osanaiko said:
I played it though. Simple but very nice, and gave me a stiffy. What more could I ask from a bit of Twine?

Only one typo I noticed:
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I see you mentioned "attribute checks" but i didn't notice any difference in the story with a couple of different character point customizations. The story was almost entirely linear - And the game genre tags.... Is there supposed to be more than just a date with the MILF?
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Thanks for testing it.

After posting here I started working on 2 more chapters. So right now I have 3 chapters in total. Around 10k words.

The checks are mostly flavor. It's the weakest point of the game right now. So I might skip for a while.
 
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I don't like the new engine. I do like the story.

There are no controls, no scroll back, no way to re-read something once you click (no scrollback, no history).

This engine is like Ren'py without any of the good stuff in Ren'py.

Really good story. I love stories where women are sexually assertive.
 
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xcrash said:
I don't like the new engine. I do like the story.

There are no controls, no scroll back, no way to re-read something once you click (no scrollback, no history).

This engine is like Ren'py without any of the good stuff in Ren'py.

Really good story. I love stories where women are sexually assertive.
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I will take notes. See what I can do about the history. I never use the history myself in ren'py games so never thought about it.

Thanks for playing.
 
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vnAdult said:
I will take notes. See what I can do about the history. I never use the history myself in ren'py games so never thought about it.

Thanks for playing.
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There are also no save controls. That's probably less of an issue right now with very straightforward content, but I was wondering each time I had to make a choice what the other choice meant to the story. I've been trained by games where we can save and restore.

This may not be a big deal but if you make a much longer/complex story later, it will be helpful for players to be able to try different options to get different results.
 
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