HTML - The Road Trip [v0.3] [AnonDux]

I was big fan of his latest work ''Locked Down'' but i didnt liked this one.. If we compare to Locked Down, Pacing is much worser than locked down. no build up no tease . She MAY get f'd in just chapter 2 !! thats so bad ! It's a personal opinion, but I don't find Jane's model hot. A better model choice could have been made. Another issue is the routes in the game. In the previous game, there were no choices, so you didn't miss any content, but in this one, some choices are very critical, which means you might miss out on content. A marker indicating the outcomes of choices could have been provided . Half of the game is spent looking at images mountains, rocks, and dirt etc. and yes, it's very boring. I think they were added just to extend the game time.
Overall, It could've been much better game.. If things were not rushed..
I could prefer similar to previous game instead of this one..

Good start for the game. Good pace, images, videos, and storyline concept. Good choice of model for the girlfriend. There is a decent balance between text and images though I wouldn't mind more images to help the story along between the blobs of text

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Promising start, looking back at the author previous game, gameplay looks more engaging and the choices the player takes really seems as if will have an impact later into the story.

Dialogue between the MC and the girlfriend is believable and helps the inmersion and overall feel of the game.