Overall I think this game is great.
I noticed the spelling errors and such are reduced.
There defiantly has some minor corruption by your boss, which I like. I like that I don't know if he is a bad guy. There is a good guy to romance if you want to stay on the straight and narrow. Parents feel like people, though a little stereotypical, but within reason. People feel like people so far. I really like the writing.
Game pace is reasonable for what is happening. There are so few hours a day to create, and people think 8 hours a day looks like 1 hour from an outsiders perspective. Could it go faster? Probably, but there needs to be money for that to happen, so you can hire staff.
Saying that... I feel like the sex scenes are a tad short. The blow job scene could have been a tad bit longer. But the newest scene most certainly felt short once penetration happened. Not only that, I felt like it was super unrealistic. Maybe it's me but in reality, every single women I know, never had an orgasm their first time, and half of them actively didn't enjoy losing their virginity. Got a vibe that it felt like a dude writing about how he thinks a girl losing her virginity. I'm cool with there being no actual cherry, since lots of girls lose them other ways, but it just didn't read to me like it was her first time. I'll let go of the topic. Of course that is anecdotal, and there are people who LOVED IT. I will be honest that I didn't like that first vaginal scene, and it's a little disappointing. I assume there will be more art to it...
I think this game is great, and warrants financial support. Like 4/5 currently with room to grow into 5/5.