I could have put only 4 stars, because there are improvements to be made to this game (which have moreover been rightly listed in the comments, so I will not go back on them).
I preferred to put 5 stars to motivate you to go further:
1-a lot of choices and action scenes, which make the game dynamic and interesting from the beginning,
2-different kinks are developed and allow you to have characters with particularities,
3- the "fantasy" atmosphere is really nice and deserves to be developed,
4- there is a real scenario (and damn thank you !!), which is different from many other games where we often find the same thing (the main character who rapes everyone, i understood that it is exciting for some people, but it quickly loses its interest).
So keep it on, it's a good and original start !
I preferred to put 5 stars to motivate you to go further:
1-a lot of choices and action scenes, which make the game dynamic and interesting from the beginning,
2-different kinks are developed and allow you to have characters with particularities,
3- the "fantasy" atmosphere is really nice and deserves to be developed,
4- there is a real scenario (and damn thank you !!), which is different from many other games where we often find the same thing (the main character who rapes everyone, i understood that it is exciting for some people, but it quickly loses its interest).
So keep it on, it's a good and original start !