Review as of Ep 4
Visuals
Fantastic aesthetic in this game. Top tier renders. Lighting is good, poses are excellent. Characters' bodies have great textures and clarity. Very refreshing to see.
Ariana is sexy, but to a degree I feel like the aging applied to her is a bit much; if her son is freshly 18, we can reasonably assume she's as young as 36-38. She appears in her 40s-50s to my eye.
Sarah is also hot, as is Monica. All 3 women have a mature hourglass body but it’s a truly perfect one; many renders capture a heart shape figure from the waist down. I’m glad every woman has large breasts and a big ass.
Story/Dialog
The story is atrocious. It
could have been intriguing if it were a convincing narrative, but it's not. Don't play this one expecting a compelling narrative or setting.
Dev seems to have somehow forgotten that in the very first scene with Ariana and a prospective buyer that he both claims to have never been married, then moments later that she
Pacing/timing issues that quite frankly are just lazy and overlooked. Example:
Some of the vernacular of character speech comes across as having been translated and then refined. I don't know if that's the case, but any countries with English as their primary language don't say things like "
Do you want to watch the new installment of [xyz]?" It is just weird.
Why does MC's inner monologue contradict itself so openly? Example:
There are many more examples I could cite here that just make you go “huh?” But, you get the picture.
The dialog/narrative itself is OK. English contains good grammar and punctuation throughout, with some minor errors.
Other
UI is excellent. Textbox is unobtrusive, clear distinction in spoken vs thought dialog. I'd like to be able to hide the quick menu, but that's being pedantic.
The music is fantastic. Excellent choices that evoke subconscious/emotional/visceral responses. Very well done.
It’s confusing that some choices are unavailable but not hidden. It should be clear as to whether that is due to the point system, or that the resulting scene just isn’t completed yet.
I’m not a fan of the forced NTR (and yes, it
is forced if you don't provide an option to either disrupt it or skip it).
Final Thoughts
This is a visually pleasing VN with an enticing story concept, but it is unfortunately ruined by bad pacing, lack of backstory, lack of development of the characters, unrealistic narratives, and contradictions. Dev should have a dedicated writer they can bounce ideas off of for both story content as well as character interaction. It’s obvious their strength lies in the ability to render a good scene, but that seems to be where their talent ends. I’m going to keep up with this one solely for the lewd quality, but the bar is on the ground for storytelling.