I like it, having 2 playable characters leaves a lot of potential, I just feel like there was a lot of filler dialogue right in the middle that I honestly skipped through (The D&D dialogue. I like it as much as the next guy but it was really dry and goes on for way too long imo).
The idea of having the main characters act into each other from the start is neat, being ashamed for their attraction or only of them them making any advances, lots of good stuff that can be done but that is A LOT of paths you need to write.
The writing feels decent enough with dialogue, but the characters feel rather stiff in how they talk in some places, not quite how normal people would have a conversation (Ignoring the obvious trauma).
The renders are good as well, a lot of variety when characters are talking, and the facial expressions are also very nice, feels like sometimes they kinda get a bit robotic though, especially during the dinner D&D conversation.
One nitpick is that the characters names, Alexis and Alexander, are too close in colour to easily pick apart when skimming through the dialogue. Could I suggest changing one of their colours to be able to tell them apart better?
Being able to change their names would be nice but I'm not dying without the options, just any family naming both of their children 'Alex' seems a bit silly to me
I would also love more choices, but this being the first (Short) chapter I don't feel like its a terrible issue. I like that 2/3 choices heavily impact the final scenes of the chapter.
Overall really good for a first chapter! Short but I will be playing all future releases. Thanks for your hard work!