VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Tutor [v1.1] [c.Shadow]

Review for The Tutor [v1.1] -
Very low quality renders and poorly developed male , female charecters . Turned a decent VN with interesting plot into Sandbox on second release ( free roam with no hints to what to do next and a Map which is in very low quality with no marking the area you wanna visit and it's too dark to see anything in that map ) . And there a few typos which I found while playing the game . And it seems like dev has no fixed idea to the story , just wanna add as many fetishes into the game as possible , nothing wrong with that , just mention that in dev notes or something . So after a decent first release, nothing much to play in the next .

v1.1 review -
Renders are below par even for Honey select game and story is nothing extraordinary . Moving on the writing is simply bad , there are few choices where it doesn't matter what you choose , it plays the same , if the outcome is same why even bother giving that choice for the players and a few gameover choices , they both makes it like playing kinetic novel . It seems Free roam and Map is added to this version , it's simple for now and nothing grindy yet just making us do some extra steps that can be done in a VN . Some of the characters name are unreadable with yellow text . English is not my first language but you could at least check for basic mistakes and spelling errors like " potion " . This game is worth 2 stars for now .

This is an excellent game, with a very nice story. So far i love it and i can't wait to see more.

I'm sure, in time the renders will get better and better. Keep up the good work c.Shadow and thanks for the story so far.

Positive points:
A game that can be very good in the future. Interesting plot and characters.
Made with one of the Illusion engines so 10/10.
format VN format without killing you by clicking.
Good character models for women. Like the latest Illusion games, the men look weird.
Bad points:
Amateur.
A fairly low rendering and textures (I don't know how this works but I think it requires a more powerful computer or someone to render them for it)

Promising prologue. The spelling and grammar is a bit off, but the maker said english wasn't their language and it isn't machine translation. If it is its edited very well. The animation is a little glitchy, but not unplayable. Really the only major problem here will probably be that it will probably take up a bunch of GBs when its done, and that is something that can't really be helped. I'm looking forward to more of this!