I've tried your game but it keep crashing when trying to choose an outfitThanks for letting me know. I've uploaded it toYou must be registered to see the links
I've tried your game but it keep crashing when trying to choose an outfitThanks for letting me know. I've uploaded it toYou must be registered to see the links
What type of device are you using? Windows, Mac, Linux, etc... The outfit choice is a simple menu and if block, there's nothing there that I see that should cause a crash.I've tried your game but it keep crashing when trying to choose an outfit
WindowsWhat type of device are you using? Windows, Mac, Linux, etc... The outfit choice is a simple menu and if block, there's nothing there that I see that should cause a crash.
Sounds like a planI'm sorry, I'm not sure, but that may have been as far as I had made it, so it may just drop back to the main menu. I'm sorry, I don't recall. I've been enjoying learning how to do things in RenPy, and I've continued. I understand from this feedback that I should a point that has a natural end. I'll include a note at the end of the next version so that I know for sure where things ended.
This first act isn't going to be too long, so I hope to have it put together in the next week or two.
Thank you for testing and giving me feedback.
I'm in. hope to see more soonI want to tell more that I can in a few panels. I'm trying to learn a little in Ren'Py to try to tell more story than I can with just the images. I haven't done much, there are only about 15 images and it doesn't even have a title screen... But I am wondering if anyone cares to look at this and give me any feedback.
I uploaded a VERY short start to a little project that I'm calling "Nicole's Story". It's a 7z that should unpack and play normally.
You must be registered to see the links
I need constructive criticism of what I can do better, and if you want to see me continue it I need likes and comments to let me know that it's worthwhile to spend time and effort on.
First of all, i really like that your renderings meet the original look from the tyrant. Great work. I absolutely think that its worth continuing with that story. Absolute fantasticI'm in. hope to see more soon
Same problem for me.I've tried your game but it keep crashing when trying to choose an outfit
Oh i Thought this is the end of the demo, maybe a crash?Same problem for me.
Looking at these wonderful work, hope to see the continuation of this beloved game . Thank you very much, we are waiting for new worksI've uploaded a first version of my FanFic, Nicole's Story. A link to download it can be found in the game forums.
Post with Download link in Games Forum
Here a few sample images from the story:
View attachment 3388866
View attachment 3388870
View attachment 3388874
Imagination of a screenwriter or did you mix up the facts ?I've uploaded a first version of my FanFic, Nicole's Story. A link to download it can be found in the game forums.
Post with Download link in Games Forum
Here a few sample images from the story:
View attachment 3388866
View attachment 3388870
View attachment 3388874
Maybe I'm swimming against the current of the river but the idea of telling the story from a different perspective is great.Thanks for the feedback.
The feedback I've received has let me know that I should not continue to spend effort on this story.
People want the characters, details and events to be the same, they are not interested in an "alternate universe" kind of story. That's good feedback, but it doesn't match with any story I want to tell.
I have also noticed that my original post of the game was removed and I was given no notice, so it seems like there is no place here for FanFic.
It appears to me that if I want to tell a story, I should make an independent story with all new characters and settings. That seems like more time and effort than I have to spare right now.
Thank you to everyone who took the time to take a look at the story, and to everyone who sent me comments. I appreciate your honesty and input.
This was my render from a long time ago when i was just started daz.Maybe I'm swimming against the current of the river but the idea of telling the story from a different perspective is great.
Of course if it will be a good story, eg. Nicole as a strong woman with her own plans for the reality she must live in.
If this will be the story. If Nicole will be a sperm bucket for every black in town and every scum in town,
You won't find anything new. Everyone paints the same.
Cubero had some great ideas, but his hasn't been here for a very very long time.
Mando Logica author of great pictures with Nicole also had cool ideas, we talked about it many times.
I would love to see something good. Good luck and I wish You success.
PS
A long time ago someone made a picture of Nicole being hugged by a strongly tanned gentleman
Nicole was beautiful, so I removed the horny guy and I called it "Model Posing"
View attachment 3408490
If you want to reach out to a wider audience, you should. Many (most) people want the story and characters exactly the same as before. Hell, even the original developer ran into a minefield with every update, so no wonder he abandoned it!Thanks for the feedback.
It appears to me that if I want to tell a story, I should make an independent story with all new characters and settings.