VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - The Villa [v0.14] [Roslynd Turbo]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    fatemap804

    Why I gave 4 star is because I am an optimistic Guy, -
    FEM PROTAGONIST with Corruption and who knows how many kinks are gonna be introduced. If done right, it could be awesome

    BUT, the issues of this game are ->
    1. Lack of animations (earlier no animations was OKAY, but now the competition and variety is too high)
    2. Starting of story was rushed, You could have started it subtly (-to developer)
    3. Lack of Corruption (tbh), the shy girl is already kinky, so no fun of corrupting her.

    If just these 3 things are corrected, it would be great STARTING to this game, which could turn out soo amazing.
  2. 1.00 star(s)

    Sesinho

    I dont remember the tags but you may think this is female protagonist, but actually who picks the girl is this Marco guy, he decides who is going to fuck. One of the girls you need to chose if you want to have sex with, but she doesnt reject being "forced", maybe for 1 render her face looks surprised, but thats it. This forced scene, is only forced cause the option said that, but the scene doesnt look forced at all. (Tell but dont show, the mark of the bad writer)

    I have to go for terrible cause really, in addition to being short there are this absence of sustance and, if the game contues wiht this low quality, in the future i dont see how is gonna improve my opinion.
    For starters It does not make any effort to tell the story, most of the times there are not character faces during conversations talking or reacting to things, there are lines of text describing things but renders barely change. For instance:
    A girl is in the couch thinking about stuff and other girl comes in, and they begin a conversation (i dont recall if there is an actual conversation or jsut the narrator tells you that a conversation is going on). For all this part the render didnt change, you didnt see that girl coming in, changing clothes and sitting down next to the other. At some point the render changes and you see her on the floor.

    Renders dont change acording to the thing is being told, they change i think every "specified number of lines of text"

    And this lack in story telling makes the game weak. The girls look good, but scenes lack the impact, they seem to be like any porn video from the internet with some lines of dialogue to establish the characters and then straight to "sex". ITs definetly a Cheap porn setting, an easy fap (if you like and believe the short story) but without 60fps and without 4K and without realistic looking females, i wouldnt play this if i knew what the game offers exactly.

    To explain a little the plot:
    There are 2 girls and you know abrely anything about them, they are together or they live together. They are contacted to go to some hotel. One of the girls is straight forward and the other is shy, thats the initial conclusion, but this shy girl gets instantly naked and lets this random guy she just met finger her. With so little amount of background is impossible to fuck this up so much.

    If the girl is shy (she looks shy and she is somehow hurt from a recent breakup i think) make her hesitate, and give her reasons to do this things she shouldnt be doing. But there is none of that, as i said there is a lack in story telling and number of renders.
    As i said, it does the same as any porn video, but only way waaaaaay worst.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    BartPS

    Loving this so far. No pretense of sweet innocent virgins being romanced and deflowered by an older, wiser more experienced man (but still handsome of course and sporting a penis transplanted from a racehorse).

    Welcome to the 21st Century! Two gorgeous young women, one somewhat less adventurous than the other, but both clearly enjoying the exhibitionism, sexually challenging themselves and high potential for a lot of very kinky sex coming their way.

    Only a couple of small points stopped me from rating this 5 stars:
    1) Content was a little thin - quite understandable for a first release, but other VNs have included a lot more in their introductions; and
    2) Lack of animations. The quality of design, lighting, model posing etc. suggests the devs are quite capable of this so I hope to see some in the future.

    Anyway, congratulations on this first release. I'm eagerly awaiting the next.