VN - Ren'Py - The Way Love Goes [Ch. 27] [Naughty Skunk Games]

I just finished the first chapter and here are my thoughts about it.

Let's start with this I think the game needs an incest patch to make Megan the aunt and Lily and Nina cousins of the MC.

Now with the obvious out of the way let's get to the story or better backstory, the parents throwing a 12-year-old out is a stupid idea, a better idea would be that they send him off to boarding school.

Cut back the thoughts of the MC and especially the perviness it's annoying and childish. Also, in the first scene with Nina why the bullshit with her kneeing the MC in the balls.

The MC is not the worst I have ever seen but get rid of this sad excuse of a beard or give him a good locking one.

I think these are the most important things for now.

Chapter 1 brings a series of cliches, every scene so far we can see it other dozens of games. Story is more than dumb, models are generic and we saw them as well in many other games, and many renders have terrible lightning. So far this is worse than average.

Good start, I like it when stories build up slowly and you can tell when characters are interested in each other.
The graphics are also great.
An Incest patch could also be quite interesting.
Keep it up