VN - Ren'Py - Thirty Days [v0.07.30] [3DRComics]

v0.03.90MF Beta (wtf is with that title)

4.5/5

This is very good, and is exactly the kind of thing I was looking for.
This story feels immersive and isn't a chore to read.

Story: 3/5

The story is nothing spectacular thus far. The synopsis is quite accurate, other than it being... 3 days so far? Or something.

Writing: 5/5

The dialogues feel very natural and realistic. Even though the story itself is nothing to really comment on, the story did keep me reading and interested.

Characters: 4.5/5

Pretty good character development with only some moments of it feeling like a created character rather than a person.
Each character feels unique, mostly. The two main characters anyway. The side characters definitely feel like side thotts. (heh)

Art: 4/5

Not groundbreaking but I find it rather pleasing.
The models are attractive imo, and more than once... per... 5 seconds... I definitely was eyeing them up.

Animation: 3/5

The animations weren't amazing, but they were definitely trying for a style and for the most part succeeded in that.
Honestly, I think there were some very useless animations here and there that just slow the project down. Like that one at the kitchen table for breakfast or whatever where it was just... looking over at the girl. That was it. Why animate that? xD

H Stuff: 4/5

I enjoyed the frequency of sexual content and the quality of it.
I'm a bit greedy and of the darker mind, so I was disappointed with the... lack of further options on some things.
Enjoyment: 5/5

Most projects seem to take half a year to have this much content again from updates. So. I guess see you in that much time.
I recommend including the amount of content (renders, words, etc) in your updates as to entice people in trying them out more, because of that expected low content.

I look forward to more. ♥

Edit:
I forgot something.


Edit 2:
Sorry sorry, I forgot a big thing that I actually hated.

Game looks great and I like the characters and you can tell the dev has a thing for goth girls and I concur.

However the "romance" progresses a bit unrealistically quick to the point where you .

Its also funny how you're
right now the game is walking the edge between a serious and comedy game and I'm personally mostly into the former so we'll see what direction the game will head to.

The game also seems to wanna aim for a more free roaming experience which I'd really dig but currently is still quite limited.

Also if you wanna try this game now as of v0.03.90 its still in its early days and has very little content (about 3 days) and if you're like me and like to put in a bit more time I'd suggest waiting for a few more updates. besides that I'm curious what the game will become and if the devs will change the pacing when they're further in development (If all those points get some love I'd consider this a 5 star game.)

The dialogues don't make that much sense if you're choosing the female cousin as the protagonist. It felt like playing a male teenager clichee protagonist or they forgot to adjust the dialogues sufficiently enough depending on the chosen protagonist.

So status quo is 3/5 stars, but that can change in the future, since this game is promising.

edit: 3DRComics wrote in regards of my little critique that they "[…] will review the dialog and see what changes can be made to help with that."

That's nice to hear, and I'll make sure to replay the game from the start when that happened and will correct my rating accordingly then.

This game is simply amazing, I'm so used to adult games just being about the sex and not much else, I love that this is a very grounded story and the adultness is very natural, it doesn't feel shoehorned in or anything. Plus the renders are fucking beautiful, like AAA stunning. 3DRC does a great job of adding meaniful choice to the game. Given that this is a pick your own gender type of game, it's assumed that there'd be no real difference when it comes to story, but this isn't the case at all. I'm playing the female Aunt and the female Cousin and there are subtle additons to both depending on what you chose and it's so refreshing to see. I just finished day 3 and I'm freaking floored at how good it is. I can not wait for day 4 <3

Lotsa potential! Game seems to be doing a good job at executing its concept so far. Likeable LIs, no engrish, and choices on how to react to things as the MC letting him be creepy or not. There is also a delayed timing to showing the effects of your choices letting you know what values certain stats are due to your choices. They also fixed the forced Sexual encounter from Dakota from the last update which is good. Giving it 5 stars to get more people to give it a try and to encourage the dev not to abandon the project.

It could be a really good game. But it's awfully short. Thought it will be more content for a v0.9 version.
I think the dev might be a little overstretching with the implementations. Multiple choices, multiple MC's, animations, etc.
It all sounds great in theory, but they are limiting the whole thing as they all take time to do, so the whole progression is sluggish.
Now this is my personal opinion, but I'd trade the animations for a better story progression any day.
Maybe I'll return some time later to see how this fares.

v0.88.2M Beta

I'm so impressed. This has the potential to be the best game here, and for how new it is, I think there's a good amount of content. I hope the dev time doesn't get too bogged down by too many different paths & roles. But at the same time, that's one of the things I like about it - and I haven't played anything but the cousin yet.

tl;dr If you're here to decide whether to play, do it.

v0.86mf
The artwork is very good, and the twin girls are cute.
Story so far is similar to stories done by other others, so it is relying on the cute female characters.
I hope the dev can come up with something that is interesting
in the future storyline.
I did like the clothes modelling, at the store.
I hope the girls do that again with sexier clothing and bikinis, as they become more confident.
4 stars for now, until I see more updates.

I think that this game definately has potenitial.
I wish there was a walkthrough so you know where to get corruption points etc, but the characters are good.
I`ve played both as man and woman, and the story was different enough that it`s worth both playthroughs.

Version reviewed: v0.86mf

The current version is pretty short, the renders are great (better than I would guess from the screen shots), the story I can't say too much about yet, and there are not a lot of scenes right now.

However one thing I am worried about is the number of stats / choices at the start. These could bog down development later on, if not managed correctly, especially the male / female side of things.

Excellent start; good renders, fantastic choice-based setup, intuitive and easy to navigate interface (if you can call it that) and an ambitious but not unrealistic goal.

I'm extremely excited to see where this goes. Fantastic start, however.

Version 0.86 - Rating 4,5/5

Great new game with a great start!

Characters- Let's start with the characters. I can't get enough of the twins. They are really beautiful. (5/5)

Scenes- There are a lot of different scenes already, but it's not to crazy, what is good! (4/5)

Animations- Animations are very successful, they certainly do not look artificial. (4.5/5)

Places- Place designs are very successful. The atmosphere in the house is good, but it could be better. I'm sure it will improve further. (4,5/5)

Personal Likes- It is easy and fun game play.

These are my general evaluations of the game. The front of this game is very bright, I have no doubt that it will be successful. This game definitely deserves the best. I would like to thank everyone who contributed to the production and wish you success. I will be following the development of the game with interest.

~Proxsz~

I really liked this game. The story flowed from the start all the way until I got to the end of this build. I also enjoy the options the developer made available to have the MC is a cousin that the player decides on if they wish to play male or female plus the option is there to play uncle or aunt! If this is an introduction to what the developer wants to build, then I am anxious to see what comes after the Thirty days here and in the future games made by them. Good luck 3DRComics, you got a new fan/supporter.

This could become my new favorite. The artstyle is great. The dialogues appear authentic for the most part, really sweet. I think it could be a great dynamic between the characters with different kinds of tension and progression. Like a "Cure My Addiction" but without the MILF co-setting, and with the option to be a woman. Great ideas, huge potential.

Not a lot going on right now as it's a demo, but it is definitely worth keeping an eye on and waiting for more content! It promises to have a choice heavy story and already has multiple options for different player characters. Hoping we get more soon.

definitely more than promising! aside from the nice renders the most interesting thing is the fact playing as a different role gives you a different dialogues and stats. This is definitely the way to present a new game.

I like the characters models and the story setting. I'm not sure the sandbox brings much though, but I guess it can evolve later on.

The renders are good.

I like the relationship between the characters(what I've seen so far) but I think it's a little shallow. I'm not asking for them to have dramatic background or something that have to call for emotion, but anything that would make them relatable and likeable and "whole" would be appreciable.

Some would say "it's just a porn game", but to me it's a lot more enjoyable when the characters feel more real

There's nothing inherently wrong with this game, it's got good potential, but it still feels a bit rough. There's a few areas that need some love and a few pitfalls that although aren't issues yet, I kinda feel will be in future updates.

The graphics are actually pretty good, kinda fresh and there nothing I've seen so far which pulls you out the game because you see a character and go "oh it's x from y". Story has potential as well, slightly convoluted but we'll go with it . The Dev's at least putting the effort in and that should be applauded.

On the flip side, the English needs some love. There's quite a few typos and grammer problems and it's kinda basic stuff (didint as opposed to didn't, to as opposed too)

There's also an issue where the game's a sandbox but certainly at the start it's heavily railroaded. A lot of "I don't need to do that" when you click on anything that isn't the one area you're meant to. I don't mind being taken down a particular path butwhy give the user the false sense of choice when there's only one choice to make? It makes a game feel empty that a standard VN wouldn't do

I think what'll make or break this game is how the sandbox is implemented. Sandboxes are good to play in but they need to A) have the content and B) have a story that utilises it. As this game seems kinda new I'm not seeing that so that's certainly something to keep an eye out for. I'm also curious to see how the story will pan out. Before the game even begins they make a big point of highlighting that elements that will be available are closed off which is smart as it keeps the game tight and doesn't leave the user feeling there's not a lot of work being done. But at the same time it also talks about how days will have multiple endings based on things like relation, sex and story choices. That's..... good? But feels like an awful lot of work.

The fear is going forward there will be a lot of releases which focus on a path you're not interested in, or worse, each path gets a little bitty update so there's a feeling the story is going nowhere fast.

Again, this is all up in the air. Fears could be unfounded, but it's happened with other games where a lot has been promised early on. I wish the developer luck

5 stars to help offset the idiotic 1 star below judging a game by what might happen in the future or potential for it being dropped, writing much but saying little except that, mostly, it's not his type of game and he's cynical about its future... I agree with some things said but overall it's a quality game, and really hot, which is what counts really. Alexis is great and has a killer body, and I love the potential for sleepwalking and corruption with her, and I like that her motivations are still kinda in the dark.

I hope dev sticks to his premise here and focuses on the twins a lot. I really wish it was just a straight forward novel with some choices here and there, I do agree that games that attempt really complex decision systems with a lot of stats and free roaming tend to run into a wall, but not always. I wish dev the best in any case, can't wait for the next update.

Good story. Didn't get bored with it at all which is hard to do these days... so many creators need to hire a writer. Great renders. Good looking characters. Dick looks like a real one. One that doesn't look like one is starting to be a pet peeve of mine.

I don't like sandbox usually so because of that, I probably shouldn't be rating this. However, the 1 star is forcing me to. The biggest reason why I hate sandbox is that I have to see the same scene over and over and over. This however does not do that. So, the main reason for not giving it a 5 star is because I tried multiple time to get enough points to see a certain scene and couldn't figure out how.