There's nothing inherently wrong with this game, it's got good potential, but it still feels a bit rough. There's a few areas that need some love and a few pitfalls that although aren't issues yet, I kinda feel will be in future updates.
The graphics are actually pretty good, kinda fresh and there nothing I've seen so far which pulls you out the game because you see a character and go "oh it's x from y". Story has potential as well, slightly convoluted but we'll go with it . The Dev's at least putting the effort in and that should be applauded.
On the flip side, the English needs some love. There's quite a few typos and grammer problems and it's kinda basic stuff (didint as opposed to didn't, to as opposed too)
There's also an issue where the game's a sandbox but certainly at the start it's heavily railroaded. A lot of "I don't need to do that" when you click on anything that isn't the one area you're meant to. I don't mind being taken down a particular path butwhy give the user the false sense of choice when there's only one choice to make? It makes a game feel empty that a standard VN wouldn't do
I think what'll make or break this game is how the sandbox is implemented. Sandboxes are good to play in but they need to A) have the content and B) have a story that utilises it. As this game seems kinda new I'm not seeing that so that's certainly something to keep an eye out for. I'm also curious to see how the story will pan out. Before the game even begins they make a big point of highlighting that elements that will be available are closed off which is smart as it keeps the game tight and doesn't leave the user feeling there's not a lot of work being done. But at the same time it also talks about how days will have multiple endings based on things like relation, sex and story choices. That's..... good? But feels like an awful lot of work.
The fear is going forward there will be a lot of releases which focus on a path you're not interested in, or worse, each path gets a little bitty update so there's a feeling the story is going nowhere fast.
Again, this is all up in the air. Fears could be unfounded, but it's happened with other games where a lot has been promised early on. I wish the developer luck