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Nope, I can describe briefly.
There are two counters which matter at this point of plot (there are more actually) - Nat's fear and Nat's anger.
From the text it should be pretty clear when one of these counters is triggered (so if you can see Natalie is scared - then it's fear triggered).
And there are three endings - for Fear, For Anger and when non of these counters is filled enough. I think it sould not be hard.
And the choices you take when speaking to tulpas does not influent the plot yet.
I am confused ... he is on the island with two girls?? I thought he was left there shot by his cousin NAt who escaped the island ... and who is the other girl??
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That was just for patrons, so it's not good... but well, that was going to happen. Let me just post this thing here
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So does this not follow the original? I really liked the way it played out originally and the art was pretty good to me. There was a bit of room to improve, I hope the payoff sex scenes have a bit more to them than the original. It felt a bit truncated.
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No. The backstory is the same, but the plot is entirely new. And the sex scenes should not be there yet, tbh. That was just to get an attention
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Good to know the plot will be reworked. I liked the paths last time but some of the endings needed some more options. I thought the ending where she mounted you was restrictive, why only have the option to attack or banish her? Why not embrace that you are alike, enjoy being bad people together like Bonnie and Clyde? It might be fun to jump each others' bones, you are stuck in the jungle, plenty of places to hide and surprise each other.
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Of course, you have a point, but the general idea of the story that there's too few place for fun when both can say "I'm a murderer/rapist". And the way to love is long at not that easy.
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I dunno, playing as Trevor in GTA is pretty fun, lol. I just think the player should have the option on how to react, I didn't feel he'd be angry at her, more relief they are kindred spirits.
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That's great and I love how the reworked one is going as I really hated how the original one included sex just for the sake of having it.
Btw, why don't you ask for the game developer tag?
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I'm glad you love the new plot. Well, tbh, in this version sex scenes are doped as well - they must appear much later. I just hope they are more elegant then it was.
Cause I didn't know I can and still have no idea how to XD
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Maybe you can include sex scenes with the protagonist's imaginary characters instead because it's a major turn off from a plot perspective when the girl who got raped by the protagonist and is also their cousin sister, who almost killed him as well, suddenly is attracted towards him and wants to fuck him? Like that doesn't make any sense, it would be okay if the game was just pornography but I expect this game to be story rich that deals with mature subjects.
For Game developer tag, maybe try asking one of the F95Zone staff member.
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Well, things are exactly as you have just said. Don't be worry, we care a lot about the plot and dont wan't to make the game stupid porn point'n'clik. The story is our main focus.
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I tried the new version, it's pretty good, I like the new paths. I do think the endings are still pretty abrupt and you get few new images as payoff. That was an issue in the original game as well, after all the build up you want to see more of the girl. Turning it into a non-sex game does not strike me as being true to the underlying layer of eroticism that present throughout the story, it'd feel wrong to build up to nothing.
I also disagree with the poster who said the cousin sister should not have sex with the MC, life/psychology is pretty complicated. I think that's one of the more powerful threads in Watchmen, that sometimes the unthinkable does happen. People are complicated. The mother in Watchmen just wanted to move on and take the power back, not be famous for being a victim for the rest of her life. So she fucked a man who raped her years earlier when he came to beg forgiveness. And it's a very powerful moment for her daughter when she understands and accepts this about her mother, even though it shattered her feminist ideals.
I'm not saying this has to be Watchmen level, that's impossible. I'm just saying don't have a judgmental outlook, our ideologies rarely account for human complexity.
I also disagree with the poster who said the cousin sister should not have sex with the MC, life/psychology is pretty complicated. I think that's one of the more powerful threads in Watchmen, that sometimes the unthinkable does happen. People are complicated. The mother in Watchmen just wanted to move on and take the power back, not be famous for being a victim for the rest of her life. So she fucked a man who raped her years earlier when he came to beg forgiveness. And it's a very powerful moment for her daughter when she understands and accepts this about her mother, even though it shattered her feminist ideals.
I'm not saying this has to be Watchmen level, that's impossible. I'm just saying don't have a judgmental outlook, our ideologies rarely account for human complexity.
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