EDIT: On Later iterations, I have to rate down it from 5 stars to 4. I'd put it lower except for the 1 star review which I think is unfair. I'd stay it's solid 3 with a great mechanic, but it's really difficult to actually get somewhere and there's a lot of grind. Honestly, though, I have no idea how to fix this issue.
While the content is fairly thinly spread around the sprawling game mechanics, this is an excellent start. It's clearly one of the best games in this adult game forum when it comes to "game mechanics". Most VN's shouldn't have very difficult mechanics, because it detracts from the story(or porn). However, here is truly an interesting game mechanic that doesn't detract from it at all, nor make it unreasonably difficult, nor punish mistakes. Bravo. I can only hope the developer continues on this path. Giving 5 stars is a bit premature considering the actual content in the game, I am giving the 5 stars more as an endorsement of the idea and in hopes of much content in the future. There also seems to be a clear end-game in mind, which always a good idea as no one wants to see game that enternally languishes in half-way state.
UPDATE: The game seems to be getting more sprawling, but not meaningfully worse or better. It's much better in the sense of pure content, but it's slightly worse in the sense of the path to get that content is as opaque as it gets. Since there's no real "punishment" for screwing things up, by the virtue of the game's mechanics -- it's not an unmanageable problem but it does make it sometimes feel both very grindy AND like you're not getting anywhere.
Definitely needs some more guiding mechanics on what to do next.
But it is getting very complex to keep up with when trying to play as often you're really not sure what you need to do next.
Also the "you will remember this" needs to be displayed in some other way, possibly a pop up or maybe change/overlay the image with the text, instead of showing it in the text box.
It is a very useful hint, but right now it's displayed in very lackluster manner.