Version v0.2.0.1 offline
The good :
UI is really good beside two small issues I have (Will talk about them in con)
Haven't had any bugs in any of the version I played
Grinding is minimal (unless if you want to max stats, but that's a given)
Decent amount of content for a recent game
Can change character names.
Cons :
Main character has no portrait and is called "You"
The writing is a bit shallow, characters are two dimensional.
When you finish a girl's story line and get access to dates, the first scene is usually just the scene you got right before you're able to date them ( Pointless to do them since there's barely any content there, probably because the game is in early stage)
Character locations are annoying, you need to enter a location to see who is where, some locations also have two floors so it's a bit annoying
When you grind, you have to click a lot, adding an option to read again/train again until you have to sleep would be nice, right now, you have to click back to reading, select the book, continue.
What I recommend :
Letting player change the name of the character and use a picture for the portrait in text boxes ( Can easily be modified if the person doesn't like it with an URL or simply replacing the file)
Adding a fast travel on the sidebar (making it an option would be better, the current map is fine, but it just brings you outside of the location, a quick way to go to certain locations with a single click would make it better)
Girls location on the side bar (The game might be bigger later on, adding this early on and having it working would make it easier in the future, it's also a good QoL change)
Re writing some of the story, I'm not a writer or anything, but this game is shallow so far, the characters all act the same, they're all peppy, there's 2-3 occasion where they're sad. There also isn't much text, adding more would be better, from my understanding, this is a light hearted game right now so this might be why, but while reading everything and checking out the videos, you can finish the game under an hour, again, I know this is an early stage for the game but that's why adding more now would be better than later since ideas would be fresh.
Final note : 4/5
The only reason I removed a point is simply because of the writing, when it changes in the future/the game gets bigger, I'll update my review.
Even if I talk badly about the writing, the game is still good in it's current state, there isn't any issues I've noticed and there isn't much to change to make it better.
I hope you don't take this review poorly, if you have some questions about what I exactly mean, feel free to message me.
The good :
UI is really good beside two small issues I have (Will talk about them in con)
Haven't had any bugs in any of the version I played
Grinding is minimal (unless if you want to max stats, but that's a given)
Decent amount of content for a recent game
Can change character names.
Cons :
Main character has no portrait and is called "You"
The writing is a bit shallow, characters are two dimensional.
When you finish a girl's story line and get access to dates, the first scene is usually just the scene you got right before you're able to date them ( Pointless to do them since there's barely any content there, probably because the game is in early stage)
Character locations are annoying, you need to enter a location to see who is where, some locations also have two floors so it's a bit annoying
When you grind, you have to click a lot, adding an option to read again/train again until you have to sleep would be nice, right now, you have to click back to reading, select the book, continue.
What I recommend :
Letting player change the name of the character and use a picture for the portrait in text boxes ( Can easily be modified if the person doesn't like it with an URL or simply replacing the file)
Adding a fast travel on the sidebar (making it an option would be better, the current map is fine, but it just brings you outside of the location, a quick way to go to certain locations with a single click would make it better)
Girls location on the side bar (The game might be bigger later on, adding this early on and having it working would make it easier in the future, it's also a good QoL change)
Re writing some of the story, I'm not a writer or anything, but this game is shallow so far, the characters all act the same, they're all peppy, there's 2-3 occasion where they're sad. There also isn't much text, adding more would be better, from my understanding, this is a light hearted game right now so this might be why, but while reading everything and checking out the videos, you can finish the game under an hour, again, I know this is an early stage for the game but that's why adding more now would be better than later since ideas would be fresh.
Final note : 4/5
The only reason I removed a point is simply because of the writing, when it changes in the future/the game gets bigger, I'll update my review.
Even if I talk badly about the writing, the game is still good in it's current state, there isn't any issues I've noticed and there isn't much to change to make it better.
I hope you don't take this review poorly, if you have some questions about what I exactly mean, feel free to message me.