This dev started out strong and up front, but it is appearing to be all a front. He has only the idea of what perverts want, but his inexperienced and his virginity shines through with each update. Whether it's sexual inexperience, or just too young to know what life as an adult is like, this dev is showing how little he knows about sexual tension or what it's like to take a woman against her will. It's a lot like a twelve year old being told to give a book report on tomb raider, but the kid is too nervous to write what he wants and writes to an audience he thinks is as timid as he is. I don't know if it's the tiny updates or the lack of progress that annoys me more, but you took what could have been a fire story, and took some bad advice and turned something hot and turned it into a slow burn without knowing how to make it interesting.