VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Tomboy: Sex in forest [Final] [Zylyx]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    Fuchsschweif

    The only good thing about the game is the artstyle, but since I read that's AI art, I can't even give credit for that.

    Otherwise the game is just shallow. You're camping with a friend (the girl) in the woods, 1 minute into the game you get a boner, you tell her, she says "we have to do something about that", goes down and blows you.

    There's absolutely no tension or build up. The game starts in a fashion that you are just friends, and without any reason she starts to suck you off, and after that, both continue talking as if nothing happened and continue their camping adventure.

    This game also falls into the typical trap of ending the animation with the cum/orgasm. So you're just seeing a still image when someone cums.
  2. 2.00 star(s)

    josemaloco

    Around 725 lines of dialogue in total, with nothing of interest happening and pretty abrupt and cheap segues into H scenes, which have few scenes and very simple animation.
    The images are AI generated, which is fine if there is a good foundation around them, but that it's not the case here and overall this seems like a poor attempt at a porn game.
  3. 4.00 star(s)

    Satori6

    This novel lasts about 15 minutes and features about 5 scenes.

    The AI art is good - there are some obvious issues like the size of the man's penis changing from one scene to the next, but the woman remains consistent.

    The story is nothing to write home about, and the dialogue is bad - I'll never understand why everybody adds "I'm cumming!!!" lines; never in my life have I met somebody who says that; people just come, they don't announce it.

    The music is also bad, but that's a given for 99% of Renpy games.

    Either way, I'm giving it 4 stars because it's better than most other first time novels, and it delivers what it offers: a few scenes with a girl in the forest.

    The girl's design also ticks many of my preferences, so I might be slightly biased here, but then again, all reviews are biased.

    If you like the art for the girl, give it a try. If you want a good story or dialogue, look elsewhere.