Do you have a particular part (or parts) that you feel particularly crappy? I'd love to hear more to see what I can improve/avoid.
1) "Instant sex" system not really good option for corruption games. It should be made step by step. Trying to reach KP depth is surely best option but i don't expect this much from any current game. Still brutal gangrape at very first game day a bit too much - girl may just get instamindbreak from something like that.
2) Current money farm(collect gems under tree) option looks more like clothes patch. It' should be replaced with something that girl can do like janitor work or inmates clothes washing. You can include sexual harrasment there as part of corruption progress. Сomplexity of minigames only restricted by your imagination.(this can solve problem with initial corruption too)
3) Combat interface generally acceptable but i can't say it's really friendly(small pannel in bottom left screen edge not really best option - you have plenty of space). "Horde spawns" almost at every combat not really good option. More complex combat mechanics with less enemies could be best option.
4) Small animation cutins looking more like placeholder. Make them something appropriate or remove them and focus on static images.
If i notice something more i will tell you as long as you willing to listen.
P.S. all this just my personal vision. Main issued in all "young devs" they crearly see the game starting build but don't have vision of finished game(if this not your situation you can just ignore me(read signature)).. This factor often making dev go into endless production cycle or drop game for good.
