Ren'Py - Abandoned - Total Corruption [v0.21] [Kjotaka]

This VN is a complete mess.

PROS
Models are nice

CONS
Writing is awful

Overall
This is just a complete hot mess of a VN. NO clue how it is supposed to work. The writing is just awful. MC has more inner monologue than actual story. This is a huge disappointment. How do you make money? What is the plot to the story?
SO.....
I suggest a complete start over. Find a decent translator. Add options that provide the guide built in. Figure out how you want the story to develop, and implement it. I got to the second in game day, and just felt my brain cells dying. Figure out a solid way to make money, and allow us to make money. I didn't even bother checking out the store, gym or any other map locations because I didn't feel it was necessary at all.
Sorry for being harsh to the dev, but I don't even understand the basics of this VN.
The renders aren't to bad. They aren't 5 star either.
The women are actually the only saving grace to this VN and they kept me from giving it a lower rating.
I'm giving this one a hard pass. Good luck

quite a pointless game to be honest. Spent a good hour trying to figure out where to go. The hints are useless, cannot skip the days and you spend half teh time looking for eother invisble people or the whole place feels and seems abbandoned.

Just give us full chocie based story insetad of a "your in your room now go and try tof ind peopel who are either no where or only exist in cutscenes".

Sorry dev but have you actually tried playing your own game as a casual?

game needs so much work to be even remotely enjoyable. There is far to much dead air and the in game walkthrough is basically useless. World feels empty since it is unless there is an event to tiger and so far few of the events are any good. Would be better to have repeat dialog with the NPCs so it at least feels like there is something to do. Also the amount of money needed to get any thing done is ridiculous and slow the game down way to much. I ended up in room fast forwarding to night time for weeks to make money and that totally ruins the game.

This is a good game but the fact that you can't progress clearly is very annoying, not only that I constantly get stuck on a lot of tasks even with the help of the hints and walkthrough. They really need to improve on the user portion of the game, they already have a lot of the stuff we want but not the things we need like clear linear progression, seriously I get confused which task I'm supposed to do first at times.

Frustrating as hell.
House huge, nothing is going on
No guide, no idea what you should really do.

This is the issue when you give adult games in the hands of teenager developers.

Only renders are ok..but then.. why this click-fest.. for what?

Soulless game

Only thing good is the renders
House is empty
What's the point of inherit a house if there's nothing to do somtimes in the pool But that is the only event i found
Somtimes i got a bug when trying to enter a girls room

Basically, it's a press skip simulator, you can't interact with anything, most of the time you are literally doing nothing, the characters have less personality than a rock, the only highlights are some renders, I wouldn't be surprised if this press skip simulator is abandoned in a little more time.

What a disappointment. As a player you were left alone with a mixture of a non existing plot and no idea about the consequences what you click.
Additionally some really useless and time killing animations which cannot be skipped. The author should rewrite it completely and fix some flow-issues. The idea behind the plot (if i guess it right) is not bad at all.

Gave the game a shot, despite mostly negative reviews because the renders looked nice. But this game is train wreck in its current iteration. The English is very poor and an actual hinderance because a lot is lost in translation between the characters. I can ignore the occasional misspelling or grammatical error but this is basically MTL level of English, broken and confusing. Playing this game without a walkthrough is nigh impossible, its incredibly confusing with no clear way towards progression other then randomly clicking around and praying you find something. Also the animations are laughably bad. Girl licks guys ear and phases through his ear, clothes warping downwards and back up. Its really really bad even by porn game standards. Anyways its not worth the download and not worth your time.

This review is for version 0.002.
This game has potential: the characters seem interesting and the renders are good.
But for the current amount of content... it should really be compressed because it's already really heavy.

Version 2
Bad writing, badly executed open world, english reads like shitty machine translation, only redeemable thing are the renders. The story premise could be good but it's just badly executed.
Oh yea, you go talk to a character towards the end, the game crashes and wont launch again, idk if others experience this but, I did, and it's the final nail in the coffin for me on this one. Good luck to the dev!

I am going to write about second release...

Incest...not here
Sandbox...bad writed(u can only quess where u want go)
Sex scenes...u can see others to fuck
Posible LI used by others...

Still it have nice renders that is why i am giving two stars..

I'm a fan of the concept and the art, but if there will be so many assets in this game and so many images/sounds/animations per bit of story, and as much branching as this intro is implying, the development will be so painfully slow that keeping up with it will be a bore (not to mention it will be a massive download). The next couple of patches will probably determine whether it's worth it or not. Also, the grammar is pretty bad, but I'm guessing that'll change soon.