Exactly, it's not interesting cause there's no danger in what they're doin, it's lost it's edge. Everyone is just looking at it as it's the new norm, nothing really forbidden. Dan is to stupid to see what's right in front of him, it's crazy cause a few chapters back he beat up Lester n tossed him out of his house but now he can't even wipe his ass. Sarah is basically now throwing pussy out both panty legs. Her and Dan prolly both goin end up getting framed, when Lester figures out that he can't control Sarah anymore.DS make Dan dumber while even more a cuck chapter after chapter, its not even the same character than the beginning.
He's so weak thats the story is boring as hell
That's exactly it, none of the characters are likable. I even find myself hoping that none of them have a happy ending.Exactly, it's not interesting cause there's no danger in what they're doin, it's lost it's edge. Everyone is just looking at it as it's the new norm, nothing really forbidden. Dan is to stupid to see what's right in front of him, it's crazy cause a few chapters back he beat up Lester n tossed him out of his house but now he can't even wipe his ass. Sarah is basically now throwing pussy out both panty legs. Her and Dan prolly both goin end up getting framed, when Lester figures out that he can't control Sarah anymore.
I am confused . Considering latest developments ,she doesn't . The way she surrendered to Otis , she might just be a nymphomaniac and Lester was just a way for her to realise her selfDan was right to believe her tho. She obviously doesn't love Lester and it was just sex
It doesn’t seem to me a real nympho behaviors, up to now. Usually nymphos actively search for sex, and their behavior is all around sex. This is not what Sarah is showing up to now. There are situations in which she is involved and gives in but never started by her. She is a “victim” of conditions.I am confused . Considering latest developments ,she doesn't . The way she surrendered to Otis , she might just be a nymphomaniac and Lester was just a way for her to realise her self
But then it will become another story like tainted conception . What will be the point ??
It isn't emotion that would cause her to fall for Lester. It is science, human chemistry. It has been shown that the body releases pheremones when a person has sex and when they repeatedly have sex with the same person those same hormones and oxytocin and so forth release and link the person mentally to the person they are sharing their body with, repeatedly. This is just science and a science that has been looked at for decades. (forgive my misspellings, it is late and i am too tired to fix it, sorry...going to bed now.)It doesn’t seem to me a real nympho behaviors, up to now. Usually nymphos actively search for sex, and their behavior is all around sex. This is not what Sarah is showing up to now. There are situations in which she is involved and gives in but never started by her. She is a “victim” of conditions.
Probably she had kinks and Lester was an excuse to chase them.
I will never understand why people thinks she would fall in love with Lester. I mean she could but there is no reason to believe it.
She has been having great sex, without too much impact on her life(up to now, and only speaking about extramarital sex), for her is perfect.
i think you're overstating this a bit. you're describing a relatively minor hormonal effect as if its mind control juice pumping through her veins. maybe that's the creative embellishment that don is going for, but its certainly not "science" at that pointIt isn't emotion that would cause her to fall for Lester. It is science, human chemistry. It has been shown that the body releases pheremones when a person has sex and when they repeatedly have sex with the same person those same hormones and oxytocin and so forth release and link the person mentally to the person they are sharing their body with, repeatedly. This is just science and a science that has been looked at for decades. (forgive my misspellings, it is late and i am too tired to fix it, sorry...going to bed now.)
I never said it was mind control juice, but without it, love will generally not be felt in the way that people experience "in love" otherwise there would not be such an emphasis on the idea that a couple should keep sexually active with each other as the years go on. "In love", by itself is a very temporary thing anyway as love takes its place. Without the help of the chemistry of our brains many more marriages would fail and that really has nothing to do with just being together and spending time together, per se, or so many marriages wouldn't have failed during covid as many people realized that just as a couple living together they pretty much hated each other. That same said science also works for foods like chocolate, which mimics the feeling of in love in people's brains.i think you're overstating this a bit. you're describing a relatively minor hormonal effect as if its mind control juice pumping through her veins. maybe that's the creative embellishment that don is going for, but its certainly not "science" at that point
Been busy working on a commissioned story, however got a chance to read the final. Psiber your thoughts mirror mine. It may not be a popular opinion but I understand the purpose for the Otis scene. 1) The only one who didn't know he was a cuck was Dan, the scene allowed him to see past his hatred for Lester to the cold hard facts that he was a cuck, 2) it showed Sarah taking control and using this knowledge to start grooming him to be a cuck and her new behavior so that when it happens with Lester it won't be a shock to his system. At first I thought it odd that Otis would say he was going to breed her but then it made since (character development), again it's for Dan's benefit when Lester says the same thing in front of him. 3) She enjoys sex but the key phrase of her being able to resist Otis after the office scene indicates she's not anyone's slut (based on what's written).First, I would like to say that yes, the idea that Lester is attempting to frame Dan is not going to happen. Don tightened up a lot of the writing in this chapter and made it a much better piece of writing with clear ideas and direction. I actually liked what I read very much more than what I had seen in the Alpha. I even found many sections of dialogue, with no actual sex attached much more arousing than other sections that Don had written recently. I REALLY liked the idea that Sarah was starting to knowingly manipulate Dan to her own selfish ends. The need to make it seem like she was trying to make Dan feel like she was siding with him, while both protecting Lester and the sex she had been experiencing without Dan was very well thought out and introduced. I also no longer have a problem with her having sex with Otis in this chapter as repugnant as I once did. It actually added to the story and worked toward furthering Sarah's lifestyle choices, while allowing her to recast Dan into a full cuckold through targeting him as less of a man in terms of his ability to sexually fulfill her. Sarah actually throwing out the glib "joke" that she should call Lester to ask permission for Dan to fuck her was both effective and surprising and then when she told Dan that Lester would love to hear that Dan lost his job and her saying that to Dan's face was almost priceless. How many people here think she is going to stick with Dan's wishes to keep that information away from Lester as opposed to telling Lester everything while he fucks the shit out of her in his bedroom while Dan reports to his job in Washington DC? Hell, how many think that she will continue with the idea of visiting family with Dan not being there and will instead surprise Lester with an entire weekend of her and him alone in his apartment? And, finally, will she tell Lester about Otis and for what purpose? Will she be looking for permission to use him or for Lester to control him?
I will be honest . I thought that Don lost it after that alpha but I was wrong . He corrected all the mistakes from the feedbacks. I REALLY liked the idea that Sarah was starting to knowingly manipulate Dan to her own selfish ends. The need to make it seem like she was trying to make Dan feel like she was siding with him, while both protecting Lester and the sex she had been experiencing without Dan was very well thought out and introduced
Oh I think the Toxic Attraction moniker has applied to all three of them. Dan's was thinking something was hot and getting burned. Sarah's has been the beauty and the beast, thinking she had control when she's been easily manipulated by Lester, and for Lester, Sarah has totally gotten him out of his norm. Case in point ch28 shows him telling us that very fact, that she has consumed him to the point of forsaking any other targets. Regarding Sarah being the dominate in her marriage, she told you that in ch1 (It was so easy to push Dan's buttons with her flirty behavior) and it's been backed up throughout the series.I posit this thought:
What if all along the Toxic part of this story is about Sarah? Lester, Dan, and all the others are merely an ends to a means for her, as her desires are nearly unleashed. It has been mentioned a time or two that Sarah seems to be the dominate one in the marriage.
As for the Final 28. I agree with the others. It is so much better written and some sens of what the hell was going on inside the heads of all of them. I suspect Sarah will be fucking Lester + as Dan is headed for Washington. Hopefully they will watch the kids for a bit before he has to leave.
Lester has been placed on the back foot and is now trying to shore up his defenses. This may be the moment Sarah breaks away from him exclusively, and without his input, to do what SHE wants to do.
All 3 of them were toxic since ch1.only now it's amplifyingI posit this thought:
What if all along the Toxic part of this story is about Sarah?
You've mentioned this several times, can you provide examples of what you consider "losing control and getting outsmarted?"Lester is already far outside of his comfort zone , losing control and getting outsmarted . Like dan once was
I don't really know what that other person means, but I can think of one scene where Lester lost control. I can't remember the chapter, but Lester was fucking Sarah in the lounge room I think and Sarah basically showed her true slutty side and made him cum early while some other guy watched.You've mentioned this several times, can you provide examples of what you consider "losing control and getting outsmarted?"