Verisimilinude
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This part stumped me. Why was she charged with prostitution?
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I don't have 30...What would final look like...Lester taken down by Linc Group due to sales on dark web...Lester tries to turn states evidence but commits " suicide " in his jail cell...Dan is able to get all Lester's blackmail tapes and access to lesters funds and quickly secures all...Sarah is 3 months pregnant when this occurs but Dan helps her obtain the abortion she see,s out..Sarah loses her Job more to guilt y association then any evidence..Dan is seen as hero to Lincoln group...Both Bryan and Jesse fade into the background...Much therapy needed for both Dan and Sarah..Dan to regain Alpha status and able to forgive himself for his major part of Sarah's downfall..Sarah for allowing herself to go to the extremes she went with Lester she..including given her anal cherry to Lester...it takes a year of Therapy but they save there marriage...The majority of the blackmail material Dan turns over to the Li NC group who helps take down some real,y bad people..Cronos ends up being the new hospital administrator zand is taken down..Due to securing Lesters amp,Ample Funds Dan zand Sarah able to rebui,rebuild, there lives....That's my ending....anyone else
erroneous accusation because of the sex,
it was an erroneous accusation to get her separated from her kids and make it difficult to get custody. fever dream of a frustrated reader. I sympathized with Dan and want him to come out on top. she was a victim of her lust and lester's manipulations.
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No worries, I was simply confused as I didn't see a pros charge warranted. Though thinking about it - corporate espionage could be leveled. I do think it interesting that a group as tightly sealed up as TLG, didn't have camera's in Byron's office when Sarah was trying to find his pc to use the usb stick for Dan.
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The one thing I'm certain of or should say is the most realistic is that Dan and Sarah part ways. Not sure if there is enough therapy available to repair their marriage, all three MCs have taken their turn shredding it. I'm not sure if I would like him better or less if Dan tried to reconcile. Its likely all three part ways and make new lives for themselves. Oh and the grand parents would take custody of the daughters. But I don't think that's the dark ending DS has in mind.
But I like the theories, keep them coming. (lol unintentional pun not withstanding)
I still don't think that would be C.E. as no matter what she was looking for, it didn't exist, so it would be hard to prove she was looking at it or even had a stick with her to download/upload anything on to it, imho.
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He was always a voyeur by nature
However I think that his marriage with Sarah will survive bcuz Dan has no respect
I like it but I do not think Dan was ever an alpha in nature
He was always a voyeur by nature
However I think that his marriage with Sarah will survive bcuz Dan has no respect
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My theory is even by the logic of hotwife stories and lifestyle .
Sarah doesn't really care about Dan. She never checks on him after the deed is done and recently she broke a promise
Rest her love for Lester is she has also shown no true emotional feelings for him outside of bedroom yet (not considering ch 30 final )
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I was having an side convo with another forum member and it got me to thinking about what each of us gets out of a story. So as it relates to TA and erotica in general, what are your expectations for reading erotica? I'm not interested in your fetishes or kinks (to be clear I mean I'm not asking you to share them, that's not the point of the question, but feel free if you so desire), or the obvious of sexual gratification.
Removing those from the equation, what I'm really curious about is do you read the story because it's entertaining only for its eroticism, are you reading it because you want to read fiction that has spice in it or do you have an expectation that the story is a well written piece of profound literary fiction that happens to have realistic erotic elements in it?
Removing those from the equation, what I'm really curious about is do you read the story because it's entertaining only for its eroticism, are you reading it because you want to read fiction that has spice in it or do you have an expectation that the story is a well written piece of profound literary fiction that happens to have realistic erotic elements in it?
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That's a good question. As you've taken out the obvious things from the equation, I'll speak about my other expectations. I like stories where there is a good plot of seduction and corruption. I don't expect a profound literary masterpiece but obviously a well written story elevates the whole reading experience.
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Fair, I was postulating the only possible thing that she could be "arrested" for.
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I think she does still care about Dan. Now respect him, up until ch29 I would have have said yes to a larger degree, but that respect took a massive blow in ch29 and another hit in ch30. I think without Dan in the wings there wouldn't be the thrill of taboo for her. It would just be sex with Lester, maybe still the best sex she's had but not on the same level as her current arrangement. Part of her enjoyment is her being able to tease Dan and rile him up, and I'm expecting moving forwards being able to humiliate him with her activities and decisions (i.e. pregnancy).
The tension that the seduction and corruption creates in a well written story. The whole "Will she...?" Or "How far will it go before there is reality check? Or will there be?" And "What are the responses of the involved parties?" All of those need to be well-written to create drama, tension, and that feeling of "whoa!" when you read it, such that you're thinking about it later.
This guys stuff was hot, but it for me it didn’t hit the same as Avid and Writerinabox. Amber feels like a different character, and narratively it’s not as interesting. Like I don’t see Amber actually ever falling for Jack (chapters 16 from Reddit), that’s absurd to me and didn’t feel like the right path, especially with all her internal monologue and moments with Bill. Hot sex scenes though! And these chapters were actually decent. I did REALLY like that Amber held some control and her and bill are still strong and the end of these, which I didn’t think would be the direction the author was going to take. Jack being tied up is fitting and hilarious. but overall this feels like an enjoyable fan fic more than cannon imo
There is another author who is going to write Ambers Cabin trip that was eluded to in the epilogue by Witerinabox. Her account is RoleplayLiterate on literaotica. She’s got permission from both Writer and Avid. I follow her on Patreon, she’s an excellent writer! her work has been refreshing and usually feels more grounded and realistic which can be nice.
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Mine is voyeurism
Porn just doesn't feel truly voyeur anymore . Written word does
Plus my idea of realistic erotica is it should make sense acc in the universe irs written . Not ours
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I can't help but think this is now Sarah's theme song (fyi it's loud):
I take that back, this is her theme song:
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I take that back, this is her theme song:
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Both are very applicable! Her path to the dark side is beginning to become a slope of increasing angles. The 1st one describes her inner demons, and the second her thrill of exhibitionism.
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I agree, I've bounced off all of those who've tried to take up the mantle. None have captured the original spark of Avid's writing. Sadly. It would have been nice to see a conclusion of this series with Avid as the author.
I know there is some behind the scenes stuff with Avid writing with other people, who supposedly did most of the writing for him. I think it started off with him and another person before they parted ways due to different ideas? Then Avid bounced around with some other people before getting burnt out or whatever happened that caused him to stop writing. Maybe without help he couldn’t quite deliver? I was excited to see where he took things and to see the anniversary gift.
Writerinabox I think did a great job. I think the wedding dress scene on the anniversary was meh, I’m bored of that trope. And the Chester/Lester knockoff was also kinda meh (I also think Lester is a very mediocre character which is probably an unpopular opinion here ) but overall I think Writer did the best continuation. But I go back and read Neighbor Chronicles every other day to daily just because I like the characters. I definitely enjoyed his chapters, and since we’ll probably never get Avids chapters I think it’s the closest we’ll get.
RoleplayLiterate I think will do a good job, in terms of quality of writing she’s one of the better authors I’ve read on literotica. She’s taking her time to make sure she does the characters justice and such.