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That's a hard one to find unless you know someone who has the patreon..he hasn't posted it anywhere other than there..Do anybody have NC redux 3&4 by Envoyuer
Seems Don wants a DARK ENDING..Eitherheor the person who's been writing the story since Alpha draft change of Dan tossing Lexter to SARAH walking him out..I don't believe Don is the writer of the last few chapters..Wording and sentenceI would add and justice served for the vilest of crimes. To be extremely clear on this topic: It would be a violation of a lot of Site TOS's as well as IRL laws, if minors were present. However my point was that without said characters present, it was just a room. A hammer isn't evil, but people can use a hammer to do evil things.
Edit: Furthermore if it had anything even remotely like that as content - I'm out and would not continue the story. It's why people got outraged when DS floated the idea of Lester "removing" the daughters from the picture. It was unnecessary and a far darker place than most of us would stand for. I still believe this was a mistake on his part; it's fine to provide knowledge that Dan and Sarah have offspring, but they don't need to be brought up in the story in any way other than thru oblique references; picking them up or who could watch them, etc.
I say it was failed comedy.Yeah, I was really hoping to see seeds being planted with the mother more but there really hasn’t been much, it needs a proper build up if its going to eventually happen.
That part was definitely a bit much lol, I cannot say I am a fan of all the SPH bits either but I know a lot of people in this genre like that stuff.
Just to say, I didn't think you were speaking with anything but the best of intentions and I did mention that I thought you were right, a bed is a bed, when empty before use. The symbolism was there but he is trying to shove Sarah's mind toward sex and his dick is more important than anything and she should have seen what was coming when he claimed his intentions for the night with Sarah. As far as Dan, I do believe that Lester also believed that he would get Dan involved as a spectator in the hall, office, and every other place. I also believe he would have been wrong but maybe Sarah would have protected Lester, not sure.I would add and justice served for the vilest of crimes. To be extremely clear on this topic: It would be a violation of a lot of Site TOS's as well as IRL laws, if minors were present. However my point was that without said characters present, it was just a room. A hammer isn't evil, but people can use a hammer to do evil things.
Edit: Furthermore if it had anything even remotely like that as content - I'm out and would not continue the story. It's why people got outraged when DS floated the idea of Lester "removing" the daughters from the picture. It was unnecessary and a far darker place than most of us would stand for. I still believe this was a mistake on his part; it's fine to provide knowledge that Dan and Sarah have offspring, but they don't need to be brought up in the story in any way other than thru oblique references; picking them up or who could watch them, etc.
With the repeated mention of Lester looking like he's going to have a heart attack, and Dan receiving some form of interest from outside girls, I fully believe in the end Dan will have his daughters, lose Sarah, and Lester will end up arrested or dead after everything. It's just how it's lining up in my opinion.Seems Don wants a DARK ENDING..Eitherheor the person who's been writing the story since Alpha draft change of Dan tossing Lexter to SARAH walking him out..I don't believe Don is the writer of the last few chapters..Wording and sentence
Structure is so different. Guess we all will see
Dan made a mistake in putting his wife at the disposal of another man, but they haven't been a team for a long time, and Sarah ran out of money, ran out of love (normal with most women). Now it's time to move on. I read the final chapter 33 again and didn't see anything about Dan using the new word (pineapple). Sarah and Dan agreed on this new word, but it was never used. It would be cool when Lester sent Dan to the author to have Sarah use the word (pineapple) so Dan wouldn't masturbate. I hope Dan fights with Sarah over the use of the girls' room. And in chapter 35, there will be more development for Dan (Sarah with unlimited sex, as we've seen constantly). I want to see their dialogue. I would be happy if the Sentinel employee called Dan while he was in the basement and realized he wasn't 100% by his voice. The woman is into Dan, so it's normal to look for him and find excuses to call.With the repeated mention of Lester looking like he's going to have a heart attack, and Dan receiving some form of interest from outside girls, I fully believe in the end Dan will have his daughters, lose Sarah, and Lester will end up arrested or dead after everything. It's just how it's lining up in my opinion.
It was actually used, I believe, when Dan came home and found them in bed together. He hesitated but finally said it and then pulled Lester off of Sarah and kicked him out of the house. Lester could have heard it there and easily figured out what it was and used it himself, this time in the house to stop Dan like Dan used it to stop Lester.Dan made a mistake in putting his wife at the disposal of another man, but they haven't been a team for a long time, and Sarah ran out of money, ran out of love (normal with most women). Now it's time to move on. I read the final chapter 33 again and didn't see anything about Dan using the new word (pineapple). Sarah and Dan agreed on this new word, but it was never used. It would be cool when Lester sent Dan to the author to have Sarah use the word (pineapple) so Dan wouldn't masturbate. I hope Dan fights with Sarah over the use of the girls' room. And in chapter 35, there will be more development for Dan (Sarah with unlimited sex, as we've seen constantly). I want to see their dialogue. I would be happy if the Sentinel employee called Dan while he was in the basement and realized he wasn't 100% by his voice. The woman is into Dan, so it's normal to look for him and find excuses to call.
Still curious how it ends. Looking forward to part 9 on lit.I don't understand some situations, like the betrayals. I was reading other series (Corruption of a Geek Goddess Pt. 1 to 8, missing the ending in part 9). Why do authors make the husband so weak, even though the guy enjoys this strange side (there are some characters who create rules, a certain limit, together with their wives, and these are betrayed)? I hope that in the end Mark leaves Chelsea, and she lives her life, simple as that. Dylan should leave her because he doesn't love her, he just wanted to destroy her relationship. It's no wonder he gave her to Cody too. Just Chelsea rejecting Mark and not using her free pass on him was the end. Mark has to find another woman.
That heart attack is such a real interesting plot pointWith the repeated mention of Lester looking like he's going to have a heart attack, and Dan receiving some form of interest from outside girls, I fully believe in the end Dan will have his daughters, lose Sarah, and Lester will end up arrested or dead after everything. It's just how it's lining up in my opinion.
Holy pop-ups batman! That site almost gave my device cancer. Is there any clean sites I can read this from?!Does anyone know this story?? If you read the last part posted part, I think I've read already somewhere and here the guy has changed the name of the characters.
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I've been wondering if Dan could have been feeling resentful when he found Sarah laying naked and wiped out on the couch, knowing that she herded him to the basement for the night. Instead she slept on the couch, HIS juices mixed with hers all over it. She may be under a cover but the whole situation was pissing him off, now that he was a few hours away from it and nothing sexual was happening. So, in his boy-like mentality (which Sarah will use when they argue about this) and his resentment, he called her parents and asked them to bring the girls back home now. When they get there and Sarah is so thrown and flustered, he feels vindicated but then they leave and the fight starts. They speak in hushed angry tones (any parent knows how this goes when you need to argue but you don't want the kids to hear it) and he slips and says something that starts to sound like he made the phone call. She gets him to admit it and she tells him he is just a small, little worm masturbating, boy. She starts to pack some things and tells Dan that he gets to watch the girls. He asks where she is going. She tells him to a real man, with a real cock, who knows how to fuck her and eat her, two things Dan, her loving husband, NEVER mastered.I am ambivalent with TA34.
The chapter itself isn’t bad at all(and sex is very good), it’s more me that I don’t like how Dan is portrayed than the writing itself. But I suppose it’s only me.
I don’t get Sarah’s parents play in Lester mind here, though.
Anyway the sex talk(because it was sex talk, be clear about that) of Sarah claiming her desire to be impregnated by Lester, could be an interesting twist in the story that the Lester I know would exploit very quickly.
But we all know, DS will write zillions of chapters before arriving to a point.
Use ad blocker broHoly pop-ups batman! That site almost gave my device cancer. Is there any clean sites I can read this from?!