Agreed with a lot of this. I loved the return to an earlier TA. A scene that's 95% main characters and their progression .
-First time we get both Sarah and Lester telling each they love each other. I enjoyed the intimacy. Amazing how much better the sex scene is when there's meaning to it rather than a slut who just fucks anything and everything
-i enjoyed the daughters role in this. It was amusing how he played on the basement troll trope and made it literal.
-I really hate the incest angle. Just more proof that DS is literally ticking off kinks from his subscribers wishlist.
-the mention of Richard was a red flag. You just know that's gonna be a another guy she fucks
What I hated was Sarah's lack of defense of Lester to Dan. Him just kicking him out, with her taking the children to the backyard so they wouldn't see them. SHE invited him. SHE said she wanted him in her marriage bed. SHE should have told Dan, "you can be upset with Lester, but he was there for me, where have you been lately? He gave me a ride home, comforted me after the worst day ever, and even showed solidarity with me. I invited him. It was me, I will tell him he needs to go, but you will not kick him out like that Dan. You, please, take the girls outside and I will ask Lester to leave, ok?"
In my humble opinion, that is. Lord knows she has defended Otis to Dan saying it was her fault, not his, to Dan. Why not her Chicago Husband?
Other than that, Loved it, great job Don.
*As far as the stairs, I get what you are saying totally, but I think it was just supposed to be a fantasy fiction thing, like the ogre under the bridge (as Don has shown he has some table top RPG experience - he knew too much about AD&D in the gaming chapter, well except a player getting fucked in middle of it, that just never happens to gamers, like EVER.).