FYI Here's the second chapter of the undercover story (now titled Double Cross)
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I thought that until we had the combination of Lester telling Sarah he would never be a part of her family (more or less) as he would not be accepted by her daughters. She replied with kissing him. Then in this latest chapter Don didn't have Sarah say lets bring the kids to Grandma or take them out so we could have privacy with Lester. She said "Ditch the kids." I wracked my brain trying to, but have never heard a mother, that I have known or met, that would use the terminology, ditch the kids.
People change.
Verisimilinude
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It's an alpha so wording could/can change, but actually she was quoting a message he sent. That's a big distinction in my book. It shocked me too when I first read it and then had to go back and look and thought, ofc that's something Lester would say.
“A message from Lester. He says if we agree he wants us to ditch the kids and have him over for dinner tomorrow night,”
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You are right it could be paraphrasing but DS was deliberate in placing the "A message from Lester." before the message. If she was paraphrasing I would have expected something more casual like "He said he want's us to ditch the kids," or "We need to ditch the kids, he's coming over for dinner." something like that if it was meant as Sarah's words vs Lester's words. But again it's a rough alpha draft, so the whole thing could change, time will tell.
nope, not even sure where the site was, to be honest. I'm generally more of a story guy with imagination so, outside of Japanese NTR films, I don't usually look for straight nude shots but I had just finished the last alpha and then somehow found her and she sort of fit...serendipity.
Well, reverse image searching shows that she is a only fans model named All About Diana
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Verisimilinude
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Getting close to that time. Any bets on if the alpha changes significantly or not much at all? I gotta believe at least one new scene is added, if not two.
I'm a simple man, just wanna see the day end and possibly some reflection the day after. That will nicely close off the chapter.
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Didn't like the Richard scene at all. Seems so out of character for her. She's portrayed as an intelligent person, except when getting fucked, and in this case was a thought out attempt and offering herself as the payment? She knows there is no way back into the hospital due to everyone knowing what happened. Certainly no officer position. Just an awkward scene. The ending scene needs some polishing. Perhaps a better ending to the chapter?
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Like I said before, she is on her way to the hospital, stops and calls Lester, because she has been feeling guilt, like she is cheating on him, and tells him her plans. He says, no don't go there, you can't trust them. Just meet me at my room.
New stuff to my idea:
She shows up, he asks if she wants to do something about it all. If so she has to ask him what she "knows" he is capable of. She breaks down and asks him to help her with revenge. He does so, she agrees to keep it a secret between them as Dan will absolutely not understand them and their actions here. Lester and her commit some evil, online, and she gets turned on committing the revenge and they fuck for some hours during the day. Lester tells her that he will be calling her about helping them out and to get Dan on board. He tells her as long as she goes along with it, she will love it. Dan, maybe yes, maybe no, but they could act like it is basically Dan's fetish and therefore kind of his fault they are all there.
That is all, please get some E.S.P. bullshit going in which you get this idea in your head, Don. Or another one, just not the existing first half of the story, pleeeeeeeeeease!!!!
Really. that is all, now....oh, too late, should have checked, oh well...
Sometimes I wonder why I keep going back to read the crap this story has turned to.
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That's exactly how I feel, I wrote a few post above this one, how it boring. I how many times can you write about the husband losing, I mean losing at every thing he does. It's not just TA it's a pattern in all these super cuck stories. Even if the husband starts out with a little backbone they'll lose it out of now where and just want the wife to be happy. Then they just turn into super chucks. Rabble is big on this, and the way Don wrote TC its just the same pattern.iIn MS by Mr.Jakobs the spouse was written to where he left his woman because he couldn't handle it but two chapters later they were back at and he went from proud man to weak corner jerk wimp. Now she written as to be just a big as big a whore as she is that's about a weak as a man.I think it prolly started with NC how the husband always gets the L. I said in the past that these stories are written to where there's a hero .the husband and a villain is Mr big dick but I'm starting to think the real villain in these stories is the wife's.
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Like so many of us old timers, the investment in the story, the hope of seeing DS really concentrate on the story again, and just a desire to see it end.