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[Verisimilinude]

Yes, but surely there was a misunderstanding.

I didn’t wanted to say that is not clear in the story, my thinking is compared to the former unfolding, with this development coming out of the blue(if he wanted her to have his breed willingly he would not have found the pill in the dark web from the beginning).

I don't feel like it was "coming out of the blue" (but I can see how someone could feel/think that). DS started dropping hints for this in the Failed Threesome scene when Lester told her to say "Accidents happen" followed it up in chapter 32 when Lester told her that he wanted to get his operation reversed so he could knock her up. Those were both road signs for his "new" plan to get her to willingly have his child.

As I've said in a previous post it makes way more sense from Lester's pov to allow her to want to have his child, it would (theoretically bc lately she's been written as slowly losing any intelligent behavior) mean Sarah would not want to jeopardize another man getting her pregnant if she wanted to have Lester's child. This would take Sarah from unsuspecting victim to willing participant in the plan.

 

[GGCaesar]

I don't feel like it was "coming out of the blue" (but I can see how someone could feel/think that). DS started dropping hints for this in the Failed Threesome scene when Lester told her to say "Accidents happen" followed it up in chapter 32 when Lester told her that he wanted to get his operation reversed so he could knock her up. Those were both road signs for his "new" plan to get her to willingly have his child.

As I've said in a previous post it makes way more sense from Lester's pov to allow her to want to have his child, it would (theoretically bc lately she's been written as slowly losing any intelligent behavior) mean Sarah would not want to jeopardize another man getting her pregnant if she wanted to have Lester's child. This would take Sarah from unsuspecting victim to willing participant in the plan.

I disagree, I understood it as a way to justify the unexpected pregnancy not as a game changer. So imo is a sudden change and only done to have more chapters.

To be specific a change in character goals could be possibile, stories are not static, I don’t feel any problem in what you have written above indeed, but since here there is anything logic anymore I can only state this has nothing to do with story unfolding but to raise money.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I disagree, I understood it as a way to justify the unexpected pregnancy not as a game changer. So imo is a sudden change and only done to have more chapters.

To be specific a change in character goals could be possibile, stories are not static, I don’t feel any problem in what you have written above indeed, but since here there is anything logic anymore I can only state this has nothing to do with story unfolding but to raise money.

Discussion is always a positive Caesar. You mentioned it seemed "sudden or not logical." I can only speak on the facts of what's written-the sign posts are there and the foundation for the change laid-so to me it is logical. As for DS and what he might do to profit from his work, well I have no control over that and therefore don't really dwell on it.

 

[DarkStutzel]

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É exatamente assim que me sinto, escrevi alguns posts acima deste, como é chato. Quantas vezes você consegue escrever sobre o marido perdendo, quero dizer, perdendo em tudo o que ele faz. Não é só o TA, é um padrão em todas essas histórias de super cornos. Mesmo que o marido comece com um pouco de coragem, eles vão perdê-la de repente e só querem que a esposa seja feliz. Então eles se transformam em super manés. Rabble é grande nisso, e a maneira como Don escreveu TC é exatamente o mesmo padrão. Em MS do Sr. Jakobs, o cônjuge foi escrito onde ele deixou sua mulher porque ele não conseguia lidar com isso, mas dois capítulos depois eles estavam de volta e ele passou de homem orgulhoso para fraco idiota de canto. Agora, ela é escrita como se fosse uma grande prostituta, tão fraca quanto um homem. Acho que provavelmente começou com NC, como o marido sempre leva a pior. Eu disse no passado que essas histórias são escritas onde há um herói, o marido, e um vilão é o Sr. Big Dick, mas estou começando a achar que o verdadeiro vilão nessas histórias é a esposa.
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The Black Belt Affair

 

[DarkStutzel]

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[Psiber@mauvais]

With respect Caesar, hard disagree. He told you why he wasn't switching the pills, he wants her to do it willingly. Whether anyone likes that concept or not is immaterial because that will be the new arc, Lester corrupting her to willingly have his child with a secondary theme of trying to get Dan/daughters out of her life.

Where I will agree with you is that yes it's an opportunity for DS to continue the story and therefore continue to profit from the story.

For this to happen, Don cannot go two steps back. They should be up in the shower with Lester instructing Sarah on how to treat Dan. They need to to push. Lester needs to literally fuck her all the time. When Lester is there, Sarah is to tell Dan that Lester doesn't like Dan in their bedroom with them overnight. She firmly makes him go to the guest room (or the girl's room if he wants more of a child's room) and Lester tells him to lock it on the way out so they have some privacy. Then they are loud as hell all night. This is how he gets Sarah to treat him that way, he tells her it is humiliation for Dan's kink. She starts really getting into it and backs up Lester 100% of the time, like they are spouses talking to their child. Show a united front, as they say. Lester texts her to come over to his room to spend the night when the girls aren't leaving. When Dan says no, she tells him that Lester is the man of the house and his cock always comes first. Sarah stays firm, Lester leads the house (adults only), Dan falls deeper into a cuck personality and eventually starts to fuck around with the woman at work, to get his machismo back. Realizes she makes him feel like a real man and not how Sarah does, anymore.

In order for any of this to work, Sarah must fall into lock step with Lester, including no birth control. Anything less, like "that was bedroom talk" steps back two steps and sucks. I think I have said it here before: "That was bedroom talk" is the weakest plot driving line in erotica and most everything else.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I don't feel like it was "coming out of the blue" (but I can see how someone could feel/think that). DS started dropping hints for this in the Failed Threesome scene when Lester told her to say "Accidents happen" followed it up in chapter 32 when Lester told her that he wanted to get his operation reversed so he could knock her up. Those were both road signs for his "new" plan to get her to willingly have his child.

As I've said in a previous post it makes way more sense from Lester's pov to allow her to want to have his child, it would (theoretically bc lately she's been written as slowly losing any intelligent behavior) mean Sarah would not want to jeopardize another man getting her pregnant if she wanted to have Lester's child. This would take Sarah from unsuspecting victim to willing participant in the plan.

I agree she is thinking with her pussy most of the time, anymore, but I do truly believe that she has fallen for Lester, hard. She will stop taking birth control to have the baby of the man she now loves. I remember when my wife and I got married and she was driving hard to have MY baby. Unfortunately, her disability resulted in her not being able to carry a child and she was incredibly heartbroken at the time. I was, too, especially for her. I have never had a woman want my kid that bad before and it was an incredible ego stroke, to say the least -- coming from a man.
I believe Lester wants her to want his child to show that she loves him more than Dan now and she wants to give him what only she can give him. He will then have her deliver the news to Dan and then they will tell Dan they want to be together. Sarah will sign majority custody over to Dan, with limited visitation, just to be with the man she now loves. The man, who she cannot help being turned on by, no matter how gross. That comes with Love, more than anything else.

 

[Verisimilinude]

For this to happen, Don cannot go two steps back. They should be up in the shower with Lester instructing Sarah on how to treat Dan. They need to to push. Lester needs to literally fuck her all the time. When Lester is there, Sarah is to tell Dan that Lester doesn't like Dan in their bedroom with them overnight. She firmly makes him go to the guest room (or the girl's room if he wants more of a child's room) and Lester tells him to lock it on the way out so they have some privacy. Then they are loud as hell all night. This is how he gets Sarah to treat him that way, he tells her it is humiliation for Dan's kink. She starts really getting into it and backs up Lester 100% of the time, like they are spouses talking to their child. Show a united front, as they say. Lester texts her to come over to his room to spend the night when the girls aren't leaving. When Dan says no, she tells him that Lester is the man of the house and his cock always comes first. Sarah stays firm, Lester leads the house (adults only), Dan falls deeper into a cuck personality and eventually starts to fuck around with the woman at work, to get his machismo back. Realizes she makes him feel like a real man and not how Sarah does, anymore.

In order for any of this to work, Sarah must fall into lock step with Lester, including no birth control. Anything less, like "that was bedroom talk" steps back two steps and sucks. I think I have said it here before: "That was bedroom talk" is the weakest plot driving line in erotica and most everything else.

Well hopefully DS's words about "feeling bad for what he's about to put these characters through" means he agrees with you. What you are suggesting would certainly follow the core theme of this series-Netorare. This is the best setup for Lester to steal Sarah and cause emotional distress for Dan. However I think we all know it will likely follow the same format as earlier arcs, progress then retreat, progress and repeat.

I'm leaning towards the fact that Sarah won't get pregnant until the end chapters of the story. It would complicate things for the story if Sarah isn't able to have sex (yes I know women can still have sex when they are pregnant) but it would paint DS into a writing corner, limit her deviant behavior and locations, especially the closer she gets to having birth - ofc that's assuming DS keeps the story grounded in realism. Or maybe he wants to check off the pregnancy kink in the series as well. I was chatting with someone else about the story and had a wicked thought. What if in this new throuple era, there is a sleepover mix up and instead of Sarah being in the bed Lester ends up fucking Renee and get's her pregnant?

Come to think of it, I need to do a deep dive and make a list of all the kinks DS hasn't done in the series yet. We could make it into a game and see who matches the right kink for the right chapter. lol

 

[Emi_was_here]

I seem to be in the same boat as most people here. I was not into the Richard scene at all as I felt there was not sufficient build up with the character to make me care about seeing him get a scene but also it felt too ridiculous for Sarah to have been tricked like that when she is meant to be an intelligent woman. Even if she was offered her job back, there is just no way she could think it would be a good idea when she was caught by such a large group of people, her reputation is ruined there even if she got a high position.

I do like the new trouple angle as it opens up the chance for some progress to happen and start shifting the dynamic now.

 

[john_doe6711]

I agree she is thinking with her pussy most of the time, anymore, but I do truly believe that she has fallen for Lester, hard. She will stop taking birth control to have the baby of the man she now loves. I remember when my wife and I got married and she was driving hard to have MY baby. Unfortunately, her disability resulted in her not being able to carry a child and she was incredibly heartbroken at the time. I was, too, especially for her. I have never had a woman want my kid that bad before and it was an incredible ego stroke, to say the least -- coming from a man.
I believe Lester wants her to want his child to show that she loves him more than Dan now and she wants to give him what only she can give him. He will then have her deliver the news to Dan and then they will tell Dan they want to be together. Sarah will sign majority custody over to Dan, with limited visitation, just to be with the man she now loves. The man, who she cannot help being turned on by, no matter how gross. That comes with Love, more than anything else.

Yes but where would that leave her...ALMOST every mother's first maternal instinct is to fight as opposed to flight...their first instinct is to protect their kids so her giving him majority custody or the chance of her losing her kids all together seems like a stretch IMO..it will complicate things alot and descions will have to be made...

 

[john_doe6711]

Well hopefully DS's words about "feeling bad for what he's about to put these characters through" means he agrees with you. What you are suggesting would certainly follow the core theme of this series-Netorare. This is the best setup for Lester to steal Sarah and cause emotional distress for Dan. However I think we all know it will likely follow the same format as earlier arcs, progress then retreat, progress and repeat.

I'm leaning towards the fact that Sarah won't get pregnant until the end chapters of the story. It would complicate things for the story if Sarah isn't able to have sex (yes I know women can still have sex when they are pregnant) but it would paint DS into a writing corner, limit her deviant behavior and locations, especially the closer she gets to having birth - ofc that's assuming DS keeps the story grounded in realism. Or maybe he wants to check off the pregnancy kink in the series as well. I was chatting with someone else about the story and had a wicked thought. What if in this new throuple era, there is a sleepover mix up and instead of Sarah being in the bed Lester ends up fucking Renee and get's her pregnant?

Come to think of it, I need to do a deep dive and make a list of all the kinks DS hasn't done in the series yet. We could make it into a game and see who matches the right kink for the right chapter. lol

I REALLY like that plot of a sleepover and he gets Renee all worked up and they have sex...the father isn't there and Sarah is awakened by the screams of her mom...would she join or be insanely jealous...

 

[john_doe6711]

Has any of the kemono patreons been updated yet..?

 

[john_doe6711]

That bad Tenant has me right now..

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Yes but where would that leave her...ALMOST every mother's first maternal instinct is to fight as opposed to flight...their first instinct is to protect their kids so her giving him majority custody or the chance of her losing her kids all together seems like a stretch IMO..it will complicate things alot and descions will have to be made...

I only brought that up because, yes, she would want to be near her kids and miss them terribly when they were not with her, but (and this is a mighty big but) she would not want Lester near them. Yes, she feels empathy toward Lester when he realizes that he would never be a close family member with her children, but she also has some pragmatism and that would lead her to know that her kids should not be near her and Lester, when they are together and if she split from Dan, Lester being near them would be a no go. The best chance she would have is for Dan to get majority, but not locking her out. She might make a deal to keep herself near her kids, without Lester around. If nothing else, grandparents could take custody and both parents could visit the children there. BUT (so very, very big) in a realistic world, there is no way to be with Lester and the kids both. His child is one thing but not Dan's.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

Has any of the kemono patreons been updated yet..?

I haven't seen any in about a week and I check about once a day or so.

 

[john_doe6711]

I haven't seen any in about a week and I check about once a day or so.

Thnx buddy..

 

[Verisimilinude]

Kinks not addressed in TA (to the best of my knowledge)

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• Anal
• FMF
• Pregnant Sex
• Breeding (But boy has Lester been trying)
• FF
• Incest
• Orgy: gangbang, train, etc
• DP
• Air Tight
• Erotic Horror (though some might argue this whole story has been a horror show)
• BDSM
• First Time (can't see this one happening)
• MM (Can't see this one coming up either)
• Crossdressing (come on tell me you don't fancy seeing Lester in a dress and high heels)
• Transgender (unlikely but possible)
• Fetish: such as watersports, other bodily fluids, food, objects, etc
  

Feel free to add to the list, I'm sure I'm missing something.

 

[poodles]

Has this ever been made into a game?

+1 to this. Any word on development for anything for TA? I’m kinda surprised we haven’t had a VN for it yet.

 

[NEOhioDude]

Kinks not addressed in TA (to the best of my knowledge)

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• Anal
• FMF
• Pregnant Sex
• Breeding (But boy has Lester been trying)
• FF
• Incest
• Orgy: gangbang, train, etc
• DP
• Air Tight
• Erotic Horror (though some might argue this whole story has been a horror show)
• BDSM
• First Time (can't see this one happening)
• MM (Can't see this one coming up either)
• Crossdressing (come on tell me you don't fancy seeing Lester in a dress and high heels)
• Transgender (unlikely but possible)
• Fetish: such as watersports, other bodily fluids, food, objects, etc

Feel free to add to the list, I'm sure I'm missing something.

Breathplay/asphyxia is about all I can think of. You had me laughing at "seeing Lester in a dress and high heels"

 

[Minscnboo]

Kinks not addressed in TA (to the best of my knowledge)

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• Anal - Bet its coming...
• FMF - Wouldn't it be a feather in Dan's hat if its with Trisha, Sarah and him?
• Pregnant Sex - Once she's knocked up
• Breeding (But boy has Lester been trying) - He certainly has, though he knows he can't until she agrees or he uses his now "back-up" plan
• FF - Its really odd that Sarah and Dan have NO friends. None. Might make this a challenge. Unless the FMF with Trisha
• Incest - Not an interest to me, though the FMF and FF could in a twisted way happen.
• Orgy: gangbang, train, etc - This depends on whether Lester gets Sarah to agree to stop the pill. I could see it happening at the theater.
• DP - I can see this happening in the theater, or D&D groupies
• Air Tight - I can see this happening in the theater, or D&D groupies
• Erotic Horror (though some might argue this whole story has been a horror show) - I could actually see this as just that
• BDSM - Not my cup of tea, but may make it there.
• First Time (can't see this one happening) - I think it depends on what is defined as First Time (Anal, DP, GB, FMF, FF)
• MM (Can't see this one coming up either) - I hope not. Remember that non-Don from some time back? Shook everyone.
• Crossdressing (come on tell me you don't fancy seeing Lester in a dress and high heels) 'nuff said
• Transgender (unlikely but possible) - Would need more of Don's probe shots for acceptance?
• Fetish: such as watersports, other bodily fluids, food, objects, etc - Hm. Maybe? A bit of rimming long time ago...

Feel free to add to the list, I'm sure I'm missing something.

"Breathplay/asphyxia is about all I can think of. You had me laughing at "seeing Lester in a dress and high heels" DITTO