Honestly i find liking your IF story more than the actual story, especially Terena.
The way she's just a slut who f*ck everybody is so hot.
Terena is too erotic to be tied down only to khativ and the lord.
Thank you for saying it.
I thought if I removed the antagonists, none of the girls would let out their desires, so having this Lust Wave, as well as the corrupted curse from the Demon King, would lead the girls to the 'right' path of becoming whores.
Of course between all 3 girls, Terena is the oldest one, who not only had sex before the game started, she was also the only one at the time of the incident to be old enough to have sex for her background.
The other two were still underaged, so I didn't want to cross that line here, as it's not a TH thing to do Loli Sex, not to mention Rietta is a devoted (if not a stubborn) nun, so she would likely not have sex early anyway.
I liked your story so far..., but maybe create someting with the lord alive and with some "modification" withe the oficial history coul be great..., my honest opinion.
I would love to see something in the lines you are writing about Arika and the lord..., with more "spicy".
I can see your point.
Normally in any NTR, a superior man (not necessary always an antagonist) would show up with a big dick to the girl and win the girls heart and/or body.
And while the Council of Bonner have replaced the 3 original antagonists in control, they are still less evil that the other 3, as they don't have any connection to the Demon King at all, and they don't want to have anything to do with the Lust Monsters.
Not sure how to "modify" the story, like keep the Lord alive but kill the High Priest and NOT have Khativ being 'born' or just killed.
Not sure how all that could happen.
That being said, this is an What If story, where none of the original antagonists are here to screw up Kurt's life and steal his harem, and tell us a story how it could end, if Kurt and the girls could even could still get their happy ending without those 3 to get in their way.
If you think about it, it's like a timeline was made to see if Kurt could get a happy ending, without the 3 to screw him over.
In normal circumstances, they would live a normal life, and that would be boring, hence the Lust Wave Incident to affect the girls and turn them into sluts.
It may not live to your full expectations, but i'll hope you'll enjoy it regardless.